VN Ren'Py Alternate Worlds [v0.0320] [Motkeyz Games]

[Mookys]

The tags 'voyeurism' and 'AI CG' are missing.

 

[Dessolos]

The tags 'voyeurism' and 'AI CG' are missing.

I think AI tag would be a bit missleading since the renders aren't AI just some of the animations but there is no AI animation tag sadly.

 

[Motkeyz]

OK I read so many things here that my head spins.

Anabelle never been MC'S daughter, it appear in one spread in early development but she never was IN GAME anyone else than MC' sister in law.

AI is NOT quicker to do than manual animation, it is different process but it take even more time than manual on some type of scenes. It is clearly a 50/50 on both side for those that like it and those that do not like it, I read it guys, but the real support feedback tell me other way Someone bring a nice comment saying that the AI was implemented in the scenes that will never been animated otherwise and he is right.

Again I will mention it, to anyone that like NTR, do not support my game because you will be mad in the long run. I will never force NTR on anyone in my game. It may have sharing at some point but will be optional. Sharing is NOT NTR.

Nothing will happens in between Perl and Benny other than subtle teasing, on Patreon because it is against their TOS. Nothing in this release is against their TOS. It is only part as the story as a characters development. Even if I know many want to see this, it will never happens on Patreon...

Thanks for the feedback guys.

 

[JustPeekin]

Should change the dev notes... Has her listed as his daughter.

 

[Dessolos]

I just finished playing the last 2 updates , this seems like a game I might be better off playing every 2 updates as I only really care about 1 of the timelines so far.

The only thing I really disliked was this and this is more of a me issue but i'll write my thoughts out anyways

I dislike how the 2nd sex scene with Gemy ended up being a threesome where I had no say in the matter if I wanted a threesome or not. I didn't mind the forced sex scene at the start of that chapter as it served it's purpose for story telling even tho I wasn't a fan of the threesome.

I get it im in the miniority where I dislike threesomes unless I just want to see it for content or really like both characters. But I find saying yes at the start of the chapter expecting a 1 on 1 scene to end up as a threesome when nothing told me it would be 1 prior to the dinner scene really annoying . Especially cause id have to go back to the start of the chapter to say no if I really wanted to avoid it. I think scenario's / scenes like that should offer another way to say no before the sex scene.

Now onto the current update. people had issue with AI but I liked the AI even tho it wasn't the best due to AI needs time to get better. It's still was passable. But I liked it because it was included in animations that wouldn't be created otherwise or for non lewd animation. I personally love non lewd animations as it adds a bit of detail.

About the son spying scene . I actually like it tho I get why others dislike it I do. For me personally sharing isn't a big deal in these games especially when they are optional. I just like the idea of sharing especially incest sharing since it's rare to see. I get it isn't everyone's cup of tea. Kind of sad that won't have a sharing scene because of a pateron cause man i think for a sharing scene it would be great. I haven't played many games where you can share your wife with your son.

since you on this thread Motkeyz I found 2 minor bugs I think from the previous chapter. I believe you have who should be speaking mixed up here. If you fixed it and it's just my save or not a bug and I missread the scene a bit my bad and sorry for tagging you but figure id let you know just incase.

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[Acsuka]

First of all, it would be really good if the author finally decided what kind of relationship Anabell has with MC. The developer notes definitely state that she is his daughter, but in the game it is clearly his wife's sister, i.e. MC's sister-in-law... Secondly, it was already felt early in the game that there was something more between the mother and son than what it should be. The conversation between MC and Perl in the bathroom revealed a lot about this. At that point, I knew for sure that there would be a problem. Let me tell you, I have played a lot of incest games, so I am not against fetishes. However, in this game, where the wife is presented as 1000% worshipping her husband, everything that has happened so far is inappropriate and disgusting. The last scene and Perl's monologue were creepy, I really didn't understand what the author was thinking with this garbage. He immediately trashed Perl's character with this, and I can no longer look at this woman as someone who unconditionally adores and loves her husband... This is indeed the borderline of incest content for me, and moreover, neither the current nor the future tag is included in the game. I would hate even the idea of sharing in this game. It simply does not fit into the context of the game. Some say that the game is on Patreon, so you have to be careful with the content. I think the author has gone beyond this, and if he plans any physical relationship between Perl and his son in the future, then he is suicidal and has played this game to death...

