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No, you're the one who isn't getting the point. Before the events of Hard Exam, Anna has never had anything but vanilla sex. That's the clear insinuation in that short novel. When Anna is blackmailed by Mr Thompson in Hard Exam, that's the first time anything like that has ever happened to her. So regardless of what some patrons might have thought they were voting for. The fact is by choosing Anna's First Time they were only voting for her to have vanilla sex. Because that's all it ever could have been.
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Yeah, but the people who cancelled their subscriptions are the same people who cancel anyway after each update of the main game. Most of them are probably on the $5 tier, which means they would have to wait 2 weeks after release, to get access to the update. I guess after seeing that the short novel didn't have the content they wanted, a lot of them decided to cancel before the $5 tier became available, and that's why you get such a precipitous drop after 2-3 days. But that is in no way an indication of a fall in patrons because of the short novel, because those people would have left anyway 2-3 weeks later, when the update was made available for $5 tier patrons, regardless of how good the short novel was. Even if it had been brilliant there still would have been a drop off of about 200 patrons, because these people always leave after they've played the content.
Deep has made it clear many times, that that will never happen. So you don't have to worry. There is a decent renpy remake of Chapter 1 available, so there is literally no point anyway.
I've absolutely no idea why this short novel is parcelled in with the main game. All the other short novels have their own threads. So why doesn't Anna's First Time? All they would need to do is link this thread to the new one. Also why are the other short novels ( apart from Hard Exam) not linked to this one, and why are Hard Exam 1 and 2 tagged as abandoned, when they're clearly both completed games?Number 1 is ok
after that
Hard Exams short novel 1-2
Old Church and Christmas Gift
than you can try CH2 (but she looks older and her hairstyle sucks
the number 3 does not fit with the style of all the previous games
it can be considered a non canon story or a dream for the Romance-Vanilla games lovers
I Think the TAGS in this THREAD ARE WRONG if based to "The first Time" release... that is why F95 MODs could move this short novel in a different THREAD by adding THE CORRECT TAGS
the wrong tags are:
"corruption" " anal sex" "blackmail" "cheating" "interracial" "exhibitionism" "group sex" "spanking" "footjob" "multiple_penetration" "stripping" voyeurism" "lesbian"
maybe i forgot some tag
WOW THERE ARE A LOT OF WRONG TAGS in this thread that do not match with the latest SHORT NOVEL!
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I knew you'd say that, you don't seem to understand what people wanted to see or you don't care, you're looking for a lot of logic in a pornographic game and relying on a short story that half the players probably missed, this game is full of illogical moments and no one cares, so why should people who pay money and vote for a product get vanilla crap that only disappoints. I'm not a fan of incest and I wouldn't want to see the uncle fucking Anna or anything like that, but at least a few hot moments could have been added. As for blackmail, it's the main reason why many players play this game and I don't see anything wrong with it. I hope that if ''DeepSleep'' is going to do vanilla vomit again in the future, he will at least give us a warning.
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that's exactly what I would like to know
I don't get your pointI already said that... here I know how to read the graphs
Happy that you agreed with me... but this means that the short novel was a total disaster!
Stable paying supporters has to grow minimum to 1200 stable plus the 200 that always unsubscribe to declare the CH2 a real success
The attempt to vanilla story does not getting more stable supporter
Vanilla?
THIS IS A TOTAL NONSENSE!
I don't understand how you can consider "vanilla" Anna life when it is certain that she was abandoned by her mother... and had to live her childhood with an always drunk father
Maybe her mother took her along when she was cheating on her husband (Anna dad).
The mother went to fuck with others and took little Anna with her as a cover for dad and to hide her affairs with other men... and Anna watched mom fucking with others men....
then mom said to her:
<<Anna swear me not to say anything to dad because this is a secret between us or I will hate you forever!>>
Living with drunk dad and abandoned by e mom that runaway abroad cannot create a vanilla story!!
I'm quoting myself to avoid to repeat again the ONLY ANNA FIRST TIIME POSSIBLE THAT MATCH WITH ALL THE PREVIOUS RELEASES is in the following quotes
When her grandpa gift his truck to Anna she happily calls her boyfriend Andrew inviting him on a camping trip with Rebecca and Brady promising to Andrew that she will finally give him her virginity.
But when they arrive at the campsite Andrew receives a phone call which forces him to leave for an important exam he had left unfinished... so poor Andrew has to go back to the city... but he says to his beloved Anna:
"Don't worry honey, you can stay with your sister Rebecca and I return in the evening ASAP"....
As soon as Andrew leaves David arrives with his motorbike
In the evening Andrew returns to the campsite but it's late and everyone has to go home.... (poor Andrew)
But now Anna is no longer a virgin but she wants to keep her promise to Andrew... so she has to go to the doctor to get her hymen stitched up...for Andrew her beloved boyfriend
----Unfortunately the evening that Andrew finally has to deflower Anna... she meets David in the afternoon who rips her stitches out...
