VN Ren'Py Altered [v0.5] [Mr.J]

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Danv

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drastically needs proofreading
punctuation all over the place, shit ton of uncapitalized names, misspellings here there, "thoughts" formatting is inconsistent as fuck (italicization, name labels and "thoughts" prefix - sometimes it's there, sometimes it's not... cuz doing separate character define to display thoughts and sparing everyone headache is for plebs, right?)
all of it is not just bad by itself - it makes whole game look cheap(er) and half-assed
 
Enigemm

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Played the updated version of the game and would like to submit three bugs I found along with a set of improvements to the grammar and spelling. I rather not post to such an open thread as lately, I find too much negative criticism that doesn't help the developer in any way whatsoever. Just some folks who don't even pay for the game yet take it upon themselves to bitch and moan about what is or isn't there. I believe in criticism, especially if it it entitled.
I've checked on the main page but do not see a discord link there so I'm not sure if you run a server. If you do, PM me and I'll give you my contact details that I can submit what errors I've found playing the latest version.
 
Mr.J_Dev

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Enigemm said:
Played the updated version of the game and would like to submit three bugs I found along with a set of improvements to the grammar and spelling. I rather not post to such an open thread as lately, I find too much negative criticism that doesn't help the developer in any way whatsoever. Just some folks who don't even pay for the game yet take it upon themselves to bitch and moan about what is or isn't there. I believe in criticism, especially if it it entitled.
I've checked on the main page but do not see a discord link there so I'm not sure if you run a server. If you do, PM me and I'll give you my contact details that I can submit what errors I've found playing the latest version.
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I don't really use any type of online social media, I'll shoot you a pm and you can send it through there if you'd like.
Thanks for taking the time to do this, I really appreciate it.
 
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MadMoonMan69

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I have to thank you for a great game! I am about to replay it for the 4th time. Do you have any sort of schedule for update release? Gettin' a bit anxious for a new fix! :cool:
 
Mr.J_Dev

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MadMoonMan69 said:
I have to thank you for a great game! I am about to replay it for the 4th time. Do you have any sort of schedule for update release? Gettin' a bit anxious for a new fix! :cool:
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I'm glad you're really enjoying the story. Unfortunately, I don't have any type of release schedule. I'll usually make a post when I'm closer to being done with the update, but as of now it will still take a bit longer.(Not too long hopefully)
Thanks for the support it really helps! (y)
 
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Mr.J_Dev

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I'm sorry, this update is taking longer then my previously stated release window.

The update is coded and I already fixed all the errors I could find. There are just some renders I need to redo since they look really bad. Once they're done, I going to give the story, a final go through.

I should have it up sometime on Monday.

Again I'm really sorry for all these delay's. Thank you all for your patience.
 
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Mr.J_Dev

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It's finally here, see how chapter 7 unfolds now!

I did manage to compress it and the Android version is back to normal as well.

Literally posting this as I'm out the door for work so only one download link for each type is up for now. Didn't have time to submit a ticket yet. I'll be doing that as soon as I get home.

Hope you all enjoy this new update.

Also check out the preferences tab for two new options. That'll help with tayloring the sexual content to your preferences.

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Edit: These link have the fix to some of the bugs that were popping up.
 
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Altered [v0.5] [Mr.J]

NOTE: If you have any missing images or bugs, use this bugfix here.

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JayDub47

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Mr.J_Dev said:
It's finally here, see how chapter 7 unfolds now!

I did manage to compress it and the Android version is back to normal as well.

Literally posting this as I'm out the door for work so only one download link for each type is up for now. Didn't have time to submit a ticket yet. I'll be doing that as soon as I get home.

Hope you all enjoy this new update.

Also check out the preferences tab for two new options. That'll help with tayloring the sexual content to your preferences.

Windows-
Mega

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Mega


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Mega
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I had two images go missing, one in the elevator, and in the demo with the goblin girl, the guy getting the sword(?)
otherwise, I enjoyed it, having fun with more ladies is always a good time
 
Mr.J_Dev

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JayDub47 said:
I had two images go missing, one in the elevator, and in the demo with the goblin girl, the guy getting the sword(?)
otherwise, I enjoyed it, having fun with more ladies is always a good time
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Sorry for the inconvenience, I'll release a fix for it as soon as I can later today.
 
Mr.J_Dev

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Alex5280 said:
During the goblin girl part of the demo, none of her dialogue was showing up, just the dialogue for Jonas.
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Mr.J_Dev said:
This should fix all the bugs I've been made aware recently. I will post new links for the android port since I'm not sure how I would go about patching it. I will submit a ticket for fresh links with the fixed version.
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I apologize for the inconvenience, this should fix that issue.
 
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File "D:\other stuff\Altered-0.5-win\Altered-0.5-win\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 275, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "D:\\Altered-0.5-win\Altered-0.5-win\renpy\main.py", line 492, in main
renpy.game.script.load_script() # sets renpy.game.script.
File "D:\\Altered-0.5-win\Altered-0.5-win\renpy\script.py", line 310, in load_script
self.load_appropriate_file(".rpyc", [ "_ren.py", ".rpy" ], dir, fn, initcode)
File "D:\\Altered-0.5-win\Altered-0.5-win\renpy\script.py", line 888, in load_appropriate_file
self.finish_load(stmts, initcode, filename=lastfn) # type: ignore
File "D:\\Altered-0.5-win\Altered-0.5-win\renpy\script.py", line 525, in finish_load
check_name(node)
File "D:\\Altered-0.5-win\Altered-0.5-win\renpy\script.py", line 501, in check_name
raise ScriptError("Name %s is defined twice, at %s:%d and %s:%d." %
ScriptError: Name ('game/Characters.rpy', 1705263868, 1) is defined twice, at game/Characters.rpy:3 and game/game/Characters.rpyc:3.

This is the error I get after down loading and applying the bug fix when I try to open the game... game doesn't even open just this appears in notepad
 
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