 

[MiltonPowers]

I get it im in the miniority where I dislike threesomes unless I just want to see it for content or really like both characters. But I find saying yes at the start of the chapter expecting a 1 on 1 scene to end up as a threesome when nothing told me it would be 1 prior to the dinner scene really annoying . Especially cause id have to go back to the start of the chapter to say no if I really wanted to avoid it. I think scenario's / scenes like that should offer another way to say no before the sex scene.

It doesn't matter even if you say no to dinner at the start, she will still turn up and you will still have a threesome.

 

[Dessolos]

It doesn't matter even if you say no to dinner at the start, she will still turn up and you will still have a threesome.

ah well I guess I can go and delete that backup save then

 

[BastarD3s]

However, in this game, where the wife is presented as 1000% worshipping her husband, everything that has happened so far is inappropriate and disgusting. The last scene and Perl's monologue were creepy, I really didn't understand what the author was thinking with this garbage. He immediately trashed Perl's character with this, and I can no longer look at this woman as someone who unconditionally adores and loves her husband... This is indeed the borderline of incest content for me, and moreover, neither the current nor the future tag is included in the game. I would hate even the idea of sharing in this game. It simply does not fit into the context of the game.

I completely agree with you. For me, the problem wasn’t the son appearing in that scene itself, but rather how Perl reacted to it. Up until that moment, she had always been presented as a character devoted to and in love with her husband, instead of feeling uncomfortable or rejecting the situation, she ignores it and even seems to enjoy it, which for me felt completely out of character.

If this kind of personality had been established from the very beginning, maybe it would fit. But introducing it out of nowhere at this point just felt inconsistent and ruined how I viewed her as a character. Honestly, this was my first time playing this game and I was really excited with the story, but instead of leaving me hyped for the next update, this ending just pushed me away from it.

 

[Dessolos]

I completely agree with you. For me, the problem wasn’t the son appearing in that scene itself, but rather how Perl reacted to it. Up until that moment, she had always been presented as a character devoted to and in love with her husband, instead of feeling uncomfortable or rejecting the situation, she ignores it and even seems to enjoy it, which for me felt completely out of character.

If this kind of personality had been established from the very beginning, maybe it would fit. But introducing it out of nowhere at this point just felt inconsistent and ruined how I viewed her as a character. Honestly, this was my first time playing this game and I was really excited with the story, but instead of leaving me hyped for the next update, this ending just pushed me away from it.

Yeah I may of liked the scene for the taboo nature of it. But when it comes to her character I have mixed feeling about it. On one hand it does feel out of character how and kind of not for me. Because on one hand she seems really devoted to her husband that is does come across a bit off. But then on the other hand I don't feel like ive gotten to know her well enough yet that I don't find it unreasonable she may have some things she secretly likes.

Especially given how open her mother is about her sexuality I wouldn't be surprised if there was things she liked that , she just never shared or explored yet. Even her kissing her mother on the lips as she was leaving did come across she has another side to her sexually I didn't know about too.

So for me it doesn't ruin her character but the scene it's self feels a bit forceful to me when she never really shown she may have another side to her. I felt with the scene her kissing her mother she was gonna start expressing / showing another side to herself slowly and not take a big step at once like she did in this update.

 

[WARETZ]

OK I read so many things here that my head spins.

Anabelle never been MC'S daughter, it appear in one spread in early development but she never was IN GAME anyone else than MC' sister in law.

AI is NOT quicker to do than manual animation, it is different process but it take even more time than manual on some type of scenes. It is clearly a 50/50 on both side for those that like it and those that do not like it, I read it guys, but the real support feedback tell me other way Someone bring a nice comment saying that the AI was implemented in the scenes that will never been animated otherwise and he is right.

Again I will mention it, to anyone that like NTR, do not support my game because you will be mad in the long run. I will never force NTR on anyone in my game. It may have sharing at some point but will be optional. Sharing is NOT NTR.

Nothing will happens in between Perl and Benny other than subtle teasing, on Patreon because it is against their TOS. Nothing in this release is against their TOS. It is only part as the story as a characters development. Even if I know many want to see this, it will never happens on Patreon...

Thanks for the feedback guys.

Thank you for the clarification. I'm glad this game was safe, and I was just surprised to Perl being super kinky suddenly(a voyouer spectating and especially that was her son) like it was another character, but as long as it's optional it's all good.

