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Fastbuck

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ok got the first choice
and i´m confused is it a harem or will it be cheating? i mean mc is still married?
yeah i´m not playing the nice dude
 
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PrideOfVVibu

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0.2.5 REWORK AGAIN?! :D

Yeah, yeah rework again 0.2.5
Good day, ladies and gentlemen!
Long time no see, right?

I’m back with some great news. At this point, I guess it's becoming a tradition to rework the prologue after every release. And yes, I’ve done it again — once more! But I don’t see your happy faces... Oh, you're asking why?

Well, it's simple: I messed up! Let’s just say I gathered all the feedback from everywhere and everyone — and realized I’ve been doing some things wrong. Turns out, many of you wanted more clarity — what’s going on, why, and how. And instead of giving you answers, I just threw even more questions at you. Genius, right?

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(Small spoiler: since I removed the scene with Anya, I’ve decided to make up for it by adding three scenes in the next update.)
I hope those three scenes will match the previous one quality, tbh anya and her scene is the one that made me paid attention to this game at first, without it I might've skipped this (as in didn't know this good game exist). While I'm still kinda struggle with all this rework, like anya and shiya appearance downgrade (imo) but at least olivia hairstyle is kinda better now... who am I kidding, at least GIVE BACK MY PRECIOUS ANYA T-T
 

ImSenjou

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Apr 15, 2019
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The scene with Anya is simply wrong, the dev did the right thing by removing it, I know there are those players who like to play as a jerk MC, but the MC in this story is not like that, and that's why it didn't make sense to have that scene.
If you want scenes with Anya, fine, just wait until there are scenes with her, but that one really deserved to be removed.

We've already seen several flashbacks of the MC's past and his interactions, so we can say for sure that he's not a jerk, especially with Olivia and her little sister.

Those who like playing as a jerk MC will never agree with this, but I'm happy with the removal of that scene.
 
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ChubbyFatBoy

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The scene with Anya is simply wrong, the dev did the right thing by removing it, I know there are those players who like to play as a jerk MC, but the MC in this story is not like that, and that's why it didn't make sense to have that scene.
If you want scenes with Anya, fine, just wait until there are scenes with her, but that one really deserved to be removed.

We've already seen several flashbacks of the MC's past and his interactions, so we can say for sure that he's not a jerk, especially with Olivia and her little sister.

Those who like playing as a jerk MC will never agree with this, but I'm happy with the removal of that scene.
Now I'm not saying it should've been removed. Maybe pushed back a bit or just add some more about him and his past. But it was weird as hell. Like you said we see how he is. A good dude, good grandpa, obviously still troubled with the wife. Saves the girl, then we get the option shortly after and throat fuck her. And I'm just sitting there like... where the hell this come from? Viewing both options for... obvious scientific purposes. Turning it down matched personality. Going through with it and I'm asking who is this dude? Felt like a scene added because we still need some poon in the porn game.

I mean the MC is going to be a horn dog? Cool. Little rough with the foreplay? Cool. Welcome to the club of almost everything on this website. But maybe work them little details in beforehand. And the bathroom scene afterwards was just.... something.
 
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soemantri9

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Nov 7, 2022
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Tried it. Well, it is disappointment.

Fine beautiful pics, fine setting and polished idea. But why so boring and tedious start? Why throw at me so much names from the get go? Why MC so old and fucked up? Oh, wife, ok, but then... SON, GRANDDAUGHTER, da fuq? I dropped it right when you start another sad memories on the porch.

No, dude, just, no. Im not here for constantly crying about whole family some sad veteran. Even pretty renders would not do it.

I was expected action, adventures, challenges, girls in more believable conditions and spicy situations. Not this sad mess.
So.. Is it actually that bad? Just some old veteran sob story? And with many rework im kinda paranoid about this game
 
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pitao

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May 18, 2023
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So.. Is it actually that bad? Just some old veteran sob story? And with many rework im kinda paranoid about this game
Well is not that bad imo and no need to get kinda paranoid about it hehe. I still didn't played the rework but for what I've seen previously, and this is a first time creator for what I'm aware, they are still inexperienced in presenting a correct narrative of events and interaction/dialogues between the characters, in resume inexperienced storyteller.

It is always something in our minds and then show a different thing for the readers, but they are learning and taking the constructive criticism and suggestion their supporters are giving and that is a good sign. They will learn techniques for sure to improve the storytelling and mostly learn to better plan each scene and the overall departments of game developing.

What bothered me the least was some convoluted events and plot and that is easily corrected and for what I read on devlogs here in the thread and feedback from the dev it seems most of the rework was on this, I'll check it in the next days.

What bothered me the most was how the dialogues between characters flow, seems dry (I even find hard to say an accurate word hehe, seems unnatural dialogues between people), it is harder to correct that mindset from the developer but with outside help (like it was suggested in the thread before, an editor) and experience they can improve a lot. It is always better to stay positive and not getting "paranoid" about it, this game have more pluses for me than minus items.
 
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kazeiheikaya

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The scene with Anya is simply wrong, the dev did the right thing by removing it, I know there are those players who like to play as a jerk MC, but the MC in this story is not like that, and that's why it didn't make sense to have that scene.
If you want scenes with Anya, fine, just wait until there are scenes with her, but that one really deserved to be removed.

We've already seen several flashbacks of the MC's past and his interactions, so we can say for sure that he's not a jerk, especially with Olivia and her little sister.

Those who like playing as a jerk MC will never agree with this, but I'm happy with the removal of that scene.
yah i just flat out agree tbh lol. The scene with Anya made virtually 0 sense at all. Hate that this was a non-update (technically) but definitely understood the reasoning behind it. It was a good scene but could have just flipped it in a way that was more realistic to the events rather than making the MC have a random dark side that only came out once and vanished permanently. Couldn't quite fathom that one.
 
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