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Who will be our wallpaper saint today? 
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This "Anna's First Time" is linear and you can't choose what Anna does? Because after reading what you wrote, it's actually shit, good thing I didn't even touch it.Jeremy is one of thee 2 main path and depend about player choices... you are free to play with him dead!
Andrew instead is the boyfriend where all kinky actions of Anna takes place with logical storytelling!
it is simply to make "Anna The First time" a perfect short novel related to the "original story" of Anna Exciting Affections and all the short novels released.
Just Andrew must be in this new short novel... to makes it great!
All the story is ok as is except that Deep must add something at the start and at the end:
When her grandpa gift his truck to Anna she happily calls her boyfriend Andrew inviting him on a camping trip with Rebecca and Brady promising to Andrew that she will finally give him her virginity.
But when they arrive at the campsite Andrew receives a phone call which forces him to leave for an important exam he had left unfinished... so poor Andrew has to go back to the city... but he says to his beloved Anna:
"Don't worry honey, you can stay with your sister Rebecca and I return in the evening ASAP"....
As soon as Andrew leaves David arrives with his motorbike
In the evening Andrew returns to the campsite but it's late and everyone has to go home.... (poor Andrew)
But now Anna is no longer a virgin but she wants to keep her promise to Andrew... so she has to go to the doctor to get her hymen stitched up...for Andrew her beloved boyfriend
----Unfortunately the evening that Andrew finally has to deflower Anna... she meets David in the afternoon who rips her stitches out...
.....and the poor Andrew will have to settle for an unstitched cunt.
This is the perfect "ANNA FIRST TIME" short novel that fits perfectly with all the previous Anna stories released from the past 6/7 years until today!
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you mean you didn't even download it? Come on, it's not that bad
you make me look like the one who doesn't want you to play ... sorry for that
My Anna First time version is not the same released by Deep
it is Vanilla romantic linear story line that for me doesn't fit with the other Deepsleep releases
give it a chance.
Cheers
I understand and thanks for the answer, but I won't play it anyway, I have a negative attitude towards CH2 and I don't want to make it worse.you mean you didn't even download it? Come on, it's not that bad
you make me look like the one who doesn't want you to play ... sorry for that
My Anna First time version is not the same released by Deep
it is Vanilla romantic linear story line that for me doesn't fit with the other Deepsleep releases
give it a chance.
Cheers
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I think there are 2 very important things that make CH2 worse than chapter 1
1) Andrew has been in a coma for too long and this makes Anna an aimless whore
without Andrew she becomes selfish and all actions stop her to be like an heroine who wants to save her love and for that she is willing to do anything!
falling in love with another guy while Andrew dies would make her hateful…
I would hate the shit out of a girl who gets engaged to another while her true love is dying in a hospital
Instead she goes back to being a heroine when she fucks with doctors and nurses and becomes a porn star to pay for her boyfriend's surgery
It's now time that Andrew must back in the plot
2) Anna's hair hides her face making her uglier than many of her girl friends ... and then to me she seems fatter, shorter and less flexible ...
she has to go train her body at the "gym for blacks"
Definitely not a saint but here are the wallpapersWho will be our wallpaper saint today?
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Ohhh.. I think you have a small one hidden inside somewhere, hihi.
Thank You 4 sharing the wall-e's with us FMag!
<3 I must say it is really nice to see Anna with her "pure/innocent" (aka original) hairstyle.
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My vote or guess would be:Wtf
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It seems that in the future Sergei will make an operation to enlarge his device, in order to totally destroy Anna's assMy vote or guess would be:
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Can someone help me with a doubt, are all the chapters in renpy now? I know that formerly chapter 1 was done in RPGM. Did the dev port chapter 1 to renpy as well or is it still in RPGM?
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The Chapter one port is this one https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exc...nofficial-renpy-remake-v2-0-osmcuser132.8482/
Chapter one from the Dev is still RenPy i guess
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A threesome is too boring for my taste, I would love to see an orgy where 5 or more guys fuck Anna and Rebekah hard
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I am new to this game and I have played it so far and it’s pretty interesting. I like to see more of Anna and John. They kept mentioning about their past steamy encounter in Anna’s home but I think I missed that scene due to some choice I made. Can anyone tell as to what choice I should make to see them in action? Thank you!!
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HEY MODs... where are my "likes?"
I have lost about 300 in just one day?
I have lost about 300 in just one day?
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I have lost anoher 30 likes
please do not like my posts i think there is a strange algorithm which subtracts instead of adding
I'm sorry, but you're wrong about a lot of things. Firstly, US scholarships only last for one year. At the end of each year, you need to re-apply if you want to continue receiving that scholarship for the following year. So you could get one at 18 for your Freshman year, but for your Sophomore year you'd have to go through the whole process again, and for your Junior and Senior years. Also you can still apply for a scholarship after you've started college. It's entirely possible, to go through your first three years without a scholarship and just apply for one in the Senior year, which is what Anna appears to be doing.The fact the Deep is taking ideas from other means that he is out of ideas!
