VN Ren'Py Alternate Worlds [v0.0320] [Motkeyz Games]

[Radical_Dreamer]

With all due respect, I disagree, because what you're saying now is just a clichéd answer, but it doesn't solve any problems... Of course, this is your game, you're right about that... However, you chose to make a game based on choices, so it's inappropriate to point out how much extra work these choices require. This was your decision, you have to take responsibility for it... However, the biggest problem among the commenters is still the kind of interactions you made between the mother and her son. Forgive me, but no matter how much you claim that there will never be anything between them, the current content still upsets a large part of the players. Without any malice, if it's really as you say, then you urgently need to remove even the teasing scenes, not even a vague rendering of the boy looking at his mother. Don't push players away because of a stupid idea that someone thinks is funny... However, if you still want to do it, that's your decision, but accept the consequence that you're alienating fans... And the stupidest answer to this is to say: If you don't like it, play another game... That's never good for a game developer. You agreed to appear in front of the audience with your game, and then it means that you get good and bad reviews, you have to be able to handle that... Peace...

This is an absolutely horrible take. The game is free to play and people support it by choice because they like the direction it's going in. Outside of the dev possibly doing polls or getting ideas from his paid supporters, he owes absolutely nothing to us. We have no right to demand anything of them, just as they have no obligation to take our feedback into account (though them being active in this thread means they probably read the reviews and take inspiration or feedback from us).

So yes, they absolutely have the right to say kick rocks if we don't like the game. So if you don't like it, move on.

Plain and simple. This entitled attitude is so shitty. Move on if you don't like it.

 

[MiltonPowers]

I read your comments guys, but I think some of you underestimate the work behind every choices or conditions that is add in a VN. Every time you give a choice to the player ''story wise'' it double the work and split paths. 1 scene become 2 and become 4... means LESS content overall just to please everyone. When you go watch a movie or read a book (except special book), you do not have the choices of what the Main character decide to do or side character get involved in something, you follow the story that is presented to you even if you like the choice or not.

I can understand some may be ''hurt'' in their feelings on some choices I present to them, but in the end guys, it is only a game. If it is not fitting your desires, just play something else that is more appropriate to your expectation in term of story. I have my vision of the game, if you like it, play it and enjoy! If not, play something else that is more suitable for your liking. I am listening to many comments and give you optional choices, but I will never be able to please everyone. I have a story to deliver, it is not a love simulation game, it is simply a Visual novel. Have a good day all.

For my 20c, I don't have a problem with a dev doing the game he/she wants to do. Using the threesome scene as an example, you obviously wanted that to be forced, but why give the player a choice to say no to dinner. If the player doesn't like that character, they get to say no thanks, but then have a WTF moment when she turns up and brings a friend anyway. If there hadn't been a fake choice and just a "I'll be back for dinner and bringing a friend" then less people get upset.

I also really don't like the movie/book analogy. I play AVNs because they are NOT books/movies. Unless they are kinetic, they do give me a degree of control over the MC (or why be allowed to rename the MC). When I don't have some control then I may as well read a book or watch a movie, which would be much better than a AVN, as I don't have to wait for staggered updates to finish it.

I have no problem with the son/mom scene, the player should not be able to control the people around the MC. They will do their things, but it would be good for the player/MC to have options with how to react.

 

[Dessolos]

For my 20c, I don't have a problem with a dev doing the game he/she wants to do. Using the threesome scene as an example, you obviously wanted that to be forced, but why give the player a choice to say no to dinner. If the player doesn't like that character, they get to say no thanks, but then have a WTF moment when she turns up and brings a friend anyway. If there hadn't been a fake choice and just a "I'll be back for dinner and bringing a friend" then less people get upset.

Id also like to add onto this. If a choice isn't clear what it is going to lead to like the dinner threesome choice ( it wasn't to me) give the player another out by being able to refuse it during the dinner scene. You don't have to create another lewd scene for a solo sex scene. But just find a way to end the scene without sex even if it's done quickly. Even tho I would of said yes to the threessome even tho I don't like them as im just saying yes to everything in this one. Having it forced onto me annoyed me as I don't like surprise threesome when I said yes initially thinking it would be a solo sex scene.

 

[Motkeyz]

Id also like to add onto this. If a choice isn't clear what it is going to lead to like the dinner threesome choice ( it wasn't to me) give the player another out by being able to refuse it during the dinner scene. You don't have to create another lewd scene for a solo sex scene. But just find a way to end the scene without sex even if it's done quickly. Even tho I would of said yes to the threessome even tho I don't like them as im just saying yes to everything in this one. Having it forced onto me annoyed me as I don't like surprise threesome when I said yes initially thinking it would be a solo sex scene.

