VN Ren'Py Bad Memories [v0.9.1] [recreation]

[SrRK]

Alright, here we go!

This game is pretty amazing so far, so let me get the negative out of the way first:

I had a few issues with the story leading up to the part where you

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but they were pretty minor. An example of this would be the very drawn out conversation you have with Rachel where the MC constantly references their "past," but you don't yet have any idea who she is or what happened. There's nothing wrong with this style of writing, but it needs to be quick, to the point, and not drawn out... otherwise being left in the dark just starts to feel somewhat irritating.

I was also very confused when I first started playing, as I had selected female, but then was wearing male clothes the very first time I saw my MC's body. On top of this, the female MC talks very much like a dude -- and while I get that she's a lesbian, I think it would be much more immersive to make her more feminine. If there's going to be two separate MC's, they should have slightly different personality types. (P.S., it would be great if she was bisexual, not just a lesbian!)

Outside of these minor nitpicks, the only other issue is that I keep landing inside of a male body. This can be easily fixed, but I recommend doing so ASAP as it's very immersion breaking when this happens, work in progress or not.

Now, onto the positive:

I am a huge fan of games that put a heavy emphasis on the story, and this game does exactly that. While it starts out a bit rocky, it is a great story so far and I'm very excited for it. I also think all of the female characters, MC included, are extremely good looking and unique. I appreciate the unique personalities that comes along with them. Little sister is incredibly cute and interesting, and she has some of the sweetest tittle litties I've ever seen. I also enjoy the "personal style" that the game has, as it feels very unique to most games I've played on here. Almost artistic. The writing is good, the models are cute, the story is intriguing, and the renders are great also.

I will save giving an actual rating until there is more content/gameplay as I'd like to rate it fairly, but as of right now it's about a 3.9, which can easily be increased with some minor fixes. (bear in mind: I wrote this after playing v0.1.5)

Keep up the good work, I'm definitely a fan!

 

[SoraGG]

So far the story is so intriguing
Keep up the good work
Can't wait for the next update

 

[RG80100]

recreation thanks for your game, this is really good and a really breath of fresh air (don't know if this expression work in english). I don't want pressure you but you have gold in your hands with this game and I really think it will be one of the best here.

 

[Obdul]

I'm surprised no one reported this game, this red hair girls looks like a 12 years old, sorry not my taste

 

[Pitrik]

I'm surprised no one reported this game, this red hair girls looks like a 12 years old, sorry not my taste

If you play the game you will discover that the girl ( and her friend ) is 18 yo ( and there were no sex scenes with her yet ) .... So why we should report it?

 

[recreation]

Not bad, although there are two scenes in the female route that have the hands a a male in it. The first spot is when she is walking outside and spots Ellie for the first time without realizing who she was, and the second time is when Rachel has the MC feeling her breasts; with the second instance, it appears to be a glitch that occurs when the MC first touches Rachel's breasts.
I also noticed that Rachel has her left breast sagging a little more than her right one when she is sitting on the bed. I am not sure if that was intentional, but the discrepancy doesn't occur in any of the other scenes, including when she is sitting at the dinner table.
One other issue I found is that the game has three errors that pop up in the male route during the time that Jada, Ellie, and the MC are in the room together, and Ellie goes to smack Jada's ass. Trying to copy or rollback on the error causes the game to crash; I can only hit the Ignore button. This is in the Android version of the game.

Thanks, especially for the hint with the second one, I didn't remember that I put an extra image there.
The breats scene, one of her breasts is getting pushed by her arm, that's why it looks a bit off.
And lastly the error, I found one more image with a wrong compression (I don't know why, but photoshop saves them like this sometimes and it's only a problem on android), which version did you play?

Greetings recreation et al

recreation, Again, great work thus far,

Firstly, about those complaining about lack of content on a bug-fix based update, ignore them please, they are just noise. IF this had been an actual update sure, but this was a bug-fix, and you were still kind enough to include a couple extra renders for us, and for that I thank you.

