VN Ren'Py Anna Exciting Affection [Ch.2 Ep.17] [DeepSleep]

[Zara Scarlet]

you are the queen of the nonsensical answers
I repeat:
Andrew can't get any route because he is not the MC
/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10496890

I suggest you take that up with the Devs, because I'm only saying what they've said. Which if you paid attention or tried to get your facts from a reliable source, you'd already know.

Of all the possible routes, it's the one I'm likely to be least interested in. I only bring it up at all, because I know there are people here who want Anna and Andrew to end up together. Personally, it wouldn't bother me if it never happened. It wasn't going to happen through most of Chapter 1. Until Awake joined as a Dev, Deep fully intended for Anna to eventually dump Andrew. Now you can believe that or not believe it. I don't really care. But I can assure you it was the case

If Deep ever intended for Anna and Andrew to end up together. He never would have made Andrew into such a pathetic loser of a character. You do get that he is a loser right? Even his own father who loves him. thinks he's a loser for god's sake. Deep set him up to fail. He just wouldn't have done that, if he'd intended for Anna and Andrew to stay together.

But from Chapter 2 onwards the situation has changed. Awake has persuaded Deep to give Andrew another chance. And that will be on the Renaissance Route, where Andrew will have to prove his worth to Anna. Now if you don't agree with that, then I suggest you take it up with the Devs, because only they know what form the Renaissance Route is going to take

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I honestly don't know whether to laugh or feel sorry for you...

I'm certainly getting a good laugh from you

 

[Zara Scarlet]

t is written in the start of the Chapter 1 she was rised by her always drunk father
how you can continue to write that?
ooo yes you are the QUEEN OF NONSENSE
you can read the dialogs at the start of CH1 where it is clearly written that the mother is divorced and that she left abroad
this is the post that shows the start of CH1

Where does it actually say she was abandoned? Her husband was an alcoholic and not a nice person to live with. Because Anna ends up living with her grandfather. So there could be any number of reasons why they got divorced, and nothing to suggest that her mother abandoned her.

That's the same post where you made the ridiculous accusation about me being the real author of Anna's First Time, plus the utterly bizarre insinuation that I was paying Deepsleep to make the game the way I want it to be ( which has since mysteriously disappeared). And this is the best one. Apparently Deep is allowing me to pass hints to him to change the game, so that he has a really good scapegoat to blame for any further delays to updates. Where do you come up with this rubbish for god's sake? Why should anyone believe anything you say?

 

[88stanford88]

But from Chapter 2 onwards the situation has changed. Awake has persuaded Deep to give Andrew another chance. And that will be on the Renaissance Route, where Andrew will have to prove his worth to Anna. Now if you don't agree with that, then I suggest you take it up with the Devs, because only they know what form the Renaissance Route is going to take

Where is this route?
Are you talking about the future?
you are a real Queen of nothing

Anna renaissance route???

Andrew is already his boyfriend!!!

You are just humiliating yourself!

There are only 2 main path in this game

1)JEREMY LIVE PATH! the one that i'm following
2) Jeremy dead
in both routes Andrew is Anna boyfriend

Anna is just fucking with anyone to collect the MONEY FOR SAVE Andrew and FOR GOD SAKE!!!!

I recommend you to talk about yourself because at this point i'm sure that you are not able to report the DeepSleep words
I've already seen your pics about 2020 poll posts from the dev where there is the prove that you are wrong.
That poll was a mess

A story without logic becomes a mess!

I suggest you take that up with the Devs, because I'm only saying what they've said. Which if you paid attention or tried to get your facts from a reliable source, you'd already know.

another non sense
I got facts by reading the original dialog published by DeepSleep in his games!!!
you are just writing bullshit!
IF YOUR dreaming SPOILER WILL BE PUBLISHED ... I will congratulate to you

Actually the versions published of the game are exactly how I said on all my posts!

 

[88stanford88]

Where does it actually say she was abandoned?

really???
What you do not understand in the phrase

her mother ran away abroad in a different country
and the next

She had to live with her always drunk father

this means that during her school years Anna lived with her alcoholic father
(because her mother abandoned her before the school days

do you really want me to believe that you are so stupid that you cannot understand the sentences written by DEEPSLEEP in Anna's introduction/ presentation scene of the first chapter

are you sure you can read?
there is something inside your head... it seems to me that your head is empty

 

[88stanford88]

Zara Scarlet how you can be sure about what DeepSleep is thinking when you can't even understand what he wrote in the game already published?
I have also posted the start of CH2 just for you to make understand that Anna is fucking everyone to save her boyfriend!
she feels responsible...
Do you remember the ending of the first chapter right? (I'm not sure at this point IF YOU ARE ABLE TO READ)

Andrew was shot because he was involved in the kidnapping of Rebecca (Anna's sister)
Anna isn't sure why Andrew was at the place where Rebecca was restricted... she still hasn't been able to talk to Andrew since HE IS IN A COMA

There is an important suspended story....
it is not sure why Andrew kinapped Rebecca!

