VN Ren'Py Anna Exciting Affection [Ch.2 Ep.17] [DeepSleep]

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locopogo1

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Longo McFap! said:

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Hello, dear Patrons!

I know, it's been a while, but I had to take a couple of weeks off to clear my mind and get back with new enthusiasm.
There have been a lot of comments about the 2.0 update and I'll try to go through some of those.

First of all, a lot of players have come up that now there is just a full fuckfest and very few scenes that fill the story without sex and I agree on that part. I guess I wanted to bring too much of lewd content not thinking about teasing in between those scenes and making story flow more naturally and more real.
Some scenes felt a bit out of place as Anna should have been thinking about Rebecca's kidnapping and not about sex. After thinking it through I can agree on that too. I'll have to plan future scenes and events more carefully in the future.

Finally, the last scene. It was rushed, again and it's my fault. I'm going to change that scene to make it better.
But for now, I'm going to make a short novel again. With a continuation of the school story. I know that a lot of people want to see some further stuff with Janitor and others. Some might not like it, but I need to do it to get hang of Renpy, as I'm planning to make the next chapter of Anna using that engine. This time there will be multiple paths to test how it works and if you like it.

That's if for now. Thank you for your amazing support.
Deep
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there have been no short novels for a long time, I hope it will be an interesting story with unexpected plot twists!
 
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Okabe19

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Regardless of what anyone says i like the 2.0 version, yes i agree story is important but not that important, if i need to watch anything story focus, I will watch netflix. I love this game the way it is but thats just my opinion but anyway keep up the good work.
 
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ladosenta

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tata19 said:
The second and third images should have been part of the party with Alfred
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But. i cant find in what event does the second and third image take place,though
are those in the 2.00 version ?? can anyone tell me cause that second pic is on fireeeeeeeee.....
 
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ladosenta said:
But. i cant find in what event does the second and third image take place,though
are those in the 2.00 version ?? can anyone tell me cause that second pic is on fireeeeeeeee.....
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Those pics are not in the game. They are amongst the many stand alone images produced for the patrons & which generally end up being posted here, so we all can enjoy them. Similar pics are often incorporated in the game at some stage.
 
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Mariano95

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Super hyped for the last weekly update (thanks Longo McFap! )!
It's cool to see some new short novels: seeing our beloved Anna having some adventures outside the main story is always welcome, even if it means we'll have to wait more for the main story update. Anyway I was playing some old scenes again and I remembered about the "spot" with Jeff (the old black man) and, wow, it was good, the animations were truly awesome! That was a some kind of "side-story" where Anna is becoming a porn actress and I hope to see a continuation of that story, maybe another "spot".
This game is full of episodes that could lead to some nice outcomes (without necessary impact the main story), like the scene where Anna was changing her clothes in public with Michael before the drug deal at the hotel with Fitz and she get caught and recorded. That's another thing I would like to see continuing.
Again, this is my personal opinion.
 
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My first reply on F95 zone, I have been playing rpgm Anna EA and so far i love the VN with the rpg element, one of the better VN i read so far.

Few remarks though, the story is to much Linear, no matter the choices you make, later on in the story they mention it like you made the other choice anyway and there also no change in her behaviour influenced by your choices. Example when you meet Robert for first time, you can choose not to ask his help and do it yourself, but then later at the LAN party at Timothy's place you meet Robert again and you mentioned he helped you even though you chosen to do it yourself. On those sort choices i would love to see improvement in future meetings that they answer differently. Like say when meet Robert on the LAN party you then say you met him at his father's garage, but thought he was a little pervert. There more examples but to much to name them all.

Another remark is spelling, I came across several sentences that sounded weird or had still mistakes in spelling, would be nice to see those rewritten or corrected when got time to go through all of them. But that not a huge problem as I understand you might not be native english, just like me.

What I love to be able to do is at your closet, when choose an outfit that you can choose between all the unlocked ones, but it not a problem if not possible.

