VN Ren'Py Completed AlwaysFan [v1.0] [AtemX Games]

[SpyderArachnid]

Was pretty good (went on the love path) and Emilie is a great LI right from the get go. Though, you mentioned this:

Yes indeed it will be possible to remain faithful to her and not end up with a harem if you wish.

Yet you forced us to cheat on her with Amanda already. Didn't give us any choice to say no, so we have to cheat on Emilie and can't remain faithful. Sorry not a fan of forced sex without any choice, just a personal pet peeve of mine is all. Others probably don't mind it (as most want a harem any ways), but it just bugs me when we have no choice in those matters.

Otherwise, it is written really well and an interesting story at least. Just wanted choices where it mattered (to me at least). Especially after the description says our relationships will be dependent on our choices, and we didn't get a choice for one. So not my cup of tea, but still wish you the best of luck. I know others will enjoy it.

Spoiler: NTR stuff

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[Demoness_Kiss]

trying the VN, barely started. AtemX

Albino people aren't THAT white...and they've red lips(like normal people, because blood and veins) XDXD

Remember the goth girl in the flashback about Emily being mocked by the pool? They've a slightly pinker skin that i think the HTML colour code would be #ffecea or something around that

That's all for now, i will comment again once i notice something else

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

so far loving the game , big plus that NTR is avoidable , and even possible to stay true with her

one small thing i did notice btw , is that the protagonists legs are a bit overkill in comparison to the rest of the body (almost like he dous 200 squads a day big )
but thats just a small thing

Spoiler: Body hair too

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Honestly I think he's just a very big guy and a very traditionally masculine looking character. I'm not really sure his legs are too far out of proportion considering the rest of him. His back is massive, his shoulders are incredibly broad and his arms are fairly big. He's probably the biggest HS male I've seen who doesn't look comic book proportioned

 

[KopengaKris]

Actually, only sharing/netorase is planned, but it could be other variant in the future. And itt will always be in the NTR route, not in the love/corruption route.

Thank you for your message! For your question, it comes mainly from the difficult past and from the submissive personality of Emilie who absolutely wants to be useful for the MC, who is the only person who has always supported her. That's why she agrees to do this after reading messages from fans. But since you're talking about cosplay, it's something that will happen (hence the fact that it's mentioned at the beginning of the story) very soon!

Thanks for the quick reply. I know that Emilie is crazy about the mc, she really loves him. Not really my point tho. Uploading photos of your naked "girlfriend" for everyone else to see makes more sence on a sharing route, not the love route. She could've just become a cosplay girl and not a nude model.

 

[Soulpuppet]

Thanks for the quick reply. I know that Emilie is crazy about the mc, she really loves him. Not really my point tho. Uploading photos of your naked "girlfriend" for everyone else to see makes more sence on a sharing route, not the love route. She could've just become a cosplay girl and not a nude model.

I agree. Really making her pose naked for the whole world to see in the love route was moronic. It should be only in the sharing/ntr route.

 

[KopengaKris]

I agree. Really making her pose naked for the whole world to see in the love route was moronic. It should be only in the sharing/ntr route.

Right! I knew atleast someone else felt the same way. Thx, brother.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

I agree. Really making her pose naked for the whole world to see in the love route was moronic. It should be only in the sharing/ntr route.

it would be okay for me IF her face was covered for privacy...but she is albino which is means that even with her face covered or partially hidden by a mask, her skin colour would give her away

I mean in real life i heard of people desperate for money who made sexy-content on the net...and their social life and reputation got destroyed by bigots or generic assholes who refuse to accept that some people did that because they were desperate (in a "we need money or we won't have food on our table or worse we'll be homeless" kind of desperation)

ultimately i agree with you...still people in desperate times would do anything and i can understand that concept

 

[EnTeeArrr]

I see NTR I download. Now to see if its good NTR worth becoming a patreon for.

EDIT: It wasn't. Definitely is the sharing side of NTR have to be super mean to her, really removes all the jealousy aspects of NTR which is big part of why I like NTR. Oh well next time.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

At the moment this is one of said choices.

And I really hope this trend (of being able to avoid NTR) continues with this game, or I'll be very upset

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Ok now what about pregnancy?

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

Thanks for the quick reply. I know that Emilie is crazy about the mc, she really loves him. Not really my point tho. Uploading photos of your naked "girlfriend" for everyone else to see makes more sence on a sharing route, not the love route. She could've just become a cosplay girl and not a nude model.

I do agree with you in principle, my girl for my eyes only but cosplay is fucking expensive. They're really doing this more out of desperation because they're about to be homeless otherwise.

