Okay, if English is not your first language, OR you aren't confident in your ability to write your story in English, please find someone else to help you; check out the recruiting forums as there are people who will do that for free or a simple credit. This could be a great idea with a great story but it needs someone to polish it and make it coherent in English. I wish I could read Turkish, I believe that's the original language, as I'm sure it makes a lot more sense in the author's native tongue.
Best of luck to the dev, I hope this gets polished up.