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Wait, how can Melisa be 19 when she started serving Mia for 10 years at the age of 7? She should be 17 not 19.
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you should put some girls in the show off pics cause i though it was a gay game at first and had to read the tags to realize its not ^^
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Finished the update (had to actually start again from the beginning because I had totally forgotten about the story lol).
And hmmm....... a little bit of mixed feelings about this update.
On one hand, I loved the first release of the game because it was a game set in Roman times, a time period that we don't really get to see used often in AVNs.
That still continues for most part in this second release.
But the twist which came with this second release; the whole MC actually lived a second life in another time, and his spirit is borrowing another dead Roman soldier's body in another time, I'm ngl. I'm not a huge fan of it.
Other people may see it differently, but tbh, I wish the dev had just kept it being entirely be on Roman time period without the whole different timeline/multiverse etc etc thing which is going on in the side. Roman time period stuff is the strongest aspect of the game, and I think this business with the gods/godesses with multi timelines etc feels like....... a distraction.
Other than that, I like the Roman era part of the story.
But I guess another part I think that should be addressed (that is, if others haven't mentioned it yet), the game is quite rough in terms of spelling & grammar etc.
I'm guessing GarusNG is Russian, cause even with my playthrough, it seemed some Russian (broken bits of it) seemed to seep out in one or two parts.
All in seriousness though, I do think you really need a proofreader to go through your work; several parts I just ignored the grammar/spelling mistakes, but in some cases, I couldn't understand what was being said or intent of the line; which I just skipped over.
Also, another tip; when doing the narration (where it's not a dialogue by any character) you don't need the character label "Artist."
Players are smart enough to know that it's a narration even without the Artist label.
With the whole timeline and deaths and gods stuff, I'm guessing it can't be changed cause that's part of the dev's plan (not keen on it, but it is what it is I guess). But getting a proofreader to really go over your entire game and give it a real polish, I'd imagine it would help a lot.
And hmmm....... a little bit of mixed feelings about this update.
On one hand, I loved the first release of the game because it was a game set in Roman times, a time period that we don't really get to see used often in AVNs.
That still continues for most part in this second release.
But the twist which came with this second release; the whole MC actually lived a second life in another time, and his spirit is borrowing another dead Roman soldier's body in another time, I'm ngl. I'm not a huge fan of it.
Other people may see it differently, but tbh, I wish the dev had just kept it being entirely be on Roman time period without the whole different timeline/multiverse etc etc thing which is going on in the side. Roman time period stuff is the strongest aspect of the game, and I think this business with the gods/godesses with multi timelines etc feels like....... a distraction.
Other than that, I like the Roman era part of the story.
But I guess another part I think that should be addressed (that is, if others haven't mentioned it yet), the game is quite rough in terms of spelling & grammar etc.
I'm guessing GarusNG is Russian, cause even with my playthrough, it seemed some Russian (broken bits of it) seemed to seep out in one or two parts.
All in seriousness though, I do think you really need a proofreader to go through your work; several parts I just ignored the grammar/spelling mistakes, but in some cases, I couldn't understand what was being said or intent of the line; which I just skipped over.
Also, another tip; when doing the narration (where it's not a dialogue by any character) you don't need the character label "Artist."
Players are smart enough to know that it's a narration even without the Artist label.
With the whole timeline and deaths and gods stuff, I'm guessing it can't be changed cause that's part of the dev's plan (not keen on it, but it is what it is I guess). But getting a proofreader to really go over your entire game and give it a real polish, I'd imagine it would help a lot.
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Yeah, that's pretty much how I felt about it too.Finished the update (had to actually start again from the beginning because I had totally forgotten about the story lol).
And hmmm....... a little bit of mixed feelings about this update.
On one hand, I loved the first release of the game because it was a game set in Roman times, a time period that we don't really get to see used often in AVNs.
That still continues for most part in this second release.
But the twist which came with this second release; the whole MC actually lived a second life in another time, and his spirit is borrowing another dead Roman soldier's body in another time, I'm ngl. I'm not a huge fan of it.
Other people may see it differently, but tbh, I wish the dev had just kept it being entirely be on Roman time period without the whole different timeline/multiverse etc etc thing which is going on in the side. Roman time period stuff is the strongest aspect of the game, and I think this business with the gods/godesses with multi timelines etc feels like....... a distraction.
Other than that, I like the Roman era part of the story.
But I guess another part I think that should be addressed (that is, if others haven't mentioned it yet), the game is really, really rough in terms of spelling & grammar etc.
I'm guessing GarusNG is Russian, cause even with my playthrough, it seemed some Russian (broken bits of it) seemed to seep out in one or two parts.
All in seriousness though, I do think you really need a proofreader to go through your work; several parts I just ignored the grammar/spelling mistakes, but in some cases, I couldn't understand what was being said or intent of the line; which I just skipped over.
Also, another tip; when doing the narration (where it's not a dialogue by any character) you don't need the character label "Artist."
Players are smart enough to know that it's a narration even without the Artist label.
With the whole timeline and deaths and gods stuff, I'm guessing it can't be changed cause that's part of the dev's plan (not keen on it, but it is what it is I guess). But getting a proofreader to really go over your entire game and give it a real polish, I'd imagine it would help a lot.
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Thank you for your feedback. A small update will be made soon, which will answer some questions.Finished the update (had to actually start again from the beginning because I had totally forgotten about the story lol).
