VN Ren'Py Anna Exciting Affection [Ch.2 Ep.17] [DeepSleep]

[Sadowdark]

There was a DOUBLE DISASTER whit the release of this useless short non-cannon novel that dosen't fit with the original Anna character.

NOW WE HAVE TO WAIT ANOTHER 3 MONTHS BEFORE the next update of the great MAIN STORY (with Jeremy alive) being released... if everything goes well!
This short Novel must be deleted or is at least required a good additional introduction that explain why Anna is no more herself!

Damn! the CH1 was so perfect... and as soon as I looked at her shitty-hair-style I knew right away that the story was going to the wrong side.

When you take the game too seriously

 

[88stanford88]

I always read the dialogs in the game i like, and CH1 was perfect I love erotic stories well written...

not to mention we all look forward to a great gangbang at the Bar with a memorable strip tease in the club where Anna works as an entertainer but....
by the way whats happened at the strip club that was in the back of the bar in CH1?


A story without logic becomes like as useless porn-movie without plot.. which is not good for fapping either

 

[Deleted member 4752509]

When you take the game too seriously

There are definitely downsides when it comes to Ch2. I thought I was the only one criticizing this game but I see others think the same and no normal person takes porn games seriously. In Ch1 Anna looked much better, now she has a face as if she had Down syndrome.

 

[Sadowdark]

There are definitely downsides when it comes to Ch2. I thought I was the only one criticizing this game but I see others think the same and no normal person takes porn games seriously. In Ch1 Anna looked much better, now she has a face as if she had Down syndrome.

Not to mention the hairstyle

 

[khantus]

The poll was wrong... for me is very clear in the start of CH1 and the already developed short Novel that Anna was not virgin at the high school (or college for teens)... and in any case the fact that she was raised by her alcoholic father implies that her father abused her! This shows that taking a poll with the wrong parameters is always a disaster especially with a character with a past outlined by years in all the games where she is the MC it is clear to all her fans that she has obtained the degree using sex because she was not virgin in the school times she took care of everything not having reliable parents and managed to graduate against all expectations. She is the perfect HEROINE!
(The only one who doesn't know that Anna is a total slut is Andrew)

It would be interesting to know who suggested (I think I know who is in the previous post someone already admitted that) to Deep to include Anna's virginity in the poll about a story where it was clear that at that age Anna was not a virgin!

Those who vote don't know the rules that prohibit creating games for adults with underage characters... I think those who voted wanted to know at what age Anna was deflowered without saying that the story wouldn't have made any sense due to the rules about age restrictions!


Hard Exam continuation was the real winner of that poll!!!... because the story of Anna "first time" cannot be writted due to the age restrictions!
Maybe is required a patch for apply the real age of that dumb Anna... Maybe a patch is required to apply the real age of the dumb Anna in this non sense short novel... She was never so Dumb in all the previous games

Not true... All incest games cums with a mod patch and/or the ability of the player to write the degree of relationship of the characters
Step-father step-grandpa step-mom and so on!

Non sense!
She was with Andrew at the school .... she tricked that bad boy for some reason ...maybe to cover her grandpa and her dad that was fucking her since years!... but she sure as hell wasn't a virgin.


Also you had doubt after voting ..So your not-wanted vote makes the disaster
but I can understand you... Zara was the real cause because she convinced everyone!
I hope that from now on you and all others including Deep understand that she has one purpose to change Anna's character.. and the Audiance!
This will cause the loss of many supporters who love Anna as she was in the old episodes

This short novel is a mess and Anna is unrecognizable!
She is no more Anna!

That's right, Anna is a true heroine because of all the adversities she went through in her past and still came out ahead.

Now, regarding the patch, historically Deep has never used a patch, why would he use it now? Although it is something that can't be ruled out in the future, if his patreons push him.

On the other hand, I don't think there is some culprit in all this, rather it's like FMag said most people voted for Anna's first time because they thought of something completely different and that was the reason why that option won.

It is clear that Deep wanted at least Anna's first time to be tender and romantic, all the kinky stuff is in the two chapters of the main story, but also Deep could have given the player the option to choose with whom Anna would lose her virginity, if with the grandfather by staying at home with him and that would lead to rough sex or with the motorcycle guy as it happens in the short novel, although that would have taken more time.

