VN Ren'Py B.E.S.T [Ep.3 Deluxe] [Dolyla]

[aQrata]

Just tried the game for the first time and while theres not much yet, its very promising. Liked all LIs beside Julia and the twins. Madison is the star imo, she looks great and also shes has an interesting background (havent seen many single young moms).
The story looks inspired by Blue Lock, but its simple and to the point. Could use a bit more depth in characters (mostly mc) and dialogues but its still promising and understandable to keep simple since its your first project.
Will be following, good luck dev!

 

[Dolyla]

Just tried the game for the first time and while theres not much yet, its very promising. Liked all LIs beside Julia and the twins. Madison is the star imo, she looks great and also shes has an interesting background (havent seen many single young moms).
The story looks inspired by Blue Lock, but its simple and to the point. Could use a bit more depth in characters (mostly mc) and dialogues but its still promising and understandable to keep simple since its your first project.
Will be following, good luck dev!

Thank you !

 

[sisco1986]

quick question for the dev, are you going to (in the future if you can't do it now) hire a native english proofreader? because the game looks good but the english translation is....

imo the only 2 problems the game has right now is that the english translation is super iffy and that the font is really ugly

 

[Mpkstroff]

No. Forced to leave the game, there is nothing else offered.
Unable to continue.

Yep, same here. Saves are fucked

 

[Jacob VK]

walkthrough mod?

 

[skyward1785]

Can you change the font used in the game's conversations or add the option to change it? It's quite difficult to read, especially because all the conversations are in uppercase letters.

 

[Aristos]

Damn, I'm late to the poll!
Anyway, best girl won comfortably; justice prevailed

 

[Dolyla]

Can you change the font used in the game's conversations or add the option to change it? It's quite difficult to read, especially because all the conversations are in uppercase letters.

Done for next update !

 

[Dolyla]

Damn, I'm late to the poll!
Anyway, best girl won comfortably; justice prevailed

Another poll will come by next update cause new girls enter the ring !

 

[Aristos]

Another poll will come by next update cause new girls enter the ring !

Give +1 to Grace before you publish the poll, please. That'll save me the trouble of voting

 

[Dolyla]

Give +1 to Grace before you publish the poll, please. That'll save me the trouble of voting

Are you sure ?

 

[Aristos]

Are you sure ?

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Not a bad try at all
Mais oui, for now I'm sure

 

[deadremix]

KoGa3 any chance you're gonna continue the mod now?

 

[KoGa3]

KoGa3 any chance you're gonna continue the mod now?

There is still the Mod from LaikDink here (but not updated so far, maybe therefore the removed link on the OP).
I actually moved on back then, havn't ckecked the last game releases anymore.

 

[Dolyla]

Little update before a bigger one after the Steam festival.

As requested by players, we have changed our font for better visibility.

New scenes and choices before new trial.

Translation in French done

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

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[Moosica]

Little update before a bigger one after the Steam festival.

As requested by players, we have changed our font for better visibility.

New scenes and choices before new trial.

Translation in French done

Thank you

 

[Aristos]

I started the game over, which reminded me that my usual choice of a name often brings me priceless surprises



BTW, Dolyla there are a few moments where your native French language interferes with English.
For example, here:

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In French (as we do in Spanish too) you use the word sympathique/sympa et sympathie to talk about someone who's nice and friendly. However, in English sympathy and sympathetic rather refer to empathy and/or compassion (in French compassion, compatissant).
I guess that now you see why you shouldn't use those words in the text shown in the screenshots.
Julia should say "...much nicer than having you around...", and Madison should reply "...they are ready to show you how nice they are if you..." or "they are ready to show you their niceness if you...".

 

[Niuul]

Would be nice if in a future update you could see your stats at any time by hovering over it in the top right or have a pop out menu you can open and close on the side. Just so you can keep track of how much Buddy/Education etc you have.

 

[boulimanus]

Tried this for the first time. Not bad.

There is some very nice rendering work here and probably the best water effect I've seen.
The setup of the competition is interesting and I like the B.E.S.T construct (reminds me of S.P.E.C.I.A.L in Fallout).
But then the story is boring so far (way to much meta and AVN talk) and stats aren't used well yet.
Also on the stats, if you give me choices that literally are the BEST attributes with no other explanation, at least allow me to see where I am in my stats so I can pick accordingly. They should be visible at all times.

The models are varied and interesting with different personalities. Although a bit annoying for now that the only sexy time you can get is with a bitchy and slutty one.
I'm surprised Julia doesn't get more love in the poll. She's cute and interesting.

May be one to follow but I suspect it will be a while before it picks up some pace.
Bonne chance, bien joué!