- Thread starter BadMustard
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It might be a good idea to add a lesbian tag since it seems that this is unfortunately going with the good ol' "every woman is bisexual and ready to fuck any other woman in sight" trope, with the MC even encouraging them to go fuck other women without him. On the same note, Christie going full slut with A, even after finding out the reason she was there, was really disappointing. It completely negates the whole point of taking her out of that escort job.
- Aug 19, 2018
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in all honesty it just more about the Choice to be able to refuse that was my issue rather then who its with. what if i come across someone i dont like in the story for example? i also wouldve refused the DP option with the twins as a result it made me lose some interest in the twins. but yeah just so we're clear you should make the game you want. any game i enjoy playing mostly having choices to refuse or avoid certain characters or kinks is what i like in these avns. however if to many lovers arent optional it'll just feel kinetic. but yeah over all game isnt bad.
So far you have given the best feedback so far on this site, thank you for that
I will be making some changes based on your feedback and adding a some menu options at least for the Kinks (not the band).
Some post sex scene dialogue is needed for other areas of the story. But that an easy(subjective) re-write to a non-sex conversational scene.
I'm just enjoying the making process since this is the first time I have made anything like this.
Almost Dead... Good name but I'm sad that it refers to the English language in the script instead of the MC, please oh please run your scripts through something like Google Word, Microsoft Word, Grammarly, or hell Notepad++ has a Spell check module that you can use after configured.
Also, fun note, I did some quick Google searches when it comes to head on collisions, both cars doing 70mph would leave a 25% survival rate, and best odds of survival would be if both cars were doing 43mph or lower, the 150mph the offending car was doing would have left a red stain in many places and unidentifiable meat paste to be cleaned up.
Also, fun note, I did some quick Google searches when it comes to head on collisions, both cars doing 70mph would leave a 25% survival rate, and best odds of survival would be if both cars were doing 43mph or lower, the 150mph the offending car was doing would have left a red stain in many places and unidentifiable meat paste to be cleaned up.
Sadly yes I forgot to spell check all the changes I made that will be corrected in the next release.
I have modified the story
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Well, if you ever need a secondary spellchecker, I'm pretty much a half-assed spelling nazi and don't mind helping. Ahahaha
I tested a chapter 4 (authorized) alpha version on my phone (samsung s10+) and the quick menu at the bottom was a pain, so I moved to the left side in a column I think much better!! I'll post a screenshots later today.
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Captured on a Samsung s10+
p.s. the small trash can icon can be used to delete any saved file Auto, Quick or Manual(1-...) which seems to work fine in android
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BadMustard Is the game going to be romance, harem or something different? I'd actually prefer a solo with Sara. **cough hint hint cough** Ahahahaha
Sorry to say Sara was only a side quest character.
Solo would have to be a whole new story.
I don't know. I'm not really interested in those when the girls are doing the touchies with each other. But, I'll make do if you add her to one. lol
Almost dead? Which how I felt after suffering the poor grammar and ridiculous misspelling. And the never ending POINTLESS DIMLY LIT HOSPITAL ROOM EXCHANGES!!!
BadMustard Enjoyed your game so far! Hopefully, you might reconsider having Sara as a side quest and bring her together with Q, A and Christe!