- Jun 8, 2017
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Really tho this is my first VN there's plenty to bitch about. From the shitty attempt at the animation at the start. Some inconsistency with the story,
I'm still trying to hash out my writing style and balance between narrating and let the render do some narrating.
lol if you had said that I would have said. If you ain't supporting the lease you can do is point out the typos so I could fix it. I don't mean it as an attack. Once I send my script to prove-reader, I just cut and paste to avoid adding more mistakes.
BTW the mind-reading thing, I was just busting your balls. If you take the time to write up criticism I never take it as an attack. Unlike some people that just say. "It batman rip off" and not even giving the story a chance. That kind of ignoramus I try my best to ignore, I can rant for hours about the diff between the two. Like Bat witness his parent death and was faq for life because of it. MC didn't witness his parent's death. etc.
Reading that free pussies thing again, that sounded aggressive on my part. To be completely honest that hit the sore spot. Shit man, I see people that never even finish their project and a bunch of cow milking cock teaser with more supporter than mine. I can't help but being a little frustrated. And then I see a few games out there that look great as hell and I have to swallow that faqing humble pie. my writing and rendering skill level still far from the best. Hell, I keep the banana dick thing in there to remind me to check my work, No matter how uncomfortable it might be.
ROFL. I can't say anything about the super-soldier thing. without spoiler for the next update... adding two new female characters btw.
I get you, man. hell I think we might be agreeing but from diff angle.Yes it is explained in that dialog, but up to that point it is known to the MC but not the player - that is something I dont like. Its ok to not know anything the MC does not know - but the player should understand and know what the MC knows, or decisions are more guesses than choices. This is no major problem here if I remember correctly, but I just dont like the constructed mystery. In PnP games some player have problems to split character and player knowledge. In these games it is important (imho) that the player has more or less the same knowledge as the MC. Thats why I would prefer that exposition dump of Beckett to get way earlier, because it is essential to understand the situation of the MC.
I dont complain about typos, I just mentioned them. I could be mean and say "I dont ask for money for my posts ..." but thats not me(especially when we consider the place we are writing here ^^). Same for coding errors.
In general I dont want to attack you or your work. When I write more than 1-2 sentences, than because I do care to some degree about the game I played.
What I mean with the free pussies is more that it is to easy. Yes you need some fucking early on, just to please the ppl. But important pu... characters should be something we fight for
And the story itself is "messed up" - I mean we have a 18 years super-soldier with all the money he will ever need ... and 2-3 military organisations and clans and cartels or whatnot. ^^ - But that is fine - its your power fantasy. Roll with it
I'm still trying to hash out my writing style and balance between narrating and let the render do some narrating.
lol if you had said that I would have said. If you ain't supporting the lease you can do is point out the typos so I could fix it. I don't mean it as an attack. Once I send my script to prove-reader, I just cut and paste to avoid adding more mistakes.
BTW the mind-reading thing, I was just busting your balls. If you take the time to write up criticism I never take it as an attack. Unlike some people that just say. "It batman rip off" and not even giving the story a chance. That kind of ignoramus I try my best to ignore, I can rant for hours about the diff between the two. Like Bat witness his parent death and was faq for life because of it. MC didn't witness his parent's death. etc.
Reading that free pussies thing again, that sounded aggressive on my part. To be completely honest that hit the sore spot. Shit man, I see people that never even finish their project and a bunch of cow milking cock teaser with more supporter than mine. I can't help but being a little frustrated. And then I see a few games out there that look great as hell and I have to swallow that faqing humble pie. my writing and rendering skill level still far from the best. Hell, I keep the banana dick thing in there to remind me to check my work, No matter how uncomfortable it might be.
ROFL. I can't say anything about the super-soldier thing. without spoiler for the next update... adding two new female characters btw.
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