AND PLEASE DO NOT SPOILER THE STORYLINE PROGRESSION!

 

[88stanford88]

Where does it actually say she was abandoned?

PROBABLE ANNA NEVER KNEW HER REAL MOTHER... Perhaps Rebecca knows Anna's mother...
Anna never talks about her mother because she was abandoned when she was less than 3 years old ... Anna do not rememver her mother at all
she can't talk about something she never know

She is motherless like the majority of the porn stars

 

[LochRaven]

This thread has officially made jerking off boring now. I hope you're all happy.

 

[DD3DD]

Fuck TikTok

I know, but YouTube Shorts was not working here so I tracked down the original TTK for you

 

[DD3DD]

Oh I probably know who can become Anna's next partner after Andrew, we need to introduce a new character into the game, an old lesbian who can be called for example Zara and Anna will be completely satisfied because no one eats pussy better than Zara Scarlet

I don't agree with the whole personal Zara attack , but an elderly, still hot, experienced lesbian would be a cool character to add to the game and balance having Alfred in the game.

 

[DD3DD]

She is motherless like the majority of the porn stars

Is this actually true or from your imaginary statistics library?

 

[DD3DD]

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this means that during her school years Anna lived with her alcoholic father
(because her mother abandoned her before the school days

One could draw the conclusion that her Dad became an alcoholic because of his wife (Anna's Mum) leaving vs him being an alcoholic prior as Anna stayed with her Dad vs leaving with her Mum.

And to be fair,

The timeline as to when her Mum abandoned them is not clear, as this this could have happened before/early/ mid/ or late school years as the impact of the abandonment and subsequent alcoholism by her Dad would have been a challenge to her successful studies and her decision rationale made in Hard Exams & Christmas Gift, in all possibilities.

 

[khantus]

I don't agree with the whole personal Zara attack , but an elderly, still hot, experienced lesbian would be a cool character to add to the game and balance having Alfred in the game.

I understand that many people didn't like the last short novel (I did) and that they don't agree with Zara's opinions, but starting with personal attacks doesn't seem right.
Zara is not to blame that Deep likes most of her ideas, in fact it was her idea to add the scene with the prostitute in the park bathrooms, many in discord agreed and Deep added that scene.
So, if someone doesn't agree with Deep taking into consideration Zara's ideas you can tell him in his Discord.

 

[88stanford88]

the timeline as to when her Mum abandoned them is not clear

Maybe you're right or maybe I'm the one who have it.. who knows
but using logic I deduce that....

...a good writer like Deeo is, doesn't make every event clear especially in introducing the main character to the readers at the CHAPTER ONE start!
It is clear that it was before the school years because the order of the 3 phrases are not causal

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this this could have happened before/early/ mid/ or late school years as the impact of the abandonment and subsequent alcoholism by her Dad would have been a challenge to her successful studies

Non sense because the last phrase explain with no doubt
that nevertheless Anna having lived with her alcoholic father she managed to graduate
she fucks at 18 with the professors to get the scholarship without which she would not have been able to graduate at the college because her always drunk daddy never paid a cent for her studies... he spent all the money on alcohol

This is pure writting skill with just three sentences Deep explained everything without doubt!
As i said maybe Rebecca knows this mystery... but since her old sister also gets into it with sex (Rebecca is whore that fucks with multiple BBC)... it can be assumed that Rebecca mothered Anna until before she married with Carl

it is possIble that Rebecca abduction has something to do with their mother---

I do not want to spoiler but I'M SURE that this story will be part of CH2 and everything will be revealed only when Andrew returns to consciousness
I also think that Deepsleep knowing Zara's propensity to talk too much in all the forums... is teasing her to avoid revealing THE REAL Anna's story before it's published.

One could draw the conclusion that her Dad became an alcoholic because of his wife (Anna's Mum) leaving vs him being an alcoholic prior as Anna stayed with her Dad vs leaving with her Mum.

this was not written in the introduction so Anna and her dad were both abandoned by their /mom/wife this is logic!
because the mom decided to go abroad this means: to avoid any further contact with them!

