A few thoughts.
The renders are okay, nothing spectacular, a few awkward poses.
The writing is mostly solid, at least it's understandable English. The banter and forced humour, the dialogue in general feels unnatural and not in a good way, just really awkward in places.
A few times I thought I had missed something, but no, there simply wasn't any explanation for example how Rick and Michelle act towards Alison without asking any questions or anything. And that really wasn't the only time where the story just appeared to have jumped forward a bit.
Maybe in general, not so much dialogue and more storytelling.
Now, 126 kills. in one engagement, that number is ridiculously high. This is video game level of killing, not even action flic level of killing.
Okay, this seems like damning with faint praise or maybe even an actual completely damning review, but this isn't the case.
This game is off to a solid start. It has promises and real potential, because you can already see where the dev wants to go AND that it will be good if he manages.
First game, first release, of course there is a lot of room for improvement, but with this one, you can actually expect it will come.