And hmmm....... a little bit of mixed feelings about this update.
On one hand, I loved the first release of the game because it was a game set in Roman times, a time period that we don't really get to see used often in AVNs.
That still continues for most part in this second release.
But the twist which came with this second release; the whole MC actually lived a second life in another time, and his spirit is borrowing another dead Roman soldier's body in another time, I'm ngl. I'm not a huge fan of it.
Other people may see it differently, but tbh, I wish the dev had just kept it being entirely be on Roman time period without the whole different timeline/multiverse etc etc thing which is going on in the side. Roman time period stuff is the strongest aspect of the game, and I think this business with the gods/godesses with multi timelines etc feels like....... a distraction.
Other than that, I like the Roman era part of the story.
But I guess another part I think that should be addressed (that is, if others haven't mentioned it yet), the game is quite rough in terms of spelling & grammar etc.
I'm guessing GarusNG is Russian, cause even with my playthrough, it seemed some Russian (broken bits of it) seemed to seep out in one or two parts.
All in seriousness though, I do think you really need a proofreader to go through your work; several parts I just ignored the grammar/spelling mistakes, but in some cases, I couldn't understand what was being said or intent of the line; which I just skipped over.
Also, another tip; when doing the narration (where it's not a dialogue by any character) you don't need the character label "Artist."
Players are smart enough to know that it's a narration even without the Artist label.
With the whole timeline and deaths and gods stuff, I'm guessing it can't be changed cause that's part of the dev's plan (not keen on it, but it is what it is I guess). But getting a proofreader to really go over your entire game and give it a real polish, I'd imagine it would help a lot.
- Nov 10, 2019
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multiple protagonist ? coz looks like I was in control of Ati matter
also images has very low brightness.... my eyes hurt a bit
also images has very low brightness.... my eyes hurt a bit
- Nov 12, 2019
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- May 7, 2024
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Very nice game, I liked it. Models are fine, historical setting and plot are interesting. Looking forward for future content!
Biggest downside in my opinion, are the dialogues. They are kind of convoluted and weird. Dev should seriously consider someone who's a native english speaker to review dialogues.
Biggest downside in my opinion, are the dialogues. They are kind of convoluted and weird. Dev should seriously consider someone who's a native english speaker to review dialogues.
I am 100% sure that he is russian speaker, cuz there are too much things that indicates on it. Koschey... it's a persona from folklore, didn't see it ANYwhere outside of russian movies, books and etc.Finished the update (had to actually start again from the beginning because I had totally forgotten about the story lol).
And hmmm....... a little bit of mixed feelings about this update.
On one hand, I loved the first release of the game because it was a game set in Roman times, a time period that we don't really get to see used often in AVNs.
That still continues for most part in this second release.
But the twist which came with this second release; the whole MC actually lived a second life in another time, and his spirit is borrowing another dead Roman soldier's body in another time, I'm ngl. I'm not a huge fan of it.
Other people may see it differently, but tbh, I wish the dev had just kept it being entirely be on Roman time period without the whole different timeline/multiverse etc etc thing which is going on in the side. Roman time period stuff is the strongest aspect of the game, and I think this business with the gods/godesses with multi timelines etc feels like....... a distraction.
Other than that, I like the Roman era part of the story.
But I guess another part I think that should be addressed (that is, if others haven't mentioned it yet), the game is quite rough in terms of spelling & grammar etc.
I'm guessing GarusNG is Russian, cause even with my playthrough, it seemed some Russian (broken bits of it) seemed to seep out in one or two parts.
All in seriousness though, I do think you really need a proofreader to go through your work; several parts I just ignored the grammar/spelling mistakes, but in some cases, I couldn't understand what was being said or intent of the line; which I just skipped over.
Also, another tip; when doing the narration (where it's not a dialogue by any character) you don't need the character label "Artist."
Players are smart enough to know that it's a narration even without the Artist label.
With the whole timeline and deaths and gods stuff, I'm guessing it can't be changed cause that's part of the dev's plan (not keen on it, but it is what it is I guess). But getting a proofreader to really go over your entire game and give it a real polish, I'd imagine it would help a lot.
A lot of russian phrases just out of nowhere. so yep, 100%
sooo i just started my first playtrough, but the english language got butchered so hard at times that I couldnt even comprehend what was said. gonnna put this one aside till that gets solved i guess.
Bookmarked this at 0.01, now I read the 0.1.5 version is half-finished and should be 0.2 soon -- seems I'll wait a bit yet; anticipating a longer playtime for complete chapter.
Hello there! It's been a while since I last posted about upcoming updates, and I hope you're all well. This update will be quite short, consisting of two parts, but I hope it won't disappoint. The first part will be about the morning at the villa, and the second part will be a conversation with Uncle. "Dialogue with Uncle" is already ready, as is "The First Morning", but I've decided to make some changes to the first part as I think the released visuals didn't quite capture the character of Miriel as I intended. So, some more time is needed for that.
After this release, we'd like to ask for your help in deciding which future hero we should introduce next. We'll be sharing more details soon, so stay tuned!
This update will also include corrections to previous chapters, particularly the text.
After this release, we'd like to ask for your help in deciding which future hero we should introduce next. We'll be sharing more details soon, so stay tuned!
This update will also include corrections to previous chapters, particularly the text.
Hello there! The work is still ongoing. The next update on the progress will be released a week before the release. I believe it will be in this month.