The threesome scene was needed to implement this specific part of the story. The fact that even if not invited, Gemy decide to join in because she care about the MC. I thought at first doing a cut after the dinner but again I had to place some information here and there that would have been missing if I skip that scene. It was needed because the MC was put on a position to accept the new alternate worlds. Now that those characters have been presented we can skip some part of it in the future. But of course some scene will be imposed in some situation, even if the majority will be optional. I NEVER doubt someone will want to skip a threesome.

While completing the French, translation I already modified some part of the last 2 scenes, maybe not as much as some want but it was adjusted. This scene is also needed to understand Benny character and his future development.

 

[Dessolos]

The threesome scene was needed to implement this specific part of the story. The fact that even if not invited, Gemy decide to join in because she care about the MC. I thought at first doing a cut after the dinner but again I had to place some information here and there that would have been missing if I skip that scene. It was needed because the MC was put on a position to accept the new alternate worlds. Now that those characters have been presented we can skip some part of it in the future. But of course some scene will be imposed in some situation, even if the majority will be optional. I NEVER doubt someone will want to skip a threesome.

ah I didn't catch that might need to replay that part , then. I knew the first threesome was needed for the story just didn't notice it in the 2nd one. But reading this I can actually see how it is needed for story telling even if I didn't see it myself.

 

[OnlyFriend]

Just download this game,
And seeing devs comments about sharing plans

Sharing really ? Nah not my thing
When you allowed sharing in your relationships, in the future they will fuck each other behind your back usually
I also guess NTR will be planning, the reasons is "make sense for the story" devs will soon say that

Already seen this roadmap before

Uninstall not even played

 

[Motkeyz]

Just download this game,
And seeing devs comments about sharing plans

Sharing really ? Nah not my thing
When you allowed sharing in your relationships, in the future they will fuck each other behind your back usually
I also guess NTR will be planning, the reasons is "make sense for the story" devs will soon say that

Already seen this roadmap before

Uninstall not even played

If you read my previous comments, I explicitly said there will be no NTR in my games. It is not something i like anyway so why is it always bring the top of any conversation?

Here is what I said: Again I will mention it, to anyone that like NTR, do not support my game because you will be mad in the long run. I will never force NTR on anyone in my game. It may have sharing at some point but will be optional. Sharing is NOT NTR.

Nobody force you to like the game or play it, you grab it for free and make assumption and comments on something you NEVER PLAY!

 

[Dunking_Donuts]

If you read my previous comments, I explicitly said there will be no NTR in my games. It is not something i like anyway so why is it always bring the top of any conversation?

Here is what I said: Again I will mention it, to anyone that like NTR, do not support my game because you will be mad in the long run. I will never force NTR on anyone in my game. It may have sharing at some point but will be optional. Sharing is NOT NTR.

Nobody force you to like the game or play it, you grab it for free and make assumption and comments on something you NEVER PLAY!

I have a question: you have two games on Steam, and will you add Russian language versions to both of them? I'd love to buy them and play them because I really like them, but the downside is that you only have one language version for now.

 

[Motkeyz]

I have a question: you have two games on Steam, and will you add Russian language versions to both of them? I'd love to buy them and play them because I really like them, but the downside is that you only have one language version for now.

Right now, on Alternate Worlds, there will be French, Spanish, Russian, Chinese, Portuguese, maybe Italian if I get in contact with someone and maybe German for the next release. As for Timestamps chapter 2, I just wish it become available before we talk on any extra work on translation for it, but yeah when it is out we can check this out of course.

 

[Rockero_69]

The Ultimate Choice
As you delve deeper into both worlds, you'll face critical decisions that will shape your fate. Will you return to the loving arms of your dedicated wife and family, reclaiming the life that, though filled with its own trials, brims with warmth and genuine affection? Or will you stay in the alternate world, basking in wealth, independence, and the unconventional pleasures that come with it?

Why not, a third option, where the MC is a true hero and unifies the worlds, whether he can jump between them and thus become a Pokémon Multiverse Master, in which he catches them all (of course all those who are initially presented) or manages to make them all fall in love/corruption and convince them to go to his universe or bring the other girls to the new universe, with this he remains the Pokémon Master with a universe as his home, one of love or one of lust depending on which is the choice, old = love, new = lust
Greetings and luck Motkeyz

 

[MiltonPowers]

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Hi everyone, concerning the translations addition to Alternate Worlds, it is doing great.

I receive so many great offer for fan translation, in next release for the silver tier we will have, Spanish, Russian, Chinese and French that I'm testing right now. Portuguese is also on the work and maybe Italian will join later. Thanks to marcosdrummond™, Troffim and N.K, for their hard work in it.

