Ren'Py Abandoned Au-pair Innocence [v0.9 SE] [Alex]

[wrx21]

@armion82
as i said,i kinda suck expressing myself on english
i know the game won't be changed in a way that david path will be erased,but it will be changed with addition of second path that completely counters the main one,which will basically kill the game for me.Branching works when it's done right from the start,like in DMD for example.Here,it will be added in the "middle" of the game,after i already got to know characters and got involved with the game the way it is now.
I haven't expected another update fully focused on david/tasha and nothing for alex,i agree three updates in a row for them was becoming too much,i was expecting moving further forward with the story and events we had so far,there are options to continue this game even after tasha rejected alex and became davids lover,now instead we will get apologetic update that will be focused on bringing alex/tasha together.

 

[beijing999]

No, just NO!
The author cannot write vanilla sex scenes, he really needs to take a step back and review his work.
Renders? In general they are beautiful, keep up the quality, though a few more wouldn't go amiss, different expressive positions in conversations, different angles during sex, visible moisture (or explaination of it missing - notabley after BJs the cocks all look dry and where you can see penetration is all looks pretty dry, not to mention a number of the shower scenes.
Apart from all the men appearing quite short or the women all tall, there also seems to be incosistancy and illogic in heights. Eg when David is sat on Alex's bed talking to him, he is only a little lower than him, but the length of his thighs appear a lot longer than I would expect to make him the same as shots of them stood up.
Story? There is potential, poor Romania girl comes to work for a household that is apparently sympathetic to former Soviet bloc people. Mother is Russian with a chip on her shoulder or a grudge against certain people or is just milking father and wants no competition. Father who looks like the offspring of a bear and a dinosaur, is man in position to and more than happy to use contacts, position and money to his advantage. Son who looks like the offspring of Freddy and Jason, is a spoilt teenager used to getting everything he wants cos dad has thrown money at him in leiu of parenting. What happens when the both father and son start targeting the same women? So not only the potential of paths for each but also paths to deal with the other.
Characters? Confused as hell!!
Ala hates everyone except maybe Tanya, but will put out to her advantage.
Tasha labotmy at the cottage performed by David through her mouth.
Alex is just a spoilt brat due to David parenting him out of the way with money
Tanya just hates everyone
Charlotte MIA
Kevin, brother of Mary Sue

All said and done he's doing something right to polorise people so much and cause 118 pages of discussion with no sign of it letting up. Personally I think a lot of the upset is down to the misleading info at the start - Alex is MC, David is optional.


For the team alex people the fresh path where Alex stops David is the only way to resolve this. Then his flashing of the monster cock are seen in the light of a man having a mid-life crisis (the red sports car is next), and none of the cottage antics took place. But with this path not going to the cottage at the weekend must result in a positive for Alex.
I know Deadlyreaper cannot see beyond the last update and see anything involving Alex and Tasha as sloppy seconds. Sadley if the new path is implemented and you cannot embrace it it's time to walk away from the game.
Reading the update that was posted, it looks like David is going to get more fun times in the future and that path will mean Alex getting even more sidelined.

The only mention of Alex is whether he can stop it, not get one himself.

Sorry trying to get dinner while writing this.

I send a joke about the porn agent and you step in. Instaed to read my last post under @Shirafune Clarification . Then you can throw your hole vanilla iceream to trash. WE don´t need you a new script or route play 0.7 as I said if you have guts. But rather throw with meaningless words around you instead of the solution to play where the night x does not occur and the v0.7 not destroyed. So 0.8 can continue where it is certainly easier to avoid sex with David Aund Alex wins. You are stubborn and sitting in your chair, hit the keaboard without thinking.

 

[Heitcaho]

Ugly ass motherfucker only gets pussy cuz he's loaded and, following the trope, has a massive dick. Really, the guy isn't even remotelly smooth or sweet talking, he's just plain blunt and asshole.

But then, Alex doesn't steert too much from that... I guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree after all...

I think that is a big problem I'm finding with a lot of games recently in this genre. Heroes or the MC can start low and with nothing, but as the story goes on they should get more traits and grow. I've seen a few games where they actually let the MC evolve from being a stay at home slacker and its great. The slacker is a fine archetype to start at, but a shitty one and especially limiting one to write an entire story around if they never change and personally not one I find relatable.

 

[armion82]

@armion82
as i said,i kinda suck expressing myself on english
i know the game won't be changed in a way that david path will be erased,but it will be changed with addition of second path that completely counters the main one,which will basically kill the game for me.Branching works when it's done right from the start,like in DMD for example.Here,it will be added in the "middle" of the game,after i already got to know characters and got involved with the game the way it is now.
I haven't expected another update fully focused on david/tasha and nothing for alex,i agree three updates in a row for them was becoming too much,i was expecting moving further forward with the story and events we had so far,there are options to continue this game even after tasha rejected alex and became davids lover,now instead we will get apologetic update that will be focused on bringing alex/tasha together.

