VN Ren'Py Adored by the Devil [v0.13] [Empiric]

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DarkOs31

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So MC is obviously a pure blood or maybe of "origin" blood.
Was his bloodline ever mentioned?
 
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still incest free and will be until mc and kate will get married and lil devil comes alongside.
 
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Likes:
  • Whenever a choice has a tooltip that provides more context. If anything, this is underused.
  • Respects players' likes & dislikes, like the huge boob toggle. I wouldn't mind a bit more granularity. Zuri's and even Nina's definitely fall under the "too large" for me. But I don't have any good suggestions on how to implement this, and a choice per character or size would be too much.
  • The variety in body shapes and sizes.
  • The little notifications showing the passage of time.
  • Lilith, the yandere demon.
  • Sasha saying, "Maybe he'll change his mind once he gets to know you better". It's probably too soon to tell, but this indicates that there's a slower route for Hannah. I mostly rejected her because she seemed too attached for only knowing the MC for a few days.
    Sasha puts this in doubt later, but I'd be open to a 2nd chance with Hannah after learning what makes her tick.
    Note: Seeing how possessive Hannah keeps acting despite no kiss doesn't make me inclined to go for a potential 2nd chance after all.
  • Great writing with Vivienne's furniture and having Kate volunteer the MC, only for there to be no furniture and a competing invitation from Hannah.
  • Anna <3
  • Emily eating her sandwich. It's nice seeing it disappear across several renders, instead of her swallowing it in one go.
  • Lilith's face reveal, though I half expected her to have mandibular fangs.
  • Felix being a little bitch.
  • Interactions with Grandpa.
  • "She took your seal and didn't even leave her number?" :ROFLMAO:
  • It's funny that with today's knowledge we say that Jurassic Park (1993) had bad science, but at the time it was lauded for its accuracy. I love callouts like these that aren't just a pop culture reference.
  • "I heard that stoners love cake." :ROFLMAO:
  • I enjoy how matter-of-factly Faye is. Also, kitsune are lovely.

Nitpicks:
  • If you don't have phone sex with Nina, the MC's phone battery still gets depleted. This would've been a great opportunity for some slight variety in how the story plays out.
  • Some environments feel empty because of a lack of decorations. For instance, Katherine's house and Isabella's living room. Too clean, doesn't look lived in.
  • More of a funny remark... Nina says that the MC likes low body fat, but her tits and ass are huge compared to Lilith's. Tits are mostly fat.
  • There is some doubt in the early game if the MC just flirts with everyone or if he is impacted by the leaking power of the family. We are told that he isn't entirely immune to certain influences.
  • When the MC changes his mind, I think this is a missed opportunity for a player choice. For instance, dancing with Katherine. This is such a minor thing for the MC to flat-out refuse, certainly if a swig of wine is enough to change his mind. For me, this would've been better if the MC just said, "Give me a swig of that, and you've got a deal.", or if him changing his mind was left to the player.
  • Katherine calls the MC very, very naughty, but I've been rejecting most interactions/LIs. This lets me think that my choices don't impact anything but the relationships themselves. Toward Katherine, my MC has been teasing but otherwise well-behaved and keeping a certain distance.
  • Vivienne drinking the MC's blood needs more context. Is his blood addictive to her? Does it create some kind of esoteric bond? Why does it indicate trust and/or submission? We know vampires as predators, so it's weird to think of one as submissive to the person she drinks from.
    Note: This does get explained later but is confusing in the moment. As it is explained, it shows a lack of long-term thinking on the MC's side. What happens to Vivienne after his mission, or if he dies?
    Note 2: Vampires can detox from the blood dependency. Still, from a consent point of view, it's very weird to have a sexual relationship with Vivienne, who's also addicted to the MC's blood.
  • The choice about dating an OF/IG model... Neither? Just for practical reasons. The constant taking of pictures and looking for "moments", or the vanity that comes with thousands of adoring fans... Sounds exhausting!
  • When Hannah leaves for Jessica's, she says, "That's all?" before a fade to black to the next scene. This is relatively sloppy when not on her path.
  • Mike and Isabelle discuss a vampire. Mike is surprisingly open to the idea of vampires being real. I can understand Isabella's lack of disbelief after having seen a demon.
  • Very meta, but I would love intertitles saying which chapter or update I'm on. This is a personal preference because I like to gauge how a game improves over time and which part I'm currently playing. I could be in chapter 2 or 5, and there's no way of telling.
  • It would make sense for Zuri to make a move on the MC before deciding to do OF or IG. As it is, she goes with the MC's preference before that happens. If the MC turns her down, then she can just do whatever she wants.
  • I also have a small issue with LIs making life choices based on the temporary presence of the MC in their lives. Everyone knows he's only there temporarily and that he's doing a job few others can, and that's too important to give up.
  • Hannah isn't allowed to see the MC while he's sick, but Kate even wakes him. I get that Kate wants to prevent Hannah from seeing any demonic properties, but I wish this was used more for effect. Kate would feel a bit conflicted about lying, I think.
  • The MC knows about the weed cookies, but this wasn't telegraphed. He could've overheard them discussing it or even smelled the cookies. A single render of the MC walking out the door while the women were discussing the edibles would be plenty.
  • "About the Hannah's problem..." There are quite a few typos like these.
  • I'm surprised to see Nora say that her mother is twice the MC's age. I was believing that demons were long-lived. I assumed this because vampires usually are, and vampires are the weakest form of demons in this world. It feels weird that Nora's mother is so young.
  • Why is the MC pulling the boat by the stern instead of pushing it?
  • Beatrice... I could've done without the many closeups of her flabby ass. It's a shame; the dev was on the right track with the early game choices.
  • And relating to choices... The last few chapters have a severe absence. We get an MC who unapologetically flirts before we get a choice about getting intimate with an LI or not. This is weird behavior, and it would make more sense to give players some freedom of choice on how they interact with the women. Personally, I find it alienating to see the MC flirt with an LI I don't find attractive for whatever reason.
  • The MC lists all the women in his life and about "attending" to two of them each day of the week. A joke, but it would've made more sense if the game calculated how many of those women the MC was actually seeing intimately.
    It doesn't help that Miu acts as if the MC is actually fucking all of them. What if a player only picked Miu?
  • It was said that incest doesn't count for demons, especially pure ones. Then why is Athena calling Lucius a freak for being in love with Nora?
 
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ZakMacc

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Want to ask, sorry if my english is bad. Which Li can be included in harem? i want to focus semi-harem path first then single path Li
 
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