Discord is not the center of the world and make a discussion like the one you had on discord just to make acceptable what doesn't make sense
Normally the exams where the students struggle to get a high grade like A+ to get the scholarship (this is in hard exam)
Hard exam is located in a High School
HIGH SCHOOL ends at the age of 18 and they are Hard exams specially focused on get a place in a prestigious college like
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etc etc... those exams decide if you can go to university also it is not possible for a student to have a scholarship at the age of 21 in fact the degree arrives around the age of max 23/24
IN HARD EXAMS SHE TALKS ABOUT SCOLARSHIP so she is not in a COLLEGE!
SCHOLARSHIP REQUIREMENTS ARE: maximum 18 Years old!
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High school uniforms are not worn to college if a girl wore such a uniform going to college she would be laughed at and humiliated
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you are wrong also about Andrew! Here in the PART 1 when Anna is starting to fuck Mr. Thompson ans she compare the size of his cock with Andrew
So Andrew is in the same high school or she is dating a college student!
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THIS IS HAR EXAMS PART 1 and part2 is just some day after the part1
In the part 2 she was blackmailed by the Janitor or the scholl director due to avoid losing the scholarship
Anna "Hard exams" is set in the exams that are required to go to college so she has 17/18th that are the only one when a student can hope to have a SCHOLARSHIP!
If "Anna First Time" was located before the "HARD EXAM"....
.... she lost her virginity when she was 15/16 years old only in this case the story becomes much more believable.
(usually 16 years the perfect age to lost the virginity for a girl that lives
so you are the one responsible of this non mess
If Deep liked the idea is ok but this story is a NON-CANON o
I understand the patreon rules that Anne cannot hae 15th or 16th but this is the normal age for loosing virginity...
hope Deep soon realizes the mistake he is making by listening to your suggestions which may be the cause of the delay of the updates
So I was hoping for just 2 months delay
you said 3????
This is big disaster in the logic of Anna storyline!
I will take a look in the Deep patreon ranking just in case!
I also do not understand why "Anna First Time" was posted in this thread... it was an error... because all Deep short stories have separate thread from this one
why this stupid non sense short story is in the "Anna Exiting Affection" thread!!!
DOES THIS MEAN ANNA EXCITING AFFECTION IS CHANGING HER AUDIENCE?
and yes" this game is STUPID... I will think about supporting Deep again for soo long!
Good luck with your non-sense suggestions that are making a mess in a story that was a masterpiece!
Also just because she's wearing a school uniform in the renders, doesn't mean she's not at college. We know she's at college during Hard Exam, because it says so several times in the text. It doesn't say anything about her being at High School. Yes apart from military colleges, you don't have to wear a uniform at American universities. But what your seeing is simply an error by the Devs, and not an indication in any way that Anna is still at school.
As far as Andrew is concerned. In Hard Exam II, the Devs changed the relationship between Anna and Andrew. Yes, in Hard Exam Anna is already dating Andrew. But in Hard Exam II, she's just starting to become aware of him, and hasn't decided yet whether she wants to become his girlfriend. At the time, I mentioned this discrepancy to Deep, believing it to be an error in the text. But he explained they had changed their mind, and decided to make it so Anna has not actually started dating Andrew in Hard Exam II. So ignore what happened in Hard Exam, as far as Andrew is concerned, it's no longer canon.
I also don't think patreon rules have anything to do with Anna losing her virginity at 17. Anna is supposed to be a scholarfly nerd and definitely not a slut in anyway, at this time. She loses her virginity when she meets the right person, and not because she feels she has to, because all her peers have already done it much younger. What the short novels do indicate, is that Anna is a much more sexual person, than she believes herself to be. She isn't really aware of the effect she has on men, and that's how she remains relatively innocent and pure, even after some fairly dramatic sexual experiences in the short novels. It's only when she has the accident, putting her in a constant state of arousal, that she can't deny what she is anymore
As far as Deep listening to my suggestions is concerned. Well all it resulted in was a poll, of which my suggestion was but one choice. And it just happened to get the most votes. I didn't even get to vote in that poll, because my internet connection was down at the time. Lots of other people make suggestions on Discord, that get put into the game. That's why there's a separate section devoted to suggestions at all. So that people can have their say, about what things they want in the game. If the Devs took no notice of it, then what would be the point of it? It's there for a purpose, to get people more interested in the development of the game. And allow them to actually contribute, rather than just play or make criticisms.
And this idea that Deep is lacking in ideas and relies on others, is complete nonsense. Shortly after Awake joined him as a co-developer, he told me that him and Deep had had long discussions about the future direction of the game, and together they'd mapped it out far into the future. They already have a pretty good idea about how the game will reach it's end, but their plan allows for some flexibility, which means ideas from patrons can be added as long as they don't conflict with the overall plan. So I'm sorry, but what you're claiming here, couldn't be further from the truth.
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