 

[88stanford88]

on so Anna and her dad were abandoned by their /mom/wife

I understand that many people didn't like the last short novel (I did) and that they don't agree with Zara's opinions, but starting with personal attacks doesn't seem right.

yeah it is not that bad.... but it is out of the canon of the main game
I would have liked it more if it had at least some of the tags.... should be posted in a different thread with the romance tag
as I wrote previously the story of Anna's First Time without Andrew doesn't work

Spoiler: This is HOW THE SHORT NOVEL WOULD BE WRITTEN TO BE PERFECT

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This is the perfect short novel that fits with all tags in this thread

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I don't agree with the whole personal Zara attack , but an elderly, still hot, experienced lesbian would be a cool character to add to the game and balance having Alfred in the game.

Yeah, I think that would be cool too. They wouldn't even have to be a lesbian, just an older 40 something female. The oldest woman in the game at the moment is Rebecca, who is 29.

 

[xapican]

I didn't even try the Minigame, although I love the whole Anna character and story, the ruckus all around scared me a bit off tbh.
so, I'll wait till Deep, and Awake have the Update for the Mainstory and Play.
before someone says my loss or similar coment I know it.
That was a conscious choice Kudos, and big thank's to Zara and those members who keep us updated about the progress of the game
abrazo.

 

[khantus]

on so Anna and her dad were abandoned by their /mom/wife

yeah it is not that bad.... but it is out of the canon of the main game
I would have liked it more if it had at least some of the tags.... should be posted in a different thread with the romance tag
as I wrote previously the story of Anna's First Time without Andrew doesn't work

Spoiler: This is HOW THE SHORT NOVEL WOULD BE WRITTEN TO BE PERFECT

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This is the perfect short novel that fits with all tags in this thread

on so Anna and her dad were abandoned by their /mom/wife

yeah it is not that bad.... but it is out of the canon of the main game
I would have liked it more if it had at least some of the tags.... should be posted in a different thread with the romance tag
as I wrote previously the story of Anna's First Time without Andrew doesn't work

Spoiler: This is HOW THE SHORT NOVEL WOULD BE WRITTEN TO BE PERFECT

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This is the perfect short novel that fits with all tags in this thread

The final fate of Anna's mother is known only to Deep and it wouldn't be a bad idea to ask her.
As for your version of the last short novel, I find it interesting until the part where you mention that Anna goes to the doctor to have her hymen sewn, I don't see any sense in it but it's your story and I respect it .
For me, the best thing would have been for the player to choose if he wanted Anna to have rough sex in her first time or not.
For example:
In the scene where the bikers arrive with Rebecca and ask Anna if she wants to go with them you could have given the option to stay with grandpa or go with them, choosing the second option everything happens the same as in novel currently.
But if you choose to stay with grandpa, Anna has rough sex on her first time, I don't know, it occurs to me that in the course of the day Anna's grandfather's best friend arrives and brings along beers and snacks so they can spend the evening drinking and telling funny anecdotes, at some point grandpa falls asleep but grandpa's friend and Anna continue chatting and at some point they start flirting, as she is a bit drunk and also secretly, she has been attracted to grandpa's best friend for a long time, that's why she doesn't find the provocative comments he says unpleasant and so without her expecting it, he kisses her and then fucks her hard, with grandpa asleep next to them and in the middle of the session Anna receives a call from Andrew to talk to her, Anna does everything possible to contain her moans and screams of pleasure.
Anyway, everyone has their own stories and I still don't understand why the last short novella was placed here, it should be in the other thread with the other novels.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

it is possIble that Rebecca abduction has something to do with their mother---

Where do you get this from at all? Since we don't know anything about her mother, apart from her divorcing and moving abroad. How could you possibly come up with that kind of scenario? There is nothing whatsoever to suggest anything like that. Rebecca was abducted by Fitzgerald's gang, as part of his gang war with Sergey. She was going to be leverage, to force Sergey to make concessions. To suggest it had anything to do with her mother, is just crazy.

 

[88stanford88]

Where do you get this from at all?

because I know how to write a great story
I'm a professional writer!

Rebecca was abducted by Fitzgerald's gang, as part of his gang war with Sergey.

Maybe the real boss of Fitzgerald gang is Anna Mom!

If you know how to write a story... everything is possible!
And Deep knows very well how to write!

Edit: mine are only logical hypotheses and therefore it is not sure that what I have written will happen but you will never find explicitly written what surprise Deep has foreseen before the release ... but for sure a similar surprise will happen