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Ren'Py Altered Destiny [v0.14.2b] [ICCreations]
Elhemeer
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I'm really liking this game however I'm confused that none of the family seems to notice the artifact tattoo that the MC currently has is the same tattoo as the MC in the past. I get it's been what 20 years but you'd think they'd realize the MC in modern times looks exactly like their friend from the past and has the same tattoo.
Sure they may not believe in time travel but they'd have to admit the MC was a big part in their life in the past. Saving Olivia and all. Then to have him disappear that night. Only to have their son/nephew to look exactly like their friend and have the same exact tattoo. Sure coincidences are a thing and all. But that's a lot of them. I personally think they should be more suspicious.
However at the pool party, I personally do believe Olivia was suspicious when she asked the MC about her scooter in the shed. "When she asked if something in the shed got his attention." To me it was like she realized he recognized that scooter. So she brought it up.
Sure they may not believe in time travel but they'd have to admit the MC was a big part in their life in the past. Saving Olivia and all. Then to have him disappear that night. Only to have their son/nephew to look exactly like their friend and have the same exact tattoo. Sure coincidences are a thing and all. But that's a lot of them. I personally think they should be more suspicious.
However at the pool party, I personally do believe Olivia was suspicious when she asked the MC about her scooter in the shed. "When she asked if something in the shed got his attention." To me it was like she realized he recognized that scooter. So she brought it up.
Elhemeer
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She would have been my guess to figure it out first even without the Scooter clue, so I have no problem believing this has got her neurons stirring ...
OWSam000
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I think he will knock up Penny too in the past and have another daughter/cousin. It will be epic!I mean, I personally am hoping he ends up as his and Natalie's dad, and that he ends up Kim's dad too.
Also, he can knock up his grandma in the past so he will have a new aunt/daughter.
Can he be my dad too? I dunno if they will go that route because patreon dollars over doing what you love sort of thing.I mean, I personally am hoping he ends up as his and Natalie's dad, and that he ends up Kim's dad too.
I hope he becomes his own grandpa.
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Finally starting to catch up from v0.11c to the latest. (Was gone for over a month visiting family and then was swamped with errands that backed up while I was away.) I know the MC has confidence, but I'm not sure the Aquaman Junior outfit is the move for the party. He says he doesn't usually care about how he looks... and I guess he still doesn't care?
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only thing he cares is what's between mommy's legs.Finally starting to catch up from v0.11c to the latest. (Was gone for over a month visiting family and then was swamped with errands that backed up while I was away.) I know the MC has confidence, but I'm not sure the Aquaman Junior outfit is the move for the party. He says he doesn't usually care about how he looks... and I guess he still doesn't care?
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Depending, in the throes of pleasure they all might be called "Mommy".And Auntie's, and Grandma's and daughter/cousin, and best friend, and best friend's mom, and sister, and, etc etc etc
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yay time traveling is back, bad: dev forgot to remove links to pool party had done it.
anyways nice little update. some sex )not with main cast), plenty of funnies (well dumb things by mc)and bj from cuz. game kept informing that there's lewd with mommy 2 but alas no.
anyways nice little update. some sex )not with main cast), plenty of funnies (well dumb things by mc)and bj from cuz. game kept informing that there's lewd with mommy 2 but alas no.
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TheGuruMage
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Fun story, great characters, but terrible grammar. Almost all homophones use the wrong version/word, most of the commas are in what seems to be the wrong spot...
Honestly it's so bad it's funny and it's hard to tell if it's on purpose just to add to the comedy or if the author is just that bad at English.
EDIT: also, can we get a cheat code to unlock the obviously cannon incest mode/patch? The mega links always glitch and fail for me.
Honestly it's so bad it's funny and it's hard to tell if it's on purpose just to add to the comedy or if the author is just that bad at English.
EDIT: also, can we get a cheat code to unlock the obviously cannon incest mode/patch? The mega links always glitch and fail for me.
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Punctuation isn't grammar, but your point is taken. I'm pretty sure these mistakes are legitimately unintentional. I don't think he really has any dedicated editors to help him out, although it's possible that he feels it's "good enough" and doesn't want any further help to fix these. There is actually a surprisingly large number of writers (even of just of "standard" fiction) who demonstrate these same types of problems. Honestly, I think it's a failing of education more than an individual issue.
With no actual stats to back this up, mind you, I would venture a guess that at least half the native-English-speaking population worldwide has no real understanding of homophones like its and it's; their and they're (but do get there correct); or your and you're. It would at least be more understandable for less common homophones like phase and faze or pour and pore; but I think poor instruction leads to apathy and thus continued mistakes in general. ICCreations is just another casualty of bad education.
TheGuruMage
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Yeah, one of the worst ones is whatever he uses instead of awful, but most people nowadays focus more on knowing enough to graduate than on understanding the material.
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