pretty good start, but I feel like it will fizzle out once the dev reaches the end of his put-a-gag-there box.
also kinda as much intro/outro content as the game itself... and lots of english to be corrected ("then" instead of than, "of" instead of "have", a few "there" instead of "their" and "s/'s" possessives to be corrected) - said as a non-english-native speaker so probably even more than I noticed/deciphered.
good luck dev, I hope you stick to it and keep up the quality plot/ambiance while gaining proofreaders
also kinda as much intro/outro content as the game itself... and lots of english to be corrected ("then" instead of than, "of" instead of "have", a few "there" instead of "their" and "s/'s" possessives to be corrected) - said as a non-english-native speaker so probably even more than I noticed/deciphered.
good luck dev, I hope you stick to it and keep up the quality plot/ambiance while gaining proofreaders
will the MC be a vanilla type MC or can he actually do some dark stuff. just asking cause of some of the tags.
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