Another batch of typos
1) Exploring the Desert and encountered a Nymph
While travelling the empty deserts you follow a mirage of a forest and, though appearing much closer than it was, find it eventually. But the very second you step one foot inside the green area the snap of vines makes it clear you are under attack. Your face a nymph!
travelling should be traveling
'find it eventually' should be 'you find it eventually'
'you step one foot' should be 'you set one foot'
'Your face' should be 'You face'
2) encountering a mummy in the desert, at the end
this starving mummy has lost its rationality and act on instinct.
act should be acts
3) sex with an insect girl
At the direction of the bug your movements turns into thrusts. Going ever faster and faster building up her excitement, stimulating her. She reached below and started playing with the your throbbing testicles. Causing you to reach your peak in an exploded into her waiting depths.
turns should be turn and join the first two sentences
'She reached' should be 'She reaches' and merge the last two sentences as well.
started should be starts
exploded should be explosion
eg
At the direction of the bug your movements turn into thrusts, going ever faster and faster building up her excitement, and stimulating her. She reaches below and starts playing with the your throbbing testicles., causing you to reach your peak in an explosion into her waiting depths.
4) Encountering the flame spirit in the desert
Since that area is a quite the importance you swiftly unbottun and look look to see what causes the sensation.
'a quite the importance' should be 'quite important so'
unbottun should be unbutton
5) Encounter the spirit (for an experience bonus) in the desert
Having found shelter in an old cave-ruin you fall into a deep slumber. When you at last awake a strange apiration is ghastly riding dick.
apiration should be apparition
ghastly should be ghostly
add your before dick
eg
Having found shelter in an old cave-ruin you fall into a deep slumber. When you at last awake a strange apparition is ghostly riding your dick.
6) Encounter the scorpion girl in the desert
But any thoughts of combat quickly abates when she herself freezes in surprize.
drop the word 'herself'
surprize should be surprise
7) Encounter Lilith in the Plains
Behind you stands a unreal looking female. Beastial and fiercely attracting, like the very incarnation of lust without love.
'a unreal' should be 'an unreal'
Beastial should be Bestial
attracting should be attractive
8) An event in the plains for food/cloth
You come across some of the stone tables that litter the Plains. These seem to revolve around strange "debates" between unlikely parties.
This tablet read:
'stone tables' should be 'stone tablets'
read should be reads, I have seen this error in a few other events as well
9) Encounter the sea/river creature in the plains
You could push her, but would need the blessing of Gaia to a creature of that size,
'to a creature' should be 'for a creature'
10 ) Initial meeting with Tiamat
Earlier, at dawn, you saw some strange light in the outskirt of the plain's southern region, near the end of two of its great rivers.
light should be lights
11) Visiting Lilith in the Succubus Home
Lilith looks at you with needs.
needs should be need
She seems a mix between total feminine beauty and beastial power.
beastial should be bestial
12) Finding the bow Arash in the plains
By a closer look and test the bow proves still functional.
should be
A closer look and test of the bow proves it is still functional.
13) Encounter an Oni in the jungles
She look upon in utter happiness at the prospect of both a mate and a fight.
'look upon' should be 'looks upon you'
14) Encounter a Giant in the Mountains
While traveling the northern mountains a shock in earth and a surprised shriek makes it clear that you've run into one of the giants of this land.
...
Looking human in all but her enormous size, the race is able of speech, but due to timidness are rarely heard utter a single word.
.... are other sentences omitted as being ok
'shock in earth' should be 'shock in the earth'
'but her enormous' should be 'but their enormous'
'able of speech' should be 'capable of speech'
'heard utter' should be 'heard to utter'
15) Finding a rune stone in the Mountains
Gása synir reistu stein þenna eptir Gunnar, bróðurson.
Which you translates to:
translates should be translate
16) Encounter Freia and she gives you her quest
This time she isn't even wearing any armour, and seem dressed for indoor living more than anything.
seem should be seems
'for indoor living' is awkward but correct, I would suggest just 'casually'
17) Encountering the site to build the fairy hollow
It would costs 300 in wood and 100 in stone
costs should be cost
The village site in the Plains has the same error, so this may be a general issue
18) Encounter the squid girl at the plains
While walking by on of the great rivers you suddenly find yourself by a large mass of water, maybe an ocean. Down by the water your foot is suddenly caugth by a strange mass, and you find yourself faced with a needy squid-girl.
'by on of' should be 'by one of'
caugth should be caught
19) Fighting a manticore in the plains her attack says
The manticore flies close trying to reach you with it deadly claws, the poisonous tail looming behind.
it should be it's or her
20) Plains, first meeting with Sarai, second page
The woman has never seized her vixen smile, and respond with a silken voice.
seized should be ceased
respond should be responds
21) second meeting with Sarai
Sarai seems neither devastated or at all likely to lower her engaging smile. She merely respond with a calm voice:
respond should be responds
Also
You calmly explain the priestess, that you awoke shielded
'explain the' should be 'explain to the'
22) Once Sarai is at your camp, her general description
Her dark har falls softly over her equally dark eyes. Her clothes does little to hide the blessings she's been granted,
har should be hair
does should be do
23) Sex with Sarai at the camp
With an expertise that can only be learned by experience the mature lady swiftly place you both in the optimal position and has your dick pressed against her lubricated breast.
place should be places
Soon both her hands have clapsed you member and the her breats oberflowing from each side she sends repeated wave of pleasure into you through her perfect technique.
'clapsed you' should be 'clasped your'
'and the her' should be 'and with her'
breats should be breasts
oberglowing should be overflowing
wave should be waves
eg
Soon both her hands have clasped your member and with her breasts overflowing from each side she sends repeated waves of pleasure into you through her perfect technique.
Later
Soon she pistoning herself upon you in hypnotic movements of ecstasy.
'Soon she pistoning' should be 'Soon she is pistoning'
Feeling the joint rush building orgasms building Sarai guides you into the classic position where you can see her to the greatest of advantages
change first 'building' to 'of'
24) In 'Stats and Perks'
Fertile 4: You are the hero of Gaia who almost impregnates girls every time.
This says the opposite of what is meant, move almost after girls, so
Fertile 4: You are the hero of Gaia who impregnates girls almost every time.
Bugs
My first human daughter was born to Venus, and her sexual fetish was other girls. The option when flirting is
"Make another daughter arouse her. "
and if you select it
"You convince another of your daughters to come in..."
Trouble is I have no other human daughters here. So either
- this needs to be varied to allow you to bring in one of the matriarchs
or
- you cannot advance her until another daughter is born
or
- limit it so your first daughter cannot be into girls
Also, you can choose the sex act 'Threesome' with her when you have no other daughters
.