.....and the poor Andrew will have to settle for an unstitched cunt.
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I agree with you, the story of vanilla Anna is just ridiculous to me, especially after everything we saw in the main game, it can only be funnier to look for logic in a pornographic gamethat's exactly what I would like to know
I already said that... here I know how to read the graphs
Happy that you agreed with me... but this means that the short novel was a total disaster!
Stable paying supporters has to grow o declare CH2 a success
The attempt to vanilla story does not getting more stable supporter
Vanilla?
THIS IS A TOTAL NONSENSE!
I don't understand how you can consider "vanilla" Anna life when it is certain that she was abandoned by her mother... and had to live her childhood with an always drunk father
Maybe her mother took her along when she was cheating on her husband (Anna dad).
The mother went to fuck with others and took little Anna with her as a cover for her affairs with other men... and Anna watched mom fuck others then mom said to her:
<<Anna swear not to say anything to dad because this is a secret between us or I will hate you forever!>>
Living with drunk dad and abandoned by e mom that runaway abroad cannot create a vanilla story!!
I'm quoting myself to avoid to repeat again the ONLY ANNA FIST TIIME POSSIBLE THAT MATCH WITH ALL THE PREVIOUS RELEASE is in the followiong quotes
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When CH2 started there was an attempt to change the audience by making Anna looks older and more easy to work at the great expression of her face in the perfect CH1 and the start of CH2 you have to corrupt her AGAIN!I agree with you, the story of vanilla Anna is just ridiculous to me, especially after everything we saw in the main game, it can only be funnier to look for logic in a pornographic game
Why? she was already corrupted!
On the other hand, people like Zara want to participate in the drafting of the novel... but it's not easy to change the audience of those who have been following a story for 5 years.... In the first chapter there are some written things that Deep knows very well and the new collaborators ignored ... I think he has lost interest in this story by now and is only interested in continuing to receive money for as long as possible
this a pic from the stunning Anna expressive face
ANNA FACE IN CH2 IS UNEXPRESSIVE LIKE A DEAD DOLL!
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yep！you are right... but!
It is true that you can apply for other scholarships during your college years but these do not require a specific high grade point average. in fact the scholarships during the college are offered for high merits on a single school subject... for example there are scholarships for research in the fields of chemistry-pharmacology and biology or for merits in mathematics-physics and astronomy that are proposed by the teachers FOR RARE STUDENTS THAT ARE practically GENIUS!.
This kind of scolarship are linked to a prestigious job as a Researcher or Mathematician or Physicist and cover the expenses to create a laboratory where you can carry out your experiments on your degree thesis THIS KIND OF SCOOLARSHIP ARE for student which excels for specific merit ..
scholarships can be obtained for merit in sports and usually these students get a contract in the NBA or in big basketball clubs but an average grade of B+ can be enough fr that!
in CH1 it does not appear that Anna has such a prestigious job on the contrary she is unemployed and she is looking for work as a waitress and stripper ... So Anna didn't win any college scholarships otherwise she would have a prestigious job
She has only won the scholarship to pay her studies at the college by fucking her Teacher the Janitor and the Director
And the scholarship which requires an average grade of A+ in all school subjects is the one which can only be obtained at the age of 18th
really
underage sexual acts cannot be pubblished... this is not only a patreon rule... even in porno movies... girls and guys must be OVER 18+... OR THE PRODUCER will be ARRESTED AND FORCED TO PAY MILLIONS OF Deposit refund.
sorry Zara I understand that you want to explain everything in detail and I appreciate you for that... but I criticize the logic of the story obtained through your suggestions and the vote of the clueless that you know how to manipulate well!
But LOOK AT THAT!!!
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I'M SORRY FOR YOU but since the day this stupid short story was published Deep has lost more than 200 paying supporters and they are dropping down every day.
Everyone expected the progress of the MAIN STORY
Many expected a big scene at the bar with the start of Anna's work as a high class escort who fucks rich clients in luxury clubs or who has to entertain the clients of businessmen who offer her to fuck many clients at the same time. This is the high-end, pornstar whore job that everyone has been waiting for---
for those who want to know why ZARA SCARLET dedicated such a detailed post to me, I invite you to take a look at my previous posts
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10357426
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10357476
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10358457
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10365991
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10372225
Zara since you know everything about Deep could you explain to me where is the streeptease club for V.I.P. It was in the first chapter in t rear of the Bar!
here is the post with picture of this VIP CLUB
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10412249
in these posts I explain why Andrew must stay alive and heal as soon as possible
Zara here I have explained why "Anna's First Time" is a big flop in this post I also wrote how this silly story could be a hit.
