That was a good start, admittedly the scene at the start was hard to watch, just like it was in "The Things We Do For Love", it's just a necessary trigger for the particular story, as horrible as it is. There's a lot of potential here in the story, and I think it's needless to say that I really like the models and renders are rather good too
I think if there's some things I'd like to point out, then it would be;
1. some bits of dialogue like "you 2", I wouldn't use internet language in dialogues, I prefer the use of full words
2. the loading time between scenes seem rather long, I don't know if it's because of the tyranno build though.
3. this is more of a question, but why does some dialogue appear in the middle of the screen and overall in pretty random places, and not in the box itself?
Other than that, a very solid, a very good start, I'll be sure to follow this project, I really do appreciate dark, multi-choice stories, and seems that this is a neo-noir story, which is definitely something I like, hence why I love "His Legacy" and "Depraved Awakening"
Keep up the good work
@OneManVN!