VN Ren'Py Adam and Eve Inc [v0.3] [AdEvaGames]

[Temp3]

It's a kinetic novel disguised as a game.

 

[Phoenix1177]

Very nice start. I like the story and most of the scenes look good. The english dialogue can feel a bit monotone to me, like every character is the same. And the story jumps around a bit too much for me from character to character, but that could just be a taste thing.
For now, I hope too seen it continued. The story feels somewhat original and I like the characters. I do wonder where the actual story will go because for now the family feels pretty overpowered without the need for much struggles.

 

[King-Daddy]

Couple of suggestions, I only barely started it, but:

Would be nice to have the game default to English at 1st launch rather than German, not that clicking on "Einstallungen" is difficult if one knows a bit of German, but not everyone does.

Maybe consider a different font/size for the text? That is unless you prefer to split some descriptions on multiple screens/renders, already found at leats a couple like this



EDIT: nvm got the answer to my question by playing, lol.

In todays world, game could open in arabic and noone should have any issue in changing the language. Just take a print, ask your AI of choice where to click to change language and done

 

[Darkbreed]

In todays world, game could open in arabic and noone should have any issue in changing the language. Just take a print, ask your AI of choice where to click to change language and done

Google translate also existed b4 that.

 

[Remarius]

Neither solutions being that relevant to the point that it really should start in English. Its not my mother tongue but in terms of the market that's a fairly obvious point.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

THX-


Edit:
The name and relationship part took so long; my pre-game chubby became unchubby. TMI?

 

[Here4Food]

I don't remember all this from the bible.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

I don't remember all this from the bible.

You must have read one of the other 450 known versions of the Bible. That just the ones in English alone.

 

[Ricthequick]

In todays world, game could open in arabic and noone should have any issue in changing the language. Just take a print, ask your AI of choice where to click to change language and done

What if I told you Ich kann Deutsch lesen (sprechen nicht so gut)? That doesn't make my point less relevant, English is the language these AVNs should default to, it's pretty simple.

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

 

[Overlord070]

What was bro smoking when he wrote that description?

Bro was smoking an AI.