Victorius Astral Tried out the latest public version. Thought the game was overall pretty enjoyable.
- I like the job you've done making sure each girl feels like a distinct character. Don't really have any overall notes on that front.
- You can probably give the girls more to do, in terms of charachter conflicts involving the external world. Grace has one in the form of her mother, but that's more of a vague conflict as opposed to a tangible one that demands any kind of immediate action. I'd go out of your way to give the cast members Specific and Immediate wants that string together into a larger conflict.
- World building I feel, is one of the game's bigger weaknesses. With post-apocalyspis I love getting little hints and teasers of the world and what it's like now. Don't give a lot. But, like strange radio broadcasts from south America. Strange stuff going on via the internet. Etc etc. Make it feel like the apocalypse is happening
to the world and not just the immediate cast.
- I'll admit, I'm a sucker for BDSM content. The introduction of it for Alice is a big draw for the game, and my personal hope (indipendent of any game design), is that you give the player more oppertunity to form a dom/sub relationship with the girls, alice and the rest.