 

[KopengaKris]

it would be okay for me IF her face was covered for privacy...but she is albino which is means that even with her face covered or partially hidden by a mask, her skin colour would give her away

I mean in real life i heard of people desperate for money who made sexy-content on the net...and their social life and reputation got destroyed by bigots or generic assholes who refuse to accept that some people did that because they were desperate (in a "we need money or we won't have food on our table or worse we'll be homeless" kind of desperation)

ultimately i agree with you...still people in desperate times would do anything and i can understand that concept

Sure, but this is a game. Emilie could've been just as successful as a cosplay girl or lingerie model, if the dev wants to. With her unique features she could become a star. That would've showned those a-hole girls that bullied her. The naked photoshoot could've only been between the MC and Emilie to boost her confidence about her insecuritys. I get your point, but uploading her naked photos is sharing and doesn't belong on the love route imo. I personally would never upload naked pictures of my woman, no matter how desperate I was. Like you said. That would ruin her reputation, so feel bad that we're forced to make that choice. Emilie is a loving character and should not be treated like that from "the love of her life" (MC).

 

[KopengaKris]

I do agree with you in principle, my girl for my eyes only but cosplay is fucking expensive. They're really doing this more out of desperation because they're about to be homeless otherwise.

Well the other option would be a lingerie model. Nothing stopping her from becoming that tho. She could be just as succesfull at that, no?

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

Sure, but this is a game. Emilie could've been just as successful as a cosplay girl or lingerie model, if the dev wants to. With her unique features she could become a star. That would've showned those a-hole girls that bullied her. The naked photoshoot could've only been between the MC and Emilie to boost her confidence about her insecuritys. I get your point, but uploading her naked photos is sharing and doesn't belong on the love route imo. I personally would never upload naked pictures of my woman, no matter how desperate I was. Like you said. That would ruin her reputation, so feel bad that we're forced to make that choice. Emilie is a loving character and should not be treated like that from "the love of her life" (MC).

and i agree 100000% with you, with every single word

and we're about to repeat each other here(so have mercy on me XD): when confronted with a desperate situation, some people accept compromises at the cost of their own dignity, others would rather die with their honour and dignity unbroken.

I agree that naked pictures shouldn't be in the love route...but at the same time cosplay-outfits(good ones and same for good lingerie) are far from cheap XD

Personally i would make your choice: Underwear/Lingerie, Cosplay and bikinis ONLY, with some shameless flirting like ASMR(or whatever the name is the thing of pretending to be someone's GF in a teasingly erotic video XD) stuff XD because i know that you can only go so far with pictures and photos XD

but again i'm not the dev, i'm not in charge XD

 

[Veileos]

Pretty sure Rape tag needs to be added.

Spoiler: Rape examples.

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Overall really loved the game. The love path was really sweet and well done. I agree a mouth mask or sexy eye mask would of been great for the love path or the otion to just not earn as much money and stay away from nudes.

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[Mommysbuttslut]

Well the other option would be a lingerie model. Nothing stopping her from becoming that tho. She could be just as succesfull at that, no?

Ya she could but she's got niche appeal and she's modelling on a site filled to the brim with naked women. She wouldn't be very competitive without either nude, or expensive cosplay sets and they wouldn't earn enough to make rent then. That was pretty clear from the response she got from the 2 lingerie sets.
Like I do get the argument and agree with it in principle but material need trumps ideals. Could've just done some porn logic to get around any reasonable argument I guess but I'm not really sure that's really all that much better.

 

[KopengaKris]

and i agree 100000% with you, with every single word

and we're about to repeat each other here(so have mercy on me XD): when confronted with a desperate situation, some people accept compromises at the cost of their own dignity, others would rather die with their honour and dignity unbroken.

I agree that naked pictures shouldn't be in the love route...but at the same time cosplay-outfits(good ones and same for good lingerie) are far from cheap XD

Personally i would make your choice: Underwear/Lingerie, Cosplay and bikinis ONLY, with some shameless flirting like ASMR(or whatever the name is the thing of pretending to be someone's GF in a teasingly erotic video XD) stuff XD because i know that you can only go so far with pictures and photos XD

but again i'm not the dev, i'm not in charge XD

Now that would be a good choice and who doesn't say Emilie already have sexy lingerie? The ones she was wearing wasn't bad

 

[IntiJWC11]

Great content so far for an inicial release! I loved it! Keep it up and hope to see an update soon! great work.

 

[KopengaKris]

Ya she could but she's got niche appeal and she's modelling on a site filled to the brim with naked women. She wouldn't be very competitive without either nude, or expensive cosplay sets and they wouldn't earn enough to make rent then. That was pretty clear from the response she got from the 2 lingerie sets.
Like I do get the argument and agree with it in principle but material need trumps ideals. Could've just done some porn logic to get around any reasonable argument I guess but I'm not really sure that's really all that much better.

Yeah, I hear you. I just feel, with everything Emilie's gone thru, this Is just the wrong way to treat her.

 

[MisterNephilim]

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Ok now what about pregnancy?

She commented that she wanted to have children with the MC, and there is an option to say that he (the MC) wanted to start a family with her so who knows, maybe there will be I hope

 

[voyeurkind]

I was really digging this--until the evil businessman showed up. At which point I quit playing and deleted the game.

I really don't understand why devs do this. There's already plenty of conflict in the story. In fact, this could have been a fun management game. But apparently there's a need to throw in a criminal subplot that simply just doesn't fit the tone of the game.

Good luck. I'm saddened by what I consider wasted potential though.