VN Ren'Py Ariana’s Perverted Diary [v0.7.3] [Girls on Top]

[Mograx]

I don't mean that part of it, I mean how they talk to each other.

They don't really talk, just bitch. They don't act friendly to each other.

I agree to a degree.

The writing has, to my mind, established clearly their friendship is entrenched enough that the bantering is a consistent aspect and seems to be an integral part of their dynamic.

If an issue were to be taken here, it's that a friendship cannot exist solely off of friendly bantering. Affection has to occur at some point, eventually, especially among women. For what a random poster's opinion is worth, I think that at least 1 scene or indication of Felicia hugging/hand holding/ or literal vocal affirmation of "I know this situation is crazy, but we're in this together and I'm here with you. I care about your well-being" would go a long way in establishing their obviously intended best friend dynamic. Namely because, as Ava pointed out, essentially every scene feels almost antagonistic between them as a result of 100% banter and virtually lacking entirely any tenderness or warmth between them.

Obviously a porn game is going to porn, but sometimes it's the little things that go a long way in fooling the player's reality of it. Just because we know we're ultimately after the giant banana horde behind King K Rool doesn't mean we don't want to enjoy donkey and diddy kong's friendship along the way.

 

[Girls on Top Games]

I agree to a degree.
For what a random poster's opinion is worth, I think that at least 1 scene or indication of Felicia hugging/hand holding/ or literal vocal affirmation of "I know this situation is crazy, but we're in this together and I'm here with you. I care about your well-being" would go a long way in establishing their obviously intended best friend dynamic.

See hugging


Really I'm just joking here. I understand completely what you guys are saying

 

[Mograx]

See hugging
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Really I'm just joking here. I understand completely what you guys are saying

I wish Ariana would hug me like that.

Preferably before the cock as large as my forearm showed up, but I'd take take any hug at this point

 

[Bingoogus]

Yes! The futa phase has begun! Time to impregnate all the women and make their bellies round and their tits milky...

 

[Buletti]

Are we getting forced preg stuff now?

There is none in planned tags. And in case preg is introduced, will it be avoidable?

 

[BroProHelpas]

Are we getting forced preg stuff now?

there's an option to "cum outside"

 

[HornyyPussy]

Why does this have a futa/trans tag? I don't see any.
The funny thing is for some reason I remember this being either a MC futa or the sister was futa when I played a long long time ago but that no longer seems to be the case.
Am I missing something?

It has that tag because the MC gets a cock through the spell book.

 

[JohnSheridan]

It has that tag because the MC gets a cock through the spell book.

Yep, I was to impatient. I deleted my now dumb question. lol

 

[HornyyPussy]

Yep, I was to impatient. I deleted my now dumb question. lol

Been there, done that

 

[Xazz]

Yooo futa and possible pregnant content? hell yeah

 

[kinvar]

Honostly in my opinion it will probably ruin or diminish the story by adding the D now , was perfectly right now with the full Lesbian content . i just hope we get an option to get rid of it right away . don't know why ppl always insist of adding D's in it , the only one i want or need to see is mine . Are ppl really that afraid of just a pure Les game or what ? Anyway i do still like the game and will continue to play it , i just hope we get the options to play the way we want .

 

[HornyyPussy]

Honostly in my opinion it will probably ruin or diminish the story by adding the D now , was perfectly right now with the full Lesbian content . i just hope we get an option to get rid of it right away . don't know why ppl always insist of adding D's in it , the only one i want or need to see is mine . Are ppl really that afraid of just a pure Les game or what ? Anyway i do still like the game and will continue to play it , i just hope we get the options to play the way we want .

Having the option to get rid of it would create a shit ton of extra work for the dev so I hope not. As I understand it this was the plan all along and not something the dev decided to add at the last second.

 

[Overlord070]

Honostly in my opinion it will probably ruin or diminish the story by adding the D now , was perfectly right now with the full Lesbian content . i just hope we get an option to get rid of it right away . don't know why ppl always insist of adding D's in it , the only one i want or need to see is mine . Are ppl really that afraid of just a pure Les game or what ? Anyway i do still like the game and will continue to play it , i just hope we get the options to play the way we want .

This was never planned as a pure lesbian game and the dev was always upfront about it, sounds like you should have informed yourself on what this VN was about.

 

[Overlord070]

See hugging
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Really I'm just joking here. I understand completely what you guys are saying

We need more friendly scenes like this, hugging, kissing, 69'ing, felicia watching her mom take it from behind...you know classic girl friendship stuff.

 

[Aioto]

Honostly in my opinion it will probably ruin or diminish the story by adding the D now , was perfectly right now with the full Lesbian content . i just hope we get an option to get rid of it right away . don't know why ppl always insist of adding D's in it , the only one i want or need to see is mine . Are ppl really that afraid of just a pure Les game or what ? Anyway i do still like the game and will continue to play it , i just hope we get the options to play the way we want .

I just find lesbian porn less hot than straight or futa porn, and I think I'm not alone in that.

On another note, the dev's spelling is really the weak spot here. There are several words in this story that look like the dev didn't know how to spell and just sounded them out (incorrectly). One repeat offender is "orgasim".

 

[CammyTheWhite]

Congrats on the update, you’ve clearly put a lot of effort and passion into this game and it shows. That said, this will be my last time here, I just don’t really enjoy futa content, and since it looks like it’s becoming a mandatory part of the experience, I won’t be able to continue following along. It’s honestly a shame, because this has been one of the greatest lesbian VNs out there, and now it feels like it’s heading in the same direction so many other F/F games go, which is to add a cock.


No hard feelings though, I wish you all the best, and I’m genuinely sorry you had to deal with censorship on Itch.io. Best of luck with future projects, you deserve success.

Xiao!

 

[katabasi]

It has that tag because the MC gets a cock through the spell book.

shouldnt this have the futa mc tag then?

 

[HornyyPussy]

shouldnt this have the futa mc tag then?

Since this just happened in the game please put that in a spoiler!

But yes, it should have that tag

 

[HornyyPussy]

now it feels like it’s heading in the same direction so many other F/F games go

It was always heading in that direction.

 

[lockerxx]

so coming inside the sister has any consequence yet or just for the visual?