Regarding the story, Deep commented that there would be certain modifications to the story of the short novel, but I honestly don't think that will happen.

I think we shouldn't take the story of the short novels or the main story so seriously, it's just a game that doesn't necessarily have to have a certain logic, but it shouldn't be something so simple either, let's just enjoy watching Anna have sex with everyone.

 

[DD3DD]

I'm confused with everyone who wants Anna to be already fully corrupt in high school, then all her decisions in the other stories won't have any weight if you already think she has been through worse and she already is full corrupt level even before we ever meet her in Chapter 1.

I do agree that had her first time consensual been with one her Grandpa's friends (and the younger bike dude was was the grandkid who also got a chance at the same time with Anna) it would fit her current story line better as to why she likes Alfred and his Friends etc and the Christmas Mini story etc.

 

[Diconica]

I'm confused with everyone who wants Anna to be already fully corrupt in high school, then all her decisions in the other stories won't have any weight if you already think she has been through worse and she already is full corrupt level even before we ever meet her in Chapter 1.

I do agree that had her first time consensual been with one her Grandpa's friends (and the younger bike dude was was the grandkid who also got a chance at the same time with Anna) it would fit her current story line better as to why she likes Alfred and his Friends etc and the Christmas Mini story etc.

Not sure there is much to be confused about. I think it is pretty clear if you look at social trends why this is the case.
You have a bunch of people with ZERO attention span that want everything instantly. For the most part they are incapable of connecting the dots. Their educational level / reading skills have nose divided over the last 30 years...

And you expect something more from them. Honestly, I'm just surprised it isn't worse.

 

[88stanford88]

I think we shouldn't take the story of the short novels or the main story so seriously, it's just a game that doesn't necessarily have to have a certain logic, but it shouldn't be something so simple either, let's just enjoy watching Anna have sex with everyone.

The illogical VS the logical in a story makes the difference between a trashy film and a very well written film that can be rewatched many times over time... and since the digital world has existed and we can assume that the internet and the digital visual arts will survive our generation
paying attention to a story could be the difference between leaving a mark on history or being remembered like as just a dumb and insignificant artist

When you take the game too seriously

I take seriously everything I like to read ...mmm and you? Are you telling me that wasting hours reading an illogical story is just for jokes while you poop in the toilet?
I also read a lot in the toilet but I don't waste time with stupid and meaningless stories... this story It is not written to make us laugh at the author of the story.. it's not written to have a laugh and throw it in the trash...

I'd rather read the leaflets from my pills than read a nonsensical story

and then what is a forum about adult games if not to express our ideas by helping the artist to do his best to make the story better?
...I also write songs and novels...the best stories have to make sense...they can be dramatic or funny but what makes it interesting is logic...
It doesn't matter if you tell about a total whore or a saint who has never fucked anyone and falls in love with prince charming... each of these two stories must make sense....

"The First Time" is completely disconnected from the character that in the previous 5 releases were written to describe the character of Anna...

Now for sure is required a new Episode that make a connection about why Anna is a total slut in the CH1, Hard Exams, Christmas Gift, and OLD Church + CH2 ... those 5 games was written in the last 5/6 YEARS maybe 7! And in All of them her boyfriend is Andrew!



She loves Andrew... he is always present in all the games!
and she fucks with a stranger in Old Church too... Andrew is the perfect boyfriend for her lifestyle

her hairstyle is perfect!



She looks stunning with the perfect Hair-Cut and the right expression after realising that she has the cum of a perfect stranger that dripping out her pussy!
it is precisely the fact of seeing Andrew who loves Anna but practically never fucks her that makes great Anna character
this is the recurring motif of all Anna's stories! (except the dumb one)

If you take Andrew out of the story will make 7 years of storytelling illogical.
Anna without Andrew is just the story of a lonely nympho whore ... Anna that fucks everyone to make money just for herself..Anna selfishly?? .. a disaster... a very sad story of a lonely girl!
if Andrew dies the game is over.......

Dead Andrew = Dead Game!

