Quetzzz
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The updated prologue is a big improvement.
I did encounter a bug where the MC will say he got his dick sucked, even if I chose not to visit the hole in the wall.
Looking at this code, all responses need to be re-examined.
I hope the rest of the game gets a similar treatment, because the difference in quality is staggering.
Some tips/suggestions:
I did encounter a bug where the MC will say he got his dick sucked, even if I chose not to visit the hole in the wall.
Python:
if brave_points >= 1 and prowentweav:
mc "(Man, today was amazing!)"
mc "(Not only I got my dick sucked, but I also got some kind of date with Elena!)"
mc "(Can't wait fo...)"
elif prowentweav:
mc "(Man, today was amazing!)"
mc "(Not only I got my dick sucked, but I also got some kind of date with Elena!)"
mc "(Can't wait fo...)"
elif brave_points >= 1:
mc "(Man, today was amazing!)"
mc "(Not only I got my dick sucked, but I also got some kind of date with Elena!)"
mc "(Can't wait fo...)"
else:
mc "(Man, Albert is such a dumbass...)"I hope the rest of the game gets a similar treatment, because the difference in quality is staggering.
Some tips/suggestions:
- When we see a woman who's bent over and showing her pussy, we don't know it's the MC's mother.
I'd like to suggest making this clear before the "look away" button appears. - If the player chooses to look away, also show a different render. They indicated they have zero interest in eyeing his mother's snatch, and this should be respected.
- The deer and boars in the hunting minigame make little sense. The MC can't carry them anyway. I think it's better to only let him hunt small animals and birds.
- There are a few anachronisms, like minutes and seconds. I haven't seen a single clock, so I don't think this civilization keeps detailed track of time.
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Python:
"Thanks Nora, I'm gonna go now": scene u1s8i62 with dissolve frm "Alright then..." scene u1s8i63 with dissolve m "I'll see you later" # Should be spoken by the mc frm "..." $ frm_1_no = True -
Python:
"I'll deal with it later": scene u1s8i62 with dissolve frm "Alright then..." scene u1s8i63 with dissolve m "I'll see you later" # Should be spoken by the mc frm "..." $ frm_1_no = True - There are still many typos, but the script is already much better than the previous version I played.