It is theonly way to get a success from this dumb senseless story THAT DOES NOT FIT WITH The WRITING STYLE OF ALL ANNA GAMES PREVIOUSLY RELEASED!
No Andrew No Game!
Dead Andrew = Dead game
No Andrew No Game!
Dead Andrew = Dead game
and
CH1 ANNA
CH2 anna too old....
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Great, now they also want to remove Anna's boyfriend from the game, I understand that you can forget about the kukold content and cheating on your boyfriend in the game forever. I don't quite understand why some people hate him so much, as for me it's a great option for Anna, especially compared to other characters in the game.
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Honestly this game was my second game I ever played at the end of 2020 it was so awesome now the excitement for this game has gone I don't even check or ask for update dates anymore
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yeah! this is the main nonsense...
They want Anna to be a boring whore that fucks everyone for herself.
They fail to understand that Andrew is the only perfect boyfriend for Anna...
let's assume Dave is her new boyfriend...
1) he'd be cuckolded anyway.
2) or he should become Anna's pimp...
but Anna will never accept losing the sensual freedom that only Andrew can guarantee her...
The only logical explanation of Anna's sad and gloomy expression in the second chapter is that she is really sad and worried about losing Andrew... and with him losing the freedom that made her famous in the adult game world
When Andrew will be safe her expression will back and she will looks happy, younger and with her great willpower again.
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soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo we might see the update of the main game late april/early may if we are lucky, mid june if we are unlucky.
about the scenes:
-we will definitely see a big scene with alfred (+possilbe at least one of his friends) and a catwalk/model scene.
- we definitely also see a contunation of the police/agent storyline with earl (sergey)
- maybe pornshoot/escort scene (still hoping for the guy in the park with the red check-shirt, but we definitely get a rebecca scene which i assume will be featured in a pornshoot)
- hospital scene with additional nurse scene would be appreciated in my opinion.
-what else? maybe two bigger scenes and three smaller scenes are enough already?
about the scenes:
-we will definitely see a big scene with alfred (+possilbe at least one of his friends) and a catwalk/model scene.
- we definitely also see a contunation of the police/agent storyline with earl (sergey)
- maybe pornshoot/escort scene (still hoping for the guy in the park with the red check-shirt, but we definitely get a rebecca scene which i assume will be featured in a pornshoot)
- hospital scene with additional nurse scene would be appreciated in my opinion.
-what else? maybe two bigger scenes and three smaller scenes are enough already?
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usually updates of the main game takes about 2 every year (5/6 months for a big update)
in this case the team was busy to work in this useless vanilla short dumb novel
So they started in the end of March to wirk at the main story
1 April is impossible... maybe only the catwalk will be ready
2 the new update requires 5/6 month
... maybe a very short update will be available in June
I know exactly what you and others wanted to see, because you and others have gone on about it at great length. But it's still irrelevant, because you weren't voting for any particular version of Anna's First Time. Saying after the event, that lot's of people wanted this or that in the storyline is a waste of time, because it's already happened.
I don't have any problem with the blackmail element in other parts of the game. But it just doesn't have a role to play in this particular storyline, because it's obvious at the start of Hard Exam that Anna is a relatively innocent teenager, who has not been exposed before to those kinds of harsh reality. And that's what you're not getting. This idea that it's 'just a porn game' and that means you can write any old crap, even if it totally contradicts everything that has gone before, just so certain patrons can get their fix of Anna being forced to have sex, is complete nonsense. It's not 'just a porn game' it's a visual novel, and there are plenty of us who still want a storyline that is as decent as possible, as well as the hot fap material that we have come to expect from this game.
Since this is now out of the way, and future short novels are likely to occur after the events of Hard Exam. It's unlikely that 'vanilla' storylines as you put it, are going to feature. The next most likely one is Hard Exam 3, probably about 18 months from now, which is likely to be blackmail themed.
As far as the main game is concerned, and Anna becomes more and more of a slut. Blackmail will become less and less effective on Anna, because she'll either eventually stop caring, or will do everything willingly anyway. The point is fast being reached where it becomes totally irrelevant. Now you and others may not want that, but unfortunately that is the nature of corruption. Eventually a point will be reached where Anna completely surrenders to her condition, and effectively becomes a nymphomaniac. And like all addictions, it becomes the only thing that matters. That is the logical apotheosis of the path where Anna allows herself to be sexually blackmailed. Blackmail only really works while Anna is still capable of feeling genuine humiliation and shame. Once she starts to actively pursue those emotions, well the writing's on the wall.
She's not quite there yet, but there a clear signs that she's secretly starting to enjoy what Jeremy is 'forcing' her to do. And the same goes for working in Patrick's Bar or helping with Schmitt's research. It's only a matter of time before she tells Jeremy that she fucking loves it all!