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

The illogical VS the logical in a story makes the difference between a trashy film and a very well written film that can be rewatched many times over time... and since the digital world has existed and we can assume that the internet and the digital visual arts will survive our generation
paying attention to a story could be the difference between leaving a mark on history or being remembered like as just a dumb and insignificant artist

I take seriously everything I like to read ...mmm and you? Are you telling me that wasting hours reading an illogical story is just for jokes while you poop in the toilet?
I also read a lot in the toilet but I don't waste time with stupid and meaningless stories... this story It is not written to make us laugh at the author of the story.. it's not written to have a laugh and throw it in the trash...

I'd rather read the leaflets from my pills than read a nonsensical story

and then what is a forum about adult games if not to express our ideas by helping the artist to do his best to make the story better?
...I also write songs and novels...the best stories have to make sense...they can be dramatic or funny but what makes it interesting is logic...
It doesn't matter if you tell about a total whore or a saint who has never fucked anyone and falls in love with prince charming... each of these two stories must make sense....

"The First Time" is completely disconnected from the character that in the previous 5 releases were written to describe the character of Anna...

Now for sure is required a new Episode that make a connection about why Anna is a total slut in the CH1, Hard Exams, Christmas Gift, and OLD Church + CH2 ... those 5 games was written in the last 5/6 YEARS maybe 7! And in All of them her boyfriend is Andrew!
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She loves Andrew... he is always present in all the games!
and she fucks with a stranger in Old Church too... Andrew is the perfect boyfriend for her lifestyle

her hairstyle is perfect!
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She looks stunning with the perfect Hair-Cut and the right expression after realising that she has the cum of a perfect stranger that dripping out her vagina!
it is precisely the fact of seeing Andrew who loves Anna but practically never fucks her that makes great Anna character
this is the recurring motif of all Anna's stories! (except the dumb one)

If you take Andrew out of the story will make 7 years of storytelling illogical.
Anna without Andrew is just the story of a lonely nympho whore ... Anna that fucks everyone to make money just for herself..Anna selfishly?? .. a disaster... a very sad story of a lonely girl!
if Andrew dies the game is over.......

Dead Andrew = Dead Game!

Andrew can stay alive, but Jeremy’s a dead fat fuck even though he keeps popping up in a lot of games I play
Just keep Andrew bed ridden or wheel chaired back at her apartment so she can keep being naughty in front of him

 

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[88stanford88]

Andrew can stay alive, but Jeremy’s a dead fat fuck even though he keeps popping up in a lot of games I play
Just keep Andrew bed ridden or wheel chaired back at her apartment so she can keep being naughty in front of him

Jeremy is one of thee 2 main path and depend about player choices... you are free to play with him dead!

Andrew instead is the boyfriend where all kinky actions of Anna takes place with logical storytelling!

it is simply to make "Anna The First time" a perfect short novel related to the "original story" of Anna Exciting Affections and all the short novels released.

Just Andrew must be in this new short novel... to makes it great!
All the story is ok as is except that Deep must add something at the start and at the end:

When her grandpa gift his truck to Anna she happily calls her boyfriend Andrew inviting him on a camping trip with Rebecca and Brady promising to Andrew that she will finally give him her virginity.
But when they arrive at the campsite Andrew receives a phone call which forces him to leave for an important exam he had left unfinished... so poor Andrew has to go back to the city... but he says to his beloved Anna:
"Don't worry honey, you can stay with your sister Rebecca and I return in the evening ASAP"....
As soon as Andrew leaves David arrives with his motorbike ...and the story can remain exactly as it is now /her first time with "David the Biker". except for the ending...
In the evening Andrew returns to the campsite but it's late and everyone has to go home.... (poor Andrew)
But now Anna is no longer a virgin but she wants to keep her promise to Andrew... so she has to go to the doctor to get her hymen stitched up...for Andrew her beloved boyfriend...of course the doctor, grandpa, dad and and some male nurses fuck her good before stitching her up
----Unfortunately the evening that Andrew finally has to deflower Anna... she meets David in the afternoon who rips her stitches out...
.....and the poor Andrew will have to settle for an unstitched cunt.

This is the perfect "ANNA FIRST TIME" short novel that fits perfectly with all the previous Anna stories released from the past 6/7 years until today!

