Ren'Py Ataegina [v0.9.8] [Kthulian]

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This has probably been talked about but it's kinda weird that Liliana is so surprised by my dick in the threesome with Fannay when we've fucked a bunch of times, at least on the evil path there should be some slight variation to dialogue
 
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2020/01/17: Updated Mod, 0.4.7

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What I meant was, on top of the obvious grammar mistakes (missing punctuation, misspelling and so forth), the dialogue somehow lacks both the flourish and the mundanity of regular speech between people. The exchanges between the characters just fall flat. Simply put, no one talks like that. I attributed this to the dev's language barrier since it does seem like he's trying. Albeit I've only played for the first couple of hours so I have no idea how it turns out later on.

Ps. The OP description needs a major overhaul, but it's a perfect example of what I mean.

Pss. My purpose isn't to bash the game or the dev, whom has kindly provided this game for us. The post was but a criticism, for I noticed I started grinding my teeth during one of the many "Me Tarzan, you Jane" type of convos and almost stopped right there. I desperately want to like it and continue as I've gathered it gets all good and juicy eventually.
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You are not alone in this sentiment. I touched upon this topic in my review for this game. The dev isn't a native speaker, and it definitely shows. I don't really mind occasional typos, misspellings, grammar, and punctuation problems. What I do take notice of is the fluidity and naturalness of the dialogues and the strength of the prose. A script that is run through grammarly and proofread could still fall very short in the writing department.

The characters in this game sound like they are speaking at a 5th grade level. When you are writing without the necessary fluency in the language, it's very hard to show specific speech patterns, mannerisms, and personality through dialogue.

Now I am not just shitting on this game because I didn't enjoy it or something. I really do like this game and play it every few updates. The strength of the writing is in the lore, world building and the overall plot developments.
 
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I always prefer goin on the good path in games, but this one has Bredita who is the very definition of the phrase, ULTIMATE SEXY EVIL GODDESS.

The only gripe i have with the evil path is when she asks if she can have Mida, the only possibilty for femdom (which is one of my fave porn styles) is to let her, but with how loving Mida is, I really REALLY don't want to.

I hope that in the end of the evil path, the MC would get a choice depending on my alignment points and relationship level with Bredita, that I would get a choice enter a relationship with her, with the opputunity to either be her (please say that this could happen someday when the final updates come in) loyal submissive husband/slave.

Her grand mage husband and rule all the world together as her equal.

Or (the path i am least interested in) become her dark master and have her at the MC's beck and call.
 
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cxx said:
no bloodrelations on this game.
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The MC's Mother and sister are in the game, both when he's a child and now he's at the college.
I know that there was a lot of discussion about this, a while back, but is it confirmed now that they are not blood relations?
Sorry, can't remember specifics now.
 
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whichone said:
The MC's Mother and sister are in the game, both when he's a child and now he's at the college.
I know that there was a lot of discussion about this, a while back, but is it confirmed now that they are not blood relations?
Sorry, can't remember specifics now.
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yes mommy and sister were in early game (prologue) and mc's dreams but no sign of them since then so no bloodrelatives atm.
 
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whichone said:
The MC's Mother and sister are in the game, both when he's a child and now he's at the college.
I know that there was a lot of discussion about this, a while back, but is it confirmed now that they are not blood relations?
Sorry, can't remember specifics now.
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Hmm. There is a dream scene about it.
 
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cxx said:
yes mommy and sister were in early game (prologue) and mc's dreams but no sign of them since then so no bloodrelatives atm.
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Isn't the blond demon hunter chick the sister and the mother is rescued by mc when lust wanted to infuse the red crystals in mc ?
 
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Raziel_8 said:
Isn't the blond demon hunter chick the sister and the mother is rescued by mc when lust wanted to infuse the red crystals in mc ?
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maybe, it hasn't been bopped up so much that it'd have stuck.
 
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Paapi said:
But not blood related
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Where is this from? I know that it's speculation that they may be, but I do not remember the game specifically stating that they're not?
Is it officially stated that they are not? Or is this speculation, too?
 
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Paapi

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whichone said:
Where is this from? I know that it's speculation that they may be, but I do not remember the game specifically stating that they're not?
Is it officially stated that they are not? Or is this speculation, too?
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Nah. Nah. There was a drem scene in which a demon searching for an "item" & mc's foster parents got a kid from there
 
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