1.19 is up.
This place is a pretty good place for me to stop advancing the "main plot" and begin backtracking on the existing stuff.
I want to add more character moments and iron out everything so I can give each girl a bit more depth.
Rachel and Camilla particularly need it.
I'd also like to improve the soundscape a bit, though I'm always limited on what I can have access too... Budget is budget after all.
I'm still running the
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and we're more than a third of the way there.
I can only ask for your help
Maybe I should add NSFW figures... Hmm...
Anyway, as always, if you spot something, don't hesitate to report it, and I'll try to fix it as soon as I can.
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Not a bad game. I rather enjoyed it.
We're missing vocative commas everywhere, as well as a few others, like after 'well' or before 'but'.
And here's my list of all the other stuff that needs correcting. Of course, this is not a complete list. I'm sure I overlooked some things, and I basically just took notes as I played, so anything that comes after choices I didn't pick is absent from this list.
Speaking of, thanks a lot. These will be very useful (not implemented the corrections yet, sorry)