 

[sigvar]

Well, it doesn't matter whether or not there would be sharing with the son or not because of Patreon. All I know is that that whole sequence where he was watching them and what followed was a guaranteed boner killer. Already was kind of icked by the whole interaction where he was watching the grandmother.

I'd say at this point it is like we are being shown some guy squatting and grunting with horrid wet farts and the camera pans down and oh, guess it was just gas. Of course we wouldn't show someone taking an actual shit, because that wouldn't be allowed on Patreon...

Like seriously, there was no point in having all that detail between Pearl and Benny without some reasoning behind it. The scenes had to be created, time was spent rendering them, etc. Where there is smoke, there is fire and this update was pitch black with smoke.

 

[LadySpider]

Okay, I know AI is the cool thing, and mot of us have had fun using Grok to animate images, but I find doing it in VN's to be absolutely cringe, it looks out of place and awful. Are dev's so lazy they can't animate the models, so they have to rely on AI? I may be in the minority here, but I'd rather no form of animation to avoid the cringey looking AI imagery.

 

[Dessolos]

Okay, I know AI is the cool thing, and mot of us have had fun using Grok to animate images, but I find doing it in VN's to be absolutely cringe, it looks out of place and awful. Are dev's so lazy they can't animate the models, so they have to rely on AI? I may be in the minority here, but I'd rather no form of animation to avoid the cringey looking AI imagery.

I think it's fine here since it's not really used for lewd scene just mostly stuff that would almost never be animated anyways , in most games. I do agree it needs improvement ive seen some decent AI animations but I think it's a good way to learn and improve on it especially cause AI is only going to get better. So probably be a good skill to have in the future if they want to keep making new AVN's / games.

 

[SamualHand]

this game will be NTR at future...what a shame

You don't need to feel ashamed about it. No kink shaming, so if you like NTR, feel free to enjoy it!
Just not this game, I'm sorry!

 

[Zongor_2]

Very cool update Motz! Shame things end just when things look like getting super interesting with Paris...oh well, definitely something to look forward too, lol!! Bring on that MILF and GILF content dude! Only thing I ask is that you don't make us wait another 6 months for the next one! Know these things take time, but if you could streamline to quarterly releases that would be epic!! Anyway, thx again, luv your work and please keep going! Z.

 

[The Aligator]

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THATS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT!! THAT ONE IS THE GOAT, THE GOAATTTTT!!!!!!

 

[Thickgravy49]

Okay, I know AI is the cool thing, and mot of us have had fun using Grok to animate images, but I find doing it in VN's to be absolutely cringe, it looks out of place and awful. Are dev's so lazy they can't animate the models, so they have to rely on AI? I may be in the minority here, but I'd rather no form of animation to avoid the cringey looking AI imagery.

If they're so 'out of place and awful' why don't you help the 'lazy' dev out and do the animations, yourself?

 

[sigvar]

About the animations, they definitely show promise and are some of the better ones I have seen in a VN. That being said, the distance to the other side of the uncanny valley can be graphed almost as an asymptotic line.

 

[Maxirox]

OK I read so many things here that my head spins.

Anabelle never been MC'S daughter, it appear in one spread in early development but she never was IN GAME anyone else than MC' sister in law.

AI is NOT quicker to do than manual animation, it is different process but it take even more time than manual on some type of scenes. It is clearly a 50/50 on both side for those that like it and those that do not like it, I read it guys, but the real support feedback tell me other way Someone bring a nice comment saying that the AI was implemented in the scenes that will never been animated otherwise and he is right.

Again I will mention it, to anyone that like NTR, do not support my game because you will be mad in the long run. I will never force NTR on anyone in my game. It may have sharing at some point but will be optional. Sharing is NOT NTR.

Nothing will happens in between Perl and Benny other than subtle teasing, on Patreon because it is against their TOS. Nothing in this release is against their TOS. It is only part as the story as a characters development. Even if I know many want to see this, it will never happens on Patreon...

Thanks for the feedback guys.

Can't you make it incest without a patch like landlady or tenant and leave it as it is as most fans want to see how pearl relationships with Benny progress its not NTR if MC is Okay down the line if anything happens between Pearl and Benny or a threesome with them would be great. Looking forward to next update the graphics are top notch.