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I wasn't trying to be insulting.
It is more than just not being a native speaker, it is as if all the characters have the same speaking habits. You can't tell anyone apart from each other outside of a random name usage.
During some sex scenes some sex actions seem to stop existing, like you will be able to do 1 pussy lick then you can only ever do ass licking, and sometimes go to other further things.
Another small issue is that most choices seem to be the same outcome. Now there are choices which diverge like going to the bar vs staying home, but charging your assistant for training versus complimenting them has a lot of the same text.
The passages are very long with a lot of scrolling. I would say shorten the passages and instead make it a few pages to click through, less stress on the player's wrist.
I would also say to make it so it is easy to press a button like numpad, "c", or other keyboard shortcuts to get through the text choices.
That is a lot of sex to happen for a man first out of jail, and somehow he is still porn star worthy instead of having to get back his stamina, and maybe space the sex out a bit more. It is very much quickly one after the other. The wife sure that makes sense, but everyone else seems a bit too early.
And as I mentioned my previous issues.
I wish you luck on this game.
The fact that some choices disappear only happens in the first wave of choices. This is to avoid contradicting the rest of the scene. Usually in this first round of choices the characters are still partially dressed, so it wouldn't make sense after they're already naked to magically appear in clothes again.
As for the text part being the same in both choices, this is the common part of the story that you will see regardless of the choice, but I did it this way to continue without forcing the player to make more clicks.
Thanks again for the feedback.
I just wanted to clarify these two points so that you don't get the impression that they are bugs.
- May 9, 2019
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Good game you got there. Would have preferred but enjoyed it nonetheless. Will look for future updates. Good luck dev. Btw if you don't mind what will be duration between two updates?
Well I can't be sure yet, but I plan monthly updates.
this game is pretty dope but would it be possible at all to keep the sound in the video clips? that would make this game so much better and immersive
- May 9, 2019
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You gotta plan those otherwise people get upset waiting and when there is no updates. Though will wait for you future updates, like the game. And if its not too much could you try removing the watermarks/logos from the videos? They jut kill the mood.
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- May 23, 2017
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I really enjoy what is here so far! The only complaint I have is in relation to the English, but that's just because I'm a bit of a grammar nazi. For instance, in the opening dialogue, I see "rpg" instead of "RPG". Little issues like that that don't really matter that much for most people, but it does annoy me a tad. But this is really just a nitpick. Otherwise, I'll be keeping my eye open for this.
- Oct 20, 2019
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boa sorte, você escolheu um bom elenco para o seu jogo não se preocupe com o idioma que outras pessoas podem ajudá-lo a tentar dar o seu melhor no jogo
- Oct 8, 2019
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well, its so hard to find html game that didnt grind, but this game is absolutely masterpiece. great story and visual, and i hope this game still going.
- May 24, 2017
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Any chance of a version with a differnet main font? I can't take this narrative about war crimes and survivors guilt seriously when it's written in comic sans?
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Decent game so far, the only thing off about the story though, is the severe consequences for the MC. While undoubtedly something like this actually happened, you would not be sentenced to 10 years for not taking that shot on a little girl. You would need to fire that RPG yourself or something for that penalty. It is also understandable for someone to hesitate in such a event, not many soldiers in modern armies are so cold as to not blink an eye at the thought of shooting a kid. The deaths would also not be considered his fault, as there are several fellow soldiers right next to him who apparently also didn't shoot.
So that part of the setup to your story-line sounds a little far fetched. Now if he had unknowingly thrown a frag into a building with his own men in their, then it would be considered serious enough for a dishonorable discharge and possible charges added on for manslaughter/murder. That would probably make for a better "reason" as to him getting 10 years in prison.
Overall though keep up the work. Good luck
EDIT: i did asume your basing your MC on a American servicemen/soldier, so I'm going on what i know of US law on terms of accountability.
So that part of the setup to your story-line sounds a little far fetched. Now if he had unknowingly thrown a frag into a building with his own men in their, then it would be considered serious enough for a dishonorable discharge and possible charges added on for manslaughter/murder. That would probably make for a better "reason" as to him getting 10 years in prison.
Overall though keep up the work. Good luck
EDIT: i did asume your basing your MC on a American servicemen/soldier, so I'm going on what i know of US law on terms of accountability.