 

[Latex224]

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[Deleted member 4752509]

Jeremy is one of thee 2 main path and depend about player choices... you are free to play with him dead!

Andrew instead is the boyfriend where all kinky actions of Anna takes place with logical storytelling!

it is simply to make "Anna The First time" a perfect short novel related to the "original story" of Anna Exciting Affections and all the short novels released.

Just Andrew must be in this new short novel... to makes it great!
All the story is ok as is except that Deep must add something at the start and at the end:

When her grandpa gift his truck to Anna she happily calls her boyfriend Andrew inviting him on a camping trip with Rebecca and Brady promising to Andrew that she will finally give him her virginity.
But when they arrive at the campsite Andrew receives a phone call which forces him to leave for an important exam he had left unfinished... so poor Andrew has to go back to the city... but he says to his beloved Anna:
"Don't worry honey, you can stay with your sister Rebecca and I return in the evening ASAP"....
As soon as Andrew leaves David arrives with his motorbike ...and the story can remain exactly as it is now /her first time with "David the Biker". except for the ending...
In the evening Andrew returns to the campsite but it's late and everyone has to go home.... (poor Andrew)
But now Anna is no longer a virgin but she wants to keep her promise to Andrew... so she has to go to the doctor to get her hymen stitched up...for Andrew her beloved boyfriend...of course the doctor, grandpa, dad and and some male nurses fuck her good before stitching her up
----Unfortunately the evening that Andrew finally has to deflower Anna... she meets David in the afternoon who rips her stitches out...
.....and the poor Andrew will have to settle for an unstitched cunt.

This is the perfect "ANNA FIRST TIME" short novel that fits perfectly with all the previous Anna stories released from the past 6/7 years until today!

This "Anna's First Time" is linear and you can't choose what Anna does? Because after reading what you wrote, it's actually shit, good thing I didn't even touch it.

 

[88stanford88]

This "Anna's First Time" is linear and you can't choose what Anna does? Because after reading what you wrote, it's actually shit, good thing I didn't even touch it.

you mean you didn't even download it? Come on, it's not that bad
you make me look like the one who doesn't want you to play ... sorry for that

My Anna First time version is not the same released by Deep
it is Vanilla romantic linear story line that for me doesn't fit with the other Deepsleep releases
give it a chance.

Cheers

 

[Deleted member 4752509]

you mean you didn't even download it? Come on, it's not that bad
you make me look like the one who doesn't want you to play ... sorry for that

My Anna First time version is not the same released by Deep
it is Vanilla romantic linear story line that for me doesn't fit with the other Deepsleep releases
give it a chance.

Cheers

I understand and thanks for the answer, but I won't play it anyway, I have a negative attitude towards CH2 and I don't want to make it worse.

 

[88stanford88]

I understand and thanks for the answer, but I won't play it anyway, I have a negative attitude towards CH2 and I don't want to make it worse.

I think there are 2 very important things that make CH2 worse than chapter 1
1) Andrew has been in a coma for too long and this makes Anna an aimless whore
without Andrew she becomes selfish and all actions stop her to be like an heroine who wants to save her love and for that she is willing to do anything!
falling in love with another guy while Andrew dies would make her hateful…
I would hate the shit out of a girl who gets engaged to another while her true love is dying in a hospital

Instead she goes back to being a heroine when she fucks with doctors and nurses and becomes a porn star to pay for her boyfriend's surgery

It's now time that Andrew must back in the plot


2) Anna's hair hides her face making her uglier than many of her girl friends ... and then to me she seems fatter, shorter and less flexible ...
she has to go train her body at the "gym for blacks"

 

[FMag]

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Definitely not a saint but here are the wallpapers

 

[Latex224]

Definitely not a saint but here are the wallpapers

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Ohhh.. I think you have a small one hidden inside somewhere, hihi.

Thank You 4 sharing the wall-e's with us FMag! <3


I must say it is really nice to see Anna with her "pure/innocent" (aka original) hairstyle.

 

[MishelHappiness^_^]

Definitely not a saint but here are the wallpapers

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Wtf Who is this gorilla

 

[Latex224]

Wtf Who is this gorilla

My vote or guess would be:

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