It may not be perfect on next release for Silver tier but you guys can test it out and we will adjust everything for the Release 4. Also a more compressed version have been asked, right now I use loose less compression that give me around 35-40% I may have to crank that a little to cut on the size.

Have a great day!

MOTKEYZ

 

[JESparrow]

Is this family orgy game? Cause it totally feels like it. Everybody is half naked, everyone's flirting with each other, everyone's openly talking about sex, everyone's jerking of to each other

 

[Vishal326]

I just wanted to say I absolutely love this game. It’s amazing, and I really enjoy everything about it.

 

[Njoiboi]

Before I continue playing...
Does the MC eventually find out that his son and his wife... ?
Can I beat the crap out of my son or kick the wife to the curb and tell her to fuck off?

I have absolutely no desire to play another VN where the MC is a complete idiot who doesn't notice anything.
And even if he does find out something, he still smiles and accepts it - I'm so tired of these games.
Especially not after his wife's statement, “making sure everyone is fed and happy.”

So, spill the spoilers, what can I expect, can I uninstall the game?

 

[Dessolos]

Before I continue playing...
Does the MC eventually find out that his son and his wife... ?
Can I beat the crap out of my son or kick the wife to the curb and tell her to fuck off?

I have absolutely no desire to play another VN where the MC is a complete idiot who doesn't notice anything.
And even if he does find out something, he still smiles and accepts it - I'm so tired of these games.
Especially not after his wife's statement, “making sure everyone is fed and happy.”

So, spill the spoilers, what can I expect, can I uninstall the game?

I don't recall the wife doing anything bad other than in the last update with letting the son watch but the dev said they won't do anything because of pateron / incest rule. It's just more teasing.

 

[WARETZ]

Before I continue playing...
Does the MC eventually find out that his son and his wife... ?
Can I beat the crap out of my son or kick the wife to the curb and tell her to fuck off?

I have absolutely no desire to play another VN where the MC is a complete idiot who doesn't notice anything.
And even if he does find out something, he still smiles and accepts it - I'm so tired of these games.
Especially not after his wife's statement, “making sure everyone is fed and happy.”

So, spill the spoilers, what can I expect, can I uninstall the game?

Well... the majority here are surprised the way Pearl acted, regarding what you said unfortunately no(maybe in future updates?haha). The dev stated that there will be no sexual interaction between the mom and son, but I don't know about that. Then y add those last scenes on the latest update right? Then pearl hiding a secret to her husband(That she let her son watched his parents fucking suddenly?? at the same time she got turned on by her son who is watching them). After that the mother went to her son and saw him masturbating with her clothing and everything, hell I don't know anymore how will pearl act on the next update(maybe she will barge in immediately and suck his dick) That kind of an act of a "DEVOTED WIFE"? is red flag.


Truly I hate those kind of MC's and devs doesn't give you an option and just forces you to accept what's going on. At the end of the day it's a free game, the dev can do whatever he wants. I'm just stating how it went down.

 

[Dessolos]

Well... the majority here are surprised the way Pearl acted, regarding what you said unfortunately no(maybe in future updates?haha). The dev stated that there will be no sexual interaction between the mom and son, but I don't know about that. Then y add those last scenes on the latest update right? Then pearl hiding a secret to her husband(That she let her son watched his parents fucking suddenly?? at the same time she got turned on by her son who is watching them). After that the mother went to her son and saw him masturbating with her clothing and everything, hell I don't know anymore how will pearl act on the next update(maybe she will barge in immediately and suck his dick) That kind of an act of a "DEVOTED WIFE"? is red flag.


Truly I hate those kind of MC's and devs doesn't give you an option and just forces you to accept what's going on. At the end of the day it's a free game, the dev can do whatever he wants. I'm just stating how it went down.

yeah im curious as well about what Peral is going to do next after the update. ( tho unlike others I didn't hate the scene) sadly we have to wait for 2 updates cause the next 1 is back to the other timeline and that one im not interested in anyone yet lol.

 

[WARETZ]

yeah im curious as well about what Peral is going to do next after the update. ( tho unlike others I didn't hate the scene) sadly we have to wait for 2 updates cause the next 1 is back to the other timeline and that one im not interested in anyone yet lol.

Hoping she will act accordingly, thanks for letting me know!

 

[Motkeyz]

I made some modification on the dialogues to the last 2 scenes in the next version 0.0350 that will includes the translations when everything have been completed. It is clear, nothing will happens between them. You will not have your Wife stolen by Benny or anyone else in my game.

 

[MiltonPowers]

yeah im curious as well about what Peral is going to do next after the update. ( tho unlike others I didn't hate the scene) sadly we have to wait for 2 updates cause the next 1 is back to the other timeline and that one im not interested in anyone yet lol.

Another Peral?