What to say,he realy menage to make all mistakes DS did in BB.
And trust me there is no way to continue Alex/Tasha path after the events 0.7.Both teams/team David and team Alex/ will be against.Like many said it already he mustn't force anyone who don't like NTR go to that path in order to get to the sex with Tasha.Take me par example.I like very much futanari.Guess what many don't like it.Same goes for shota,loli,bestiality,NTR,even incest.Unless the game is specificaly made with certain fetish,you should make it optional.

 

[kiteares]

I send a joke about the porn agent and you step in. Instaed to read my last post under @Shirafune Clarification . Then you can throw your hole vanilla iceream to trash. WE don´t need you a new script or route play 0.7 as I said if you have guts. But rather throw with meaningless words around you instead of the solution to play where the night x does not occur and the v0.7 not destroyed. So 0.8 can continue where it is certainly easier to avoid sex with David Aund Alex wins. You are stubborn and sitting in your chair, hit the keaboard without thinking.

I'm not really sure what you're getting at, other than I think you think I'm having a go at you.
I quoted your post long before you wrote your alternative path, but it was a long post with dinner on the go and you had posted again before I finished.
I disagree though, just carrying on from 0.7 will not satisfy Alex supporters as it will entail 4 in game weeks doing effectivly nothing, but they will have to play David which I don't think the total anti David people will want to do. For your information I had already discussed this with BurtReynoldsMoustache and others around Tues/Wed, you can go looking for my posts if you like.
I have several saves, including one that has blocked David by taking Ala away every weekend or even Tasha but not allowing anything other than polite chat.
I've played it though in a number of ways and read a lot if this thread so I again will disagree with you when I reject your accusation of sitting in my chair typing without thinking.

 

[Burt Reynolds Mustache]

i know it won't be literally erased,i suck at expressing what i mean on english
but still,the game progression so far will be stopped for a moment only to go back in favor of adding the option to open alex/tasha path that would drastically change the direction of the game from that point on. Branching the game now,at this point,only after the players showed their dislike with current progression is doing no good to no one except to appease the ones who favoured only alex/tasha path.This kinda shows that dev acknowledged he made bad decision in development and that players dictate the progression.
You can say that was the devs intention from the start,but after i already played the game and got involved with it,going back to add an option that would completely change the character development so far and instead of having tasha as davids lover to have her all of a sudden saying hey i actually like alex way more is putting me off,game will loose it's appeal to me.Of course no one will force me to play that path but since we're at 0.7 and had steady progression,it seems that alex/tasha path was an afterthought or acceptance of mistake after the criticism started.

You can say i'm acting childishly but that's just my opinion,making alex/tasha story now,where david possibly could be presented as weak loser or cuck,is nothing else than damage control.

Just to add something real quick:

The game was always supposed to have multiple paths and stuff. And the David stuff is supposed to be optional. To have the only sex with the main girl in the game limited to an optional route seems pretty absurd.

This.

If you want your story to have a "touchy" topic like NTR, make it optional.

Not exactly, but close. If you wear your NTR on your sleeve, and your game is hardcore about NTR, then of course it doesn't need to be optional. And to be fair to Alex the NTR-ish stuff here is both signaled as a possibility early on, and skippable.

However, even optional NTR has to tread carefully. You CANNOT favor the NTR over the regular. It will do bad things to your fanbase. That's the mistake that Alex made.

What to say,he realy menage to make all mistakes DS did in BB.
And trust me there is no way to continue Alex/Tasha path after the events 0.7.Both teams/team David and team Alex/ will be against.Like many said it already he mustn't force anyone who don't like NTR go to that path in order to get to the sex with Tasha.Take me par example.I like very much futanari.Guess what many don't like it.Same goes for shota,loli,bestiality,NTR,even incest.Unless the game is specificaly made with certain fetish,you should make it optional.

Well, look there COULD be ways to continue the story post David fucking Tasha, but I don't think a lot of characters would like it, as you'd probably be delving close to my "Au-Pair Dangereux" parody personality of Tasha. If you did a complete rewrite of her, then MAYBE people would accept it. Either way though, the Dev said we can go back to the BJ era and stop it. So we shall see.

I do feel bad in some ways for the dev when he talks about the game not being done. If this was a normally developed game, this would not have been an issue so long as everything worked out in the end. But Patreon games have to be both in development and episodic, even types that don't lend themselves to it, like BB, MotH, and this one here.

 

[kiteares]

How do you win the drinking game, I really cant win it

pls help

Best way to win imo is to lose
Make Alex take a drink until Charlotte challenges you to kiss Tasha then do it.
Ask Tasha the more personal questions until Charlotte has taken her clothes off, then ask Tasha to remove hers.
Both girls are topless \o/
Now for Alex to lose - Then take a drink at the end when he is asked to get naked.
For Tasha to lose (she gets the arse and quits) - take of your clothes when asked.
If you lose you have to do their homework, which saves helping Tasha everyday, but gets you the end of week reward.
If Tasha loses she has to show you her boobs everyday. But you don't get the reward and stats because you can't help her every day due to playing the game.
Better yet, stat's wise, don't bother playing the game more than once.

 

[beijing999]

It pisst me off that nobody play the v0.7 in this way as I have described correctly until the end, from day 82. Without the Fucking Weekend and the night X.
The fans of Alex are all masochists. They all like to stick their fingers in her asses and start from day 85. If the day 97 is over then pull out again and smear the forum here full of shit. Instead of going around this weekend.

