One question: can we avoid relationships with women we don't care about, or the MC decides with his (small) head and the LI are forced onto the player? Will it be a mindless fuckfest?
I don't know what kind of story you want to write. Realistic? Or foolish where things happen for "reasons"?
About Miranda: IMHO the MC should have a chance to avoid her (if imposed, Miranda's attitude in the workplace would be liable to be reported for sexual harassment). I don't like not having the choice on how to respond her, because the MC is so passive by default. The fact that it's the first day and she's a superior doesn't justify that kind of attitude, unless the MC has a submissive disposition. I'm not even interested in a femdom to maledom path. I really hope Miranda is avoidable (not skippable, but completely avoidable, for who really don't want to have anything to do with her apart from a normal and boring working relationship).
Other than that, it's not a bad start, although you could probably save time by making fewer renders of the MC's face, it feels like they take up half the time on screen. I can't say anything about the English, it's not my language, but I haven't had any major problems reading and understanding.
I'll wait a few more releases to see what direction the story will take to decide whether to move on or not. You should create the game you want and enjoy, the important thing is to be clear with users about what they should expect from it. Good luck dev!
