DUUUUUUDDDDDDE!!!!!!!
Love the story, art and humor in this VN....haven't giggled this much about a VN in ages, if ever. Not even finished chapter 5 yet and just had to write this when i saw MC and Artemis at the clothes shop, not only did you give us some great eye candy with Artemis and Valerie but then you pull out the BIG GUNS and drop a Fifth Element reference

as soon as i saw the card i already had that scene in my head lol...like your'e a mind reader or something. Anyways .... gotta get back to the story .... keep up the good work dude