- Feb 18, 2019
- 11
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I agree with Brasileirinho. The game is technicaly very good, BUT: You want to make an Immersive 3D Game.
Okay, great.
I'm sure you're a fan of classic videos games. How many "immersive games" are good ? Not so much, and most of them are... Erf. Not efficient ? For example: Ubisoft games, Rockstar Games. How many $$$$$$ ? The link ? Fckng Open Wolrd / Sandboxe.
I can give you more linear or less open world games with a fuckin' immersion: Destiny 2, Elden Ring, Last of Us. And in the "indie games", the old but gold Faster Than Light, Dead Cells, Horde, Day Z.
I see a developper wandering to make an immersive game by the technical / Unreal Engine / Graphic way. AAA ambitions ?
But you forgot what's important in a game: Rewards, Music, Dialogues...
I like the concept of your game, and hosnetly I loved the 2 NSFW scenes you made.
There's few ideas:
1 -> Bicycle was a bad idea. Awfull. Animation, speed, control... You should increase speed ++++ or add a boost. Hosnetly We wouldn't be shocked too see a MC not Bicycling whan riding (is it an english sentence ? x) ). For my Opinion, you could just put the teleport option, wich is very effective.
2 -> Add some NPC, I mean static blue / pink dolls (like in Lust Theory in the background), but without hit boxe. Just visualy. Don't if it's possible, but could add some "life" and immersion. Add then "special" dolls for the futur characters: neighbours hous are too empty.
3 -> Natalie need to be fixed. She's floatting in a Stephen King style when you're talking to here.
4 -> build an effective reward loop.
5 -> Add more funny / absurd sentences. We would be more in the flow.
Honestly GG, you made it yourself, i'm really impressed. I think you could make a great game, between Home Together /and Monolith Bay.
Okay, great.
I'm sure you're a fan of classic videos games. How many "immersive games" are good ? Not so much, and most of them are... Erf. Not efficient ? For example: Ubisoft games, Rockstar Games. How many $$$$$$ ? The link ? Fckng Open Wolrd / Sandboxe.
I can give you more linear or less open world games with a fuckin' immersion: Destiny 2, Elden Ring, Last of Us. And in the "indie games", the old but gold Faster Than Light, Dead Cells, Horde, Day Z.
I see a developper wandering to make an immersive game by the technical / Unreal Engine / Graphic way. AAA ambitions ?
But you forgot what's important in a game: Rewards, Music, Dialogues...
I like the concept of your game, and hosnetly I loved the 2 NSFW scenes you made.
There's few ideas:
1 -> Bicycle was a bad idea. Awfull. Animation, speed, control... You should increase speed ++++ or add a boost. Hosnetly We wouldn't be shocked too see a MC not Bicycling whan riding (is it an english sentence ? x) ). For my Opinion, you could just put the teleport option, wich is very effective.
2 -> Add some NPC, I mean static blue / pink dolls (like in Lust Theory in the background), but without hit boxe. Just visualy. Don't if it's possible, but could add some "life" and immersion. Add then "special" dolls for the futur characters: neighbours hous are too empty.
3 -> Natalie need to be fixed. She's floatting in a Stephen King style when you're talking to here.
4 -> build an effective reward loop.
5 -> Add more funny / absurd sentences. We would be more in the flow.
Honestly GG, you made it yourself, i'm really impressed. I think you could make a great game, between Home Together /and Monolith Bay.