Ren'Py Abandoned Automaton Story [v0.1.2] [AngryFur]

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Hones

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Not yet,and i don't know the context but that voyeur scene if it's some random girl meh but if it's a future LI then it's foreshadowing about future ntr and for some people that its it's already ntr not for me tho if it doesn't have anything to do with the mc then it is not
She is the "Masters" secretary who she clearly already has some kind of sexual relationship with even if she was to become an LI it would be the MC stealing from his boss. So all voyeurism is what "potential ntr"? She is not the MC's girl if anything the secretary is boinking her boss as cliché as that is and the MC just spies on them.
 

Lucian Light

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She is the "Masters" secretary who she clearly already has some kind of sexual relationship with even if she was to become an LI it would be the MC stealing from his boss. So all voyeurism is what "potential ntr"? She is not the MC's girl if anything the secretary is boinking her boss as cliché as that is and the MC just spies on them.
Like i said for me it's not ntr but for some people it might be, and remember that ntr by definition is the ability to make the viewer/player jealous and if the girl later on becomes an LI then by definition it's already ntr soo anyway i don't want to start a debate about this, those were just my thoughts i hope the best for the dev.
 

smackdab

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Changelog:

v0.01
1st Release

v0.02
  • New character
  • 18+ scene
  • Several completed illustrations
  • Some fixes
v0.03
  • You can find one more item. Go to the factory to find it
  • New 18+ animation with secretary and master
  • Minor changes in visual design
  • 2 completed illustrations (Mart and blueprints)
v0.04
  • New character
  • New location
  • New 18+ scene
  • The script is slightly improved
  • Dialogs improved
  • You can find the last item
  • GUI appearance improved
  • Added cheat for money
  • 2 new sprites
v0.05
  • New 18+ scene with Secretary
  • The script is slightly improved.
  • Dialogs improved
  • New sprite for some dialogs
Please flip this around - newest changes at the top :)
 

Falcon2000

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Keeping an eye on this, hopefully you'll work out the patreon restrictions soon, and keep up the good progress
 
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I need to vent about how much I hate this artist for being both lazy, and not good at art xD
Maybe it looks like - okay-ish - art, and sure - not bad persae.
But when I notice the doorway gets wider as you look down it, nothing has shadows where it should, all elements under the dialogue box are seemingly a different art style most of the time, different shading, no shadows etc.
It's like high-school self-taught levels of art.
None of the backgrounds line up the way they should for proper perspective, it just feels super slap-dashed together.
tem, you sure are a cunt - wtf/ the game is fine?
nah - it's not. I see that banner, and I go WOW< Studio-Ghibli levels of art in a porn game!? outstanding! and then i look at the partial work, the absolutely not finihshed work, the rushed line sketches, the poorly lined up elements, etc - and i get pretty irritated.

Dev? have your artist learn hwo to make a background properly, it's as bad as those " animated youtube storytellers " who neither animate, nor tell a real story - but I digress.
The work looks cheap, my dude.
Tighten the BGs up, fix the weird dissonance from your banner title to the actual in-game art, and you might have a winner here.
It's rare to see a furry game that ain't gay/tg/futa whatever.
rant over/
 

Neko_Kun

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Feb 1, 2018
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lol the first furry game that not have a gay protector and for the pics it's good but it have ntr really? lmao I'll have to keep waiting for a good game with furry girls hehe if someone knows about some game like that let me know pls View attachment 499500
It doesn't have NTR, it has voyerism.
And do you mean protagonist?
If you check the game description it doesn't have NTR either.
The Secretary is just that, a secretary to your Master. They just have a relationship beyond the professional.

There was a minor debacle about this exact topic on the Patreon, if you care to do your research, which is why that NTR is no longer in the game at all.



I need to vent about how much I hate this artist for being both lazy, and not good at art xD
Maybe it looks like - okay-ish - art, and sure - not bad persae.
But when I notice the doorway gets wider as you look down it, nothing has shadows where it should, all elements under the dialogue box are seemingly a different art style most of the time, different shading, no shadows etc.
It's like high-school self-taught levels of art.
None of the backgrounds line up the way they should for proper perspective, it just feels super slap-dashed together.
tem, you sure are a cunt - wtf/ the game is fine?
nah - it's not. I see that banner, and I go WOW< Studio-Ghibli levels of art in a porn game!? outstanding! and then i look at the partial work, the absolutely not finihshed work, the rushed line sketches, the poorly lined up elements, etc - and i get pretty irritated.

