no, I was out of line thinking it would make for a fun review.
The art of your VN is breathtaking, the characters are well developed, the comedy is there and it's good, and the secondary characters really add to the story. I also like how interwoven everyone's story is,so that the other love interest still play a part in it instead of magically disappearing, and that the slower tempo can be a welcome variation on the game genre.
My favorites so far are the teacher and the coach(even if he's a bit creepy lmao) but all love interests are pretty great.
Again, I'm sorry, my earlier review lacked the positives as well as tact