VN Ren'Py Anna Exciting Affection [Ch.2 Ep.17] [DeepSleep]

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I am new to this game and I have played it so far and it’s pretty interesting. I like to see more of Anna and John. They kept mentioning about their past steamy encounter in Anna’s home but I think I missed that scene due to some choice I made. Can anyone tell as to what choice I should make to see them in action? Thank you!!
 
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The fact the Deep is taking ideas from other means that he is out of ideas!
Discord is not the center of the world and make a discussion like the one you had on discord just to make acceptable what doesn't make sense


Normally the exams where the students struggle to get a high grade like A+ to get the scholarship (this is in hard exam)
Hard exam is located in a High School
HIGH SCHOOL ends at the age of 18 and they are Hard exams specially focused on get a place in a prestigious college like
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etc etc... those exams decide if you can go to university also it is not possible for a student to have a scholarship at the age of 21 in fact the degree arrives around the age of max 23/24

IN HARD EXAMS SHE TALKS ABOUT SCOLARSHIP so she is not in a COLLEGE!
SCHOLARSHIP REQUIREMENTS ARE: maximum 18 Years old!
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High school uniforms are not worn to college if a girl wore such a uniform going to college she would be laughed at and humiliated
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you are wrong also about Andrew! Here in the PART 1 when Anna is starting to fuck Mr. Thompson ans she compare the size of his cock with Andrew
So Andrew is in the same high school or she is dating a college student!
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THIS IS HAR EXAMS PART 1 and part2 is just some day after the part1
In the part 2 she was blackmailed by the Janitor or the scholl director due to avoid losing the scholarship
Anna "Hard exams" is set in the exams that are required to go to college so she has 17/18th that are the only one when a student can hope to have a SCHOLARSHIP!

If "Anna First Time" was located before the "HARD EXAM"....
.... she lost her virginity when she was 15/16 years old only in this case the story becomes much more believable.
(usually 16 years the perfect age to lost the virginity for a girl that lives

so you are the one responsible of this non mess :eek:
If Deep liked the idea is ok but this story is a NON-CANON o
I understand the patreon rules that Anne cannot hae 15th or 16th but this is the normal age for loosing virginity...

hope Deep soon realizes the mistake he is making by listening to your suggestions which may be the cause of the delay of the updates

So I was hoping for just 2 months delay
you said 3????

This is big disaster in the logic of Anna storyline!
I will take a look in the Deep patreon ranking just in case!
I also do not understand why "Anna First Time" was posted in this thread... it was an error... because all Deep short stories have separate thread from this one
why this stupid non sense short story is in the "Anna Exiting Affection" thread!!!
DOES THIS MEAN ANNA EXCITING AFFECTION IS CHANGING HER AUDIENCE?

and yes" this game is STUPID... I will think about supporting Deep again for soo long!

Good luck with your non-sense suggestions that are making a mess in a story that was a masterpiece!
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I'm sorry, but you're wrong about a lot of things. Firstly, US scholarships only last for one year. At the end of each year, you need to re-apply if you want to continue receiving that scholarship for the following year. So you could get one at 18 for your Freshman year, but for your Sophomore year you'd have to go through the whole process again, and for your Junior and Senior years. Also you can still apply for a scholarship after you've started college. It's entirely possible, to go through your first three years without a scholarship and just apply for one in the Senior year, which is what Anna appears to be doing.

Also just because she's wearing a school uniform in the renders, doesn't mean she's not at college. We know she's at college during Hard Exam, because it says so several times in the text. It doesn't say anything about her being at High School. Yes apart from military colleges, you don't have to wear a uniform at American universities. But what your seeing is simply an error by the Devs, and not an indication in any way that Anna is still at school.

As far as Andrew is concerned. In Hard Exam II, the Devs changed the relationship between Anna and Andrew. Yes, in Hard Exam Anna is already dating Andrew. But in Hard Exam II, she's just starting to become aware of him, and hasn't decided yet whether she wants to become his girlfriend. At the time, I mentioned this discrepancy to Deep, believing it to be an error in the text. But he explained they had changed their mind, and decided to make it so Anna has not actually started dating Andrew in Hard Exam II. So ignore what happened in Hard Exam, as far as Andrew is concerned, it's no longer canon.

I also don't think patreon rules have anything to do with Anna losing her virginity at 17. Anna is supposed to be a scholarfly nerd and definitely not a slut in anyway, at this time. She loses her virginity when she meets the right person, and not because she feels she has to, because all her peers have already done it much younger. What the short novels do indicate, is that Anna is a much more sexual person, than she believes herself to be. She isn't really aware of the effect she has on men, and that's how she remains relatively innocent and pure, even after some fairly dramatic sexual experiences in the short novels. It's only when she has the accident, putting her in a constant state of arousal, that she can't deny what she is anymore

As far as Deep listening to my suggestions is concerned. Well all it resulted in was a poll, of which my suggestion was but one choice. And it just happened to get the most votes. I didn't even get to vote in that poll, because my internet connection was down at the time. Lots of other people make suggestions on Discord, that get put into the game. That's why there's a separate section devoted to suggestions at all. So that people can have their say, about what things they want in the game. If the Devs took no notice of it, then what would be the point of it? It's there for a purpose, to get people more interested in the development of the game. And allow them to actually contribute, rather than just play or make criticisms.

