VN Ren'Py Abandoned Arbiter's Gaze [v0.8] [ProneHouse Studio]

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UncleVT

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Busy with the art. 0.3 should be ready in a week and scratch.
This is Lindsay with Jess, a new friend she'll make next update. Who doesn't love a redhead?
 

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Here's a little scene from the 0.3 update. Still working on the art and it should be done before next friday... If videog- I mean my busy social life doesn't get in the way.​
 
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You asked for feedback ... it is a great game with good artwork and I am looking forward to seeing how it unfolds, there is nothing that I have seen thus far that I would consider as being 'bad'.
 

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Oh my god! Writing in this game is fantastic. One of the best written stories on this forum! Great style. And so many choices.
Dear author, you've real talent. Simply astonishing - so much better than 80% of games here. Keep up the good work, please.
 
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Patreon Adrien has been kind enough to send me a message with several questions, and I thought I would answer some of them in a public post.

I'm doing this alone, for now. I choose a Patreon name with Studio in case I ever manage to get some help with the music or the coding.
Will the game stop with the MC's return? I have an ending planned (with some variations depending on the route Lindsay is going) and it's in the Island.
Some body modification, easy to apply in a simple overlay (like a cute dragon tatoo, or a couple piercings) would be a good idea, but I'm not thinking of anything too extreme.
My influences for the game? Nothing comes to mind at the moment, really. A bunch of bad 70's explotation movies like Enter the Dragon or Emmanuelle, pretty much.
About Lindsay's disappearing bush. You're right. I had planned to have a scene where she's given the option to shave it or keep it, but I didn't have the time. I will put it in the game in 0.4. Maybe earlier as a Patron- only 0.3.1 version.

Stay tuned, and thank you for your support.
 

Ragnar

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Nice art and interesting plot, hope it gets more fans.
 
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No Ardoo I have only seen those 5. Remember that we are still at the character and place introduction stage, and the characters will probably be back later...
 
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yihman1

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I like the story, and artwork, and numerous choices. I dislike how slow content comes along.
 
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