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I never wanted to participate in the drafting of the novel. I came up with a very basic idea in a conversation between other patrons on Discord, which was subsequently adopted by the Devs. I had nothing to do with writing the short novel, that was entirely the creation of the Dev's Deepsleep and Awake. Since I was offline through most of the period when the novel was actually written, it was physically impossible for me to take part any way, even if I was part of the writing team, which I definitely am not. So why keep pedalling this line Stanford, which is patently a fabrication of your own?
What we are discussing now will not change anything. This fantasy of yours, that somehow sees this short novel being rewritten is never going to happen. The Devs have now moved on and this short novel whether you like it or not, is in it's final form. And I have no desire for them to return to it. I never even asked for it to be written in the first place. That was purely the decision of the Devs. I am far more interested in the main game, than the short novels.
So can we please stop discussing this relatively trivial entry to the canon, which is far as I'm concerned is over. Nothing is going to change, and what we have now, is all we're ever going to have. In the grand scheme of things, all that really matters is the next update of the main game.
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Here's one reason why Deep changed Anna's hairstyle, perhaps the new look was the only one that fit the new model.
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Now, I don't recall at any point Deep saying that Andrew was going to die or for some reason be removed from the game but at some point there was a poll to define Andrew's fate as seen in the image, but one possible ending, of many, could be that Andrew dies or that he doesn't stay with Anna.you are right... but!
It is true that you can apply for other scholarships during your college years but these do not require a specific high grade point average. in fact the scholarships during the college are offered for high merits on a single school subject... for example there are scholarships for research in the fields of chemistry-pharmacology and biology or for merits in mathematics-physics and astronomy that are proposed by the teachers FOR RARE STUDENTS THAT ARE practically GENIUS!.
This kind of scolarship are linked to a prestigious job as a Researcher or Mathematician or Physicist and cover the expenses to create a laboratory where you can carry out your experiments on your degree thesis THIS KIND OF SCOOLARSHIP ARE for student which excels for specific merit ..
scholarships can be obtained for merit in sports and usually these students get a contract in the NBA or in big basketball clubs but an average grade of B+ can be enough fr that!
in CH1 it does not appear that Anna has such a prestigious job on the contrary she is unemployed and she is looking for work as a waitress and stripper ... So Anna didn't win any college scholarships otherwise she would have a prestigious job
She has only won the scholarship to pay her studies at the college by fucking her Teacher the Janitor and the Director
And the scholarship which requires an average grade of A+ in all school subjects is the one which can only be obtained at the age of 18th
really
underage sexual acts cannot be pubblished... this is not only a patreon rule... even in porno movies... girls and guys must be OVER 18+... OR THE PRODUCER will be ARRESTED AND FORCED TO PAY MILLIONS OF Deposit refund.
sorry Zara I understand that you want to explain everything in detail and I appreciate you for that... but I criticize the logic of the story obtained through your suggestions and the vote of the clueless that you know how to manipulate well!
But LOOK AT THAT!!!
View attachment 2515031
I'M SORRY FOR YOU but since the day this stupid short story was published Deep has lost more than 200 paying supporters and they are dropping down every day.
Everyone expected the progress of the MAIN STORY
Many expected a big scene at the bar with the start of Anna's work as a high class escort who fucks rich clients in luxury clubs or who has to entertain the clients of businessmen who offer her to fuck many clients at the same time. This is the high-end, pornstar whore job that everyone has been waiting for---
for those who want to know why ZARA SCARLET dedicated such a detailed post to me, I invite you to take a look at my previous posts
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10357426
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10357476
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10358457
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10365991
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10372225
Zara since you know everything about Deep could you explain to me where is the streeptease club for V.I.P. It was in the first chapter in t rear of the Bar!
here is the post with picture of this VIP CLUB
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10412249
in these posts I explain why Andrew must stay alive and heal as soon as possible
Zara here I have explained why "Anna's First Time" is a big flop in this post I also wrote how this silly story could be a hit.
It is theonly way to get a success from this dumb senseless story THAT DOES NOT FIT WITH The WRITING STYLE OF ALL ANNA GAMES PREVIOUSLY RELEASED!
No Andrew No Game!
Dead Andrew = Dead game
I haven't even played ch2, still working on ch1 renpy remake... so I don't really know what all the fuss is about with andrew, the new hair style, or side stories... I do know, however, that anna needs her cuck boyfriend... I mean what's the point being a whore if you don't have a cuck boyfriend waiting at home to eat you out later? It doesn't make any sense! Not that I really care about andrew, they could replace him with another cuck for all I care, but having him there makes it that much more juicy. I really hope they don't get rid of him, I would prefer if he knew everything tho