Anyway keep up the good work on this VN and hope in future if you plan on updating RPGM Anna EA to see the influence of the choices you make through the story. Like Choice A and B and you choose B that the story continue for that persone as choice B story line and not jump to choice A story line again. Although on some it would still not bad that even you choose B that later on you can still turn it back to story A path like with Ashley react mad on him filming you, but later on forgive him and still go naughty with him.

Hope this feedback helps you on future development of Anna EA.
 
Darkman_13

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Weekly update

Hello, dear Patrons!

A quick weekly update on the progress both of the next update and a visual novel I'm working on.
I'm still thinking of how to improve the last update and one idea was to change the order of the scenes. Now I understand that Anna didn't have any important reason to do what she did after Rebecca's kidnapping so it should happen right before she goes to Fitzgerald's. It would take the least amount of effort and together with changed last scene it would make more sense. What do you think?
Work on a visual novel, as I tend to call it is also going great and I'm getting hang of renpy. I'll try to make it a bit more interesting so it's more like a game with something more to do than just going from one scene to another. It's not going to be too complex, but still, something new, at least for me.
Here you can see one of the path's Anna will be going through. I like that location and I hope that it will turn out to be an interesting scene.
That's it for now.
Thank you again for your amazing support.
Deep
 
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Latex224

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Darkman_13 said:

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Weekly update

Hello, dear Patrons!

A quick weekly update on the progress both of the next update and a visual novel I'm working on.
I'm still thinking of how to improve the last update and one idea was to change the order of the scenes. Now I understand that Anna didn't have any important reason to do what she did after Rebecca's kidnapping so it should happen right before she goes to Fitzgerald's. It would take the least amount of effort and together with changed last scene it would make more sense. What do you think?
Work on a visual novel, as I tend to call it is also going great and I'm getting hang of renpy. I'll try to make it a bit more interesting so it's more like a game with something more to do than just going from one scene to another. It's not going to be too complex, but still, something new, at least for me.
Here you can see one of the path's Anna will be going through. I like that location and I hope that it will turn out to be an interesting scene.
That's it for now.
Thank you again for your amazing support.
Deep
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Thanks for sharing as always my friend. :)

Maybe others have said it to Deep but i certainly have, about the order of the scenes. ;)
 
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Darkman_13 said:

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Weekly update

Hello, dear Patrons!

A quick weekly update on the progress both of the next update and a visual novel I'm working on.
I'm still thinking of how to improve the last update and one idea was to change the order of the scenes. Now I understand that Anna didn't have any important reason to do what she did after Rebecca's kidnapping so it should happen right before she goes to Fitzgerald's. It would take the least amount of effort and together with changed last scene it would make more sense. What do you think?
Work on a visual novel, as I tend to call it is also going great and I'm getting hang of renpy. I'll try to make it a bit more interesting so it's more like a game with something more to do than just going from one scene to another. It's not going to be too complex, but still, something new, at least for me.
Here you can see one of the path's Anna will be going through. I like that location and I hope that it will turn out to be an interesting scene.
That's it for now.
Thank you again for your amazing support.
Deep
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Your work is great, keep it up with that desire. I like the change.
 
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Pogo123

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OMG this sounds REALLY great! Great great great news! About everything.

And I totally understand you had to take a creative break and that the criticism was much about last scene but it’s nice yo understand it’s not meant to be personal it’s cause we love Anna like you and want it to be not only a good but great game! :)

Sorry if we overwhelmed you with feedback but it had to be done. We like you and your work that’s why we are so passionate about it DeepSleep i hope we are cool bro

The novel idea sounds great, about school sounds awesome. Seems like we can at least choose to have fun with either the janitor or director. Interesting.;) I love Anna as cute school girl it’s a fetish of mine too.

The Renpy part is interesting and I agree with latex224 that it sounds like there will be a 2nd chapter sooner or later.

And BIG thanks to Ma bro Darkman_13 and Longo McFap! for sharing and keeping as lads up to date!
 
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