Dev? have your artist learn hwo to make a background properly, it's as bad as those " animated youtube storytellers " who neither animate, nor tell a real story - but I digress.
The work looks cheap, my dude.
Tighten the BGs up, fix the weird dissonance from your banner title to the actual in-game art, and you might have a winner here.
It's rare to see a furry game that ain't gay/tg/futa whatever.
rant over/
Well, it's still in alpha. Most of your rant seems to revolve around the art not looking complete, or finely tuned to the art displayed in the banner. Which all ties to the fact that the game is still actively in development. The dev just wants more content to showcase the game itself with story, and then tighten up the art steadily as they progress further into the story, to give you more to do. There's no harm in that.

I do understand what you're saying about the dissonance between them, and it'll be improved upon, it's not like they abandon the sketches as complete and then just ignore them and never go back to them. It's all wip to get to the next place or setting of the story.

I do see your point in the BG images seeming a little lackluster, I'm sure we'll see improvements across the versions, as time progresses.

Oh, and the dev is the artist. They're doing all the coding and art by themselves iirc.

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As a last note, I've heard that AngryFur is getting in on the lewdpatcher path of avoiding Patreon restrictions.
So we can look forward to the game not getting otherwise restricted with Patreon requirements.
 
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XoticRealmZ

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Geez, you got to understand not everything will be finished until later on in development as the game was just been released to us. For example, a few scenes looking like a bad pencil drawing... probably means the artist like all other artists drew a rough sketch first, and then when more updates comes out the better the design will be for it to be finished.
 
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Neko_Kun

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Feb 1, 2018
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s is that she doesn't know where it is and to look around but i don't know where to look
In order to get the toolbox, first find and pickup the book in your room, deliver it to your sister, then at night, grab her ass, now ask her about the toolbox the following day.
 

Lafuelle

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I need to vent about how much I hate this poster for being both lazy, and not good at writing ecks dee.
Maybe it looks like, okay-ish text. And sure - not bad per se.
But then, I see the letters get scrambled as you skim through the text. Nothing has punctuation where it should, all elements under the xD seem to be a different writing style every paragraph, different punctuation, no spellcheck etc.
It's like high-school self-taught levels of reviewing.
None of the sentences line up the way they should for proper perspective, it just feels super slap-dashed together.

I see those likes, and I go "wow! Tolkien levels of writing in a porn game review!?" outstanding! And then I look at the partial work, the absolutely unfinished work, the rushed line sentences, the poorly lined up letters, etc. and I get pretty irritated.

Reviewer? Have your writer learn how to write a review properly, it's as bad as those "porn game review blogs" who neither do porn games, nor write a real review - but I digress.
The work looks cheap, my dude.
Tighten the paragraphs up, fix the weird dissonance from your likes to the actual posts, and you might have a winner here.
It's rare to see an anime avatar that isn't moeblob/slice-of-life/k-on whatever.
Rant over.
 

Hones

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I need to vent about how much I hate this poster for being both lazy, and not good at writing ecks dee.
Maybe it looks like, okay-ish text. And sure - not bad per se.
But then, I see the letters get scrambled as you skim through the text. Nothing has punctuation where it should, all elements under the xD seem to be a different writing style every paragraph, different punctuation, no spellcheck etc.
It's like high-school self-taught levels of reviewing.
None of the sentences line up the way they should for proper perspective, it just feels super slap-dashed together.

I see those likes, and I go "wow! Tolkien levels of writing in a porn game review!?" outstanding! And then I look at the partial work, the absolutely unfinished work, the rushed line sentences, the poorly lined up letters, etc. and I get pretty irritated.

Reviewer? Have your writer learn how to write a review properly, it's as bad as those "porn game review blogs" who neither do porn games, nor write a real review - but I digress.
The work looks cheap, my dude.
Tighten the paragraphs up, fix the weird dissonance from your likes to the actual posts, and you might have a winner here.
It's rare to see an anime avatar that isn't moeblob/slice-of-life/k-on whatever.
Rant over.
Which review are you going on about there are only two neither have lots of likes.
 
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KingFuzzy

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so ntr is planned for this if i am understanding some of the posts, it pulled me in because it does not have the tag... crap...

btw is this censored in any way for patreon rules? and if it is can we have a patch?
 

XeriAkashiya

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Overview:
The story of a guy who lives with his sister without parents. He suddenly finds a robot (automaton) that looks like a girl, but it is broken. The main character will have to repair the automaton and face the problems that she brought herself.
The game will have many other characters that you can interact with.​

Thread Updated: 2020-01-13
Release Date: 2019-11-09
Developer: AngryFur
Censored: No
Version: 0.0.6
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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This was fun for an early game, can't wait to see more!
 

Havoc W

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so ntr is planned for this if i am understanding some of the posts, it pulled me in because it does not have the tag... crap...

btw is this censored in any way for patreon rules? and if it is can we have a patch?
It isn't censored. You have an option to say what the girl is to you so you can name her Roomate, sister etc.
Pretty sure that makes you able to have it on Patreon without them getting all up in you business
 
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