And this idea that Deep is lacking in ideas and relies on others, is complete nonsense. Shortly after Awake joined him as a co-developer, he told me that him and Deep had had long discussions about the future direction of the game, and together they'd mapped it out far into the future. They already have a pretty good idea about how the game will reach it's end, but their plan allows for some flexibility, which means ideas from patrons can be added as long as they don't conflict with the overall plan. So I'm sorry, but what you're claiming here, couldn't be further from the truth.
 
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Same for me... I have lost around 2000 likes/reactions :unsure:
And it looks like I keep losing, just before I posted so did I have 913 likes, refreshed the page.. was down to 910 and just as I posted this message so am I down to 904...
 
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Latex224 said:
Same for me... I have lost around 2000 likes/reactions :unsure:
And it looks like I keep losing, just before I posted so did I have 913 likes, refreshed the page.. was down to 910 and just as I posted this message so am I down to 904...
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Just now when I saw your reaction khantus so am I down to 895.. :LOL:
I guess the moderators are on removing spree :unsure::ROFLMAO:
 
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khantus said:
Or it could be an April Fools' joke:ROFLMAO:
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Maybe or at least I hope so. I posted a lot of games' updates, wallpapers, walkthroughs, preview pics, ... and if someone is removing those posts it means a lot of material is gone
 
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FMag said:
Maybe or at least I hope so. I posted a lot of games' updates, wallpapers, walkthroughs, preview pics, ... and if someone is removing those posts it means a lot of material is gone
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If that was the case, you'd expect the post number to be dropping as well. But it isn't. It must be a bug.
 
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Zara Scarlet said:
I'm sorry, but you're wrong about a lot of things. Firstly, US scholarships only last for one year. At the end of each year, you need to re-apply if you want to continue receiving that scholarship for the following year. So you could get one at 18 for your Freshman year, but for your Sophomore year you'd have to go through the whole process again, and for your Junior and Senior years. Also you can still apply for a scholarship after you've started college. It's entirely possible, to go through your first three years without a scholarship and just apply for one in the Senior year, which is what Anna appears to be doing.
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you are right... but!
It is true that you can apply for other scholarships during your college years but these do not require a specific high grade point average. in fact the scholarships during the college are offered for high merits on a single school subject... for example there are scholarships for research in the fields of chemistry-pharmacology and biology or for merits in mathematics-physics and astronomy that are proposed by the teachers FOR RARE STUDENTS THAT ARE practically GENIUS!.
This kind of scolarship are linked to a prestigious job as a Researcher or Mathematician or Physicist and cover the expenses to create a laboratory where you can carry out your experiments on your degree thesis THIS KIND OF SCOOLARSHIP ARE for student which excels for specific merit ..

scholarships can be obtained for merit in sports and usually these students get a contract in the NBA or in big basketball clubs but an average grade of B+ can be enough fr that!

in CH1 it does not appear that Anna has such a prestigious job on the contrary she is unemployed and she is looking for work as a waitress and stripper ... So Anna didn't win any college scholarships otherwise she would have a prestigious job

She has only won the scholarship to pay her studies at the college by fucking her Teacher the Janitor and the Director
And the scholarship which requires an average grade of A+ in all school subjects is the one which can only be obtained at the age of 18th

Zara Scarlet said:
I also don't think patreon rules have anything to do with Anna losing her virginity at 17.
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really :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
underage sexual acts cannot be pubblished... this is not only a patreon rule... even in porno movies... girls and guys must be OVER 18+... OR THE PRODUCER will be ARRESTED AND FORCED TO PAY MILLIONS OF Deposit refund.
Zara Scarlet said:
As far as Deep listening to my suggestions is concerned. Well all it resulted in was a poll, of which my suggestion was but one choice. And it just happened to get the most votes.
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sorry Zara I understand that you want to explain everything in detail and I appreciate you for that... but I criticize the logic of the story obtained through your suggestions and the vote of the clueless that you know how to manipulate well!

But LOOK AT THAT!!!
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I'M SORRY FOR YOU but since the day this stupid short story was published Deep has lost more than 200 paying supporters and they are dropping down every day.

Everyone expected the progress of the MAIN STORY
Many expected a big scene at the bar with the start of Anna's work as a high class escort who fucks rich clients in luxury clubs or who has to entertain the clients of businessmen who offer her to fuck many clients at the same time. This is the high-end, pornstar whore job that everyone has been waiting for---

for those who want to know why ZARA SCARLET dedicated such a detailed post to me, I invite you to take a look at my previous posts
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10357426
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10357476
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10358457
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10365991
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10372225

Zara since you know everything about Deep could you explain to me where is the streeptease club for V.I.P. It was in the first chapter in t rear of the Bar!
here is the post with picture of this VIP CLUB
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10412249

in these posts I explain why Andrew must stay alive and heal as soon as possible

Zara here I have explained why "Anna's First Time" is a big flop in this post I also wrote how this silly story could be a hit.
It is theonly way to get a success from this dumb senseless story THAT DOES NOT FIT WITH The WRITING STYLE OF ALL ANNA GAMES PREVIOUSLY RELEASED!

No Andrew No Game!
Dead Andrew = Dead game
 
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