 

[Almighty]

Well Ala is the best girl so once Alex got that this game was done for me. lmao

 

[beijing999]

I'm not really sure what you're getting at, other than I think you think I'm having a go at you.
I quoted your post long before you wrote your alternative path, but it was a long post with dinner on the go and you had posted again before I finished.
I disagree though, just carrying on from 0.7 will not satisfy Alex supporters as it will entail 4 in game weeks doing effectivly nothing, but they will have to play David which I don't think the total anti David people will want to do. For your information I had already discussed this with BurtReynoldsMoustache and others around Tues/Wed, you can go looking for my posts if you like.
I have several saves, including one that has blocked David by taking Ala away every weekend or even Tasha but not allowing anything other than polite chat.
I've played it though in a number of ways and read a lot if this thread so I again will disagree with you when I reject your accusation of sitting in my chair typing without thinking.

Sorry if I offend but I get angry, hat nobody played this way I discriped here from day 82 for Alex fan,to avoid this weekend.I´m very long in these forum and I know what will happen in 0.7 but when and how on one weekend I have to figure out first. So I de Alex end all version also 0.7 not david. If you play arround the side event David/Tasha wich is in 0.7 one not possible to prof the Studio from Tanya. So I postpone the weekend with the BJ and let Ala go until I have to send Tasha "BJ day" now only to get Tanja into the studio. Now I could finish my route with Ala and finish 0.7. In 0.8, I will certainly have problems to push the cottage again but I think that now other options are there.Many Alex fans were new and ran into disaster. The news of today that we knew that is still a sex-threesome before was too much for the Alex fans then.

 

[xsssssssss]

I've just posted what the developer has said, it will be fixed.

Definitely glad to see he realizes he advanced David/Tasha too far ahead of the Alex/Tasha solo path.
Also happy to read definite confirmation of branching paths to take the fear of linear approach off the table. I do hope he spends the time working out how to get Tasha between paths story wise without having massive character dissonance across them.

 

[roux69]

I find it sad that if I did not push the "prestigious studio blowjob" now it seems I have no way to ask her again for it late on... so sad.

 

[Joi_fan]

1. Change Tasha's personality a bit during the whole David fucking her thing. Make the first time especially feel a bit more her not really wanting to do it, but giving in. Have David mention the blackmail again, or her family, or whatever. (If she is a virgin, mention this too) Have her like it, but not like that she likes it, something like that. (That should also hit the NTR guys even harder TBH.) Do the same for her poolside fucking too. Maybe after she hits a certain level of passion with David it flips and she likes it. That kind of makes her a lot less like a whore as some see her, and more like she's being pressured, then falls for the cock. It's a stronger NTR arc with this whole thing. Other than that, do not touch the David content for a while.

Agreed. Is either that or delete the sex scenes with David, because just leaving those scenes untouched she will still be a whore on David's path.

 

[arnel19702017]

it would have been better if she was disparate to get the money to save a life of a family member back home, an expensive life saving operation maybe? but at the moment it's just looks like it's more towards building her career. it just makes her character look cheap, easy to get. anyway a new path is gonna be added so that would be, nice...hopefully.

 

[Hugh_Jassol]

Definitely glad to see he realizes he advanced David/Tasha too far ahead of the Alex/Tasha solo path.
Also happy to read definite confirmation of branching paths to take the fear of linear approach off the table. I do hope he spends the time working out how to get Tasha between paths story wise without having massive character dissonance across them.

I hope he has learned that as a storyteller, if you have 2 arcing storylines with 2 different characters you better build them at the same pace.

 

[beijing999]

I hope he has learned that as a storyteller, if you have 2 arcing storylines with 2 different characters you better build them at the same pace.

As the boss of RED ONE and inventor of Triss said. You can destroy the confidence of your game if you do not bring the stories and the base in the right time together.

 

[Ryahn]

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[Deadlyreaper]

If it is Alex what is probably true, I am surprised that Tasha shows naked in the house and Alex asks this question. Does that mean he can fuck her what I hope in 0.8. Then we can finally get to what I've been waiting and dream for since 0.57! Yep

Argh is so disgusting if you have this Dreckigwe cheap slut tasha has sucked right before the eyes of the david has groped every millimeter of her body has his dirty disgusting thick stuffed so often in each of her holes and all holes has contaminated with his sperm and even his sperm has spread over her whole body and then one comes only noc hdas puke and thinks no no thanks that is from the dirty old ugly Bastard so much tried and I do not want ran

and gamz apart from what should you do with a cheater who is so crazy and then goes to such an old ugly Bastard and then fucked by the money?
which is forever branded and there you can write from me and 1000 new paths with her it will ALWAYS stick to her and alex had to be humiliated enough already he has did not deserve

no relationship / sex between alex / tasha in no new story nothing no new paths that is only totally ridiculous and useless

 

[bobbo69]

Wow, and I thought that this was a game

 

[Centrophy]

Some people are taking this way too seriously. I guess games are serious business.