Second, the saves being 'lost' actually they are misplaced. I looked into this and it seems at one point you had a different title for your project. The old saves are in peoples:
C:\Users\ 'username' \AppData\Roaming\RenPy\UA-1544724770 folder
the new saves are in:
C:\Users\ 'username' \AppData\Roaming\RenPy\BM-1544724770 folder

This setting is in your options.rpy
define config.save_directory =

Seems this was changed between builds.

For the players on windows you can get to this folder structure by going to start -> run = and in the dialog box type: %appdata% then goto Renpy and you can find most of your renpy game saves. But the story is pretty short so far, so no worries replaying the game and getting to enjoy your renders again.

if you are a windows user, you can open a command prompt ( start run or search cmd.exe )and paste the following command, and it will copy your saves from the old folder to the new:

copy %appdata%\RenPy\UA-1544724770\*.* %appdata%\RenPy\BM-1544724770\*.*

CAUTION, if you have new saves, you will be prompted to overwrite the saves.

Anyway, thank you for visiting this thread for input, and please keep up the great work. And again, please ignore the trolls... Trolls will troll no matter how much most of us enjoy your work.

Finally, I love the pokies the girls have, I love pokies. ( hard nipples showing through cloths)

Have a great day,
-=NicestGamer=-

PS: for anyone who has only played the Male path, and wants a sneak peek at Jadda's sweat little breast, see my previous post: https://f95zone.to/threads/bad-memories-v0-1-6-recreation.28008/post-1982905

HINT: you can see some of the characters in all their glory if you check out his tutorial threads people: recreations DAZ tutorials and assets

Thanks amn, that's a great help.
The old save files on android should be at (main directory, not SD card ->) Android -> Data -> Bad.Memories -> files -> saves


and thx @Sir Dammed most of the missing images for the femC are there now in 0.1.6 (except the first one you mentioned >_<) and I have changed a few dialogues a little bit to fit them both better. I see your point with the FemC talking like a guy and I might change a few dialogues in the future, but you have to bear in mind that both male and female MC had a really hard youth and both became really rebellious within that time, that's something I wanted to show in the way they talk, even though they have changed their behavior a lot since then, they are still young.
I'm glad you like the rest of the game and I hope I can keep it up
also thanks @ SoraGG and RG80100

 

[SlimeDroid]

Was able to finish it thanks to the update on android! A small nitpick would be to lower the text box a bit since it hides the girls lips or make the box invisible.

Overall everthing seems right on track for some naughty fun!

Also the kissing scenes are 10/10 since I'm a sucker for intimacy in porn games.

 

[Higurashika]

Hell, yeah! Ellie's been alone for so long! It's my duty as an elder brother to gift her an younger sibling who she can play with.

My femprot cries I like pregnancy fetish and wonder would it exist for MC? recreation

 

[Higurashika]

On which system are you guys?

Win 10

 

[ShocLite12]

Thanks, especially for the hint with the second one, I didn't remember that I put an extra image there.
The breats scene, one of her breasts is getting pushed by her arm, that's why it looks a bit off.
And lastly the error, I found one more image with a wrong compression (I don't know why, but photoshop saves them like this sometimes and it's only a problem on android), which version did you play?


Thanks amn, that's a great help.
The old save files on android should be at (main directory, not SD card ->) Android -> Data -> Bad.Memories -> files -> saves


and thx @Sir Dammed most of the missing images for the femC are there now in 0.1.6 (except the first one you mentioned >_<) and I have changed a few dialogues a little bit to fit them both better. I see your point with the FemC talking like a guy and I might change a few dialogues in the future, but you have to bear in mind that both male and female MC had a really hard youth and both became really rebellious within that time, that's something I wanted to show in the way they talk, even though they have changed their behavior a lot since then, they are still young.
I'm glad you like the rest of the game and I hope I can keep it up
also thanks @ SoraGG and RG80100

I am currently playing the latest Android version which I believe is the 0.1.6 version.

 

[Master of Puppets]

Was able to finish it thanks to the update on android! A small nitpick would be to lower the text box a bit since it hides the girls lips or make the box invisible.

That's a problem a lot of devs seem to have; when making the images, they forget that in the game the bottom quarter of the screen will be obscured by the dialog. I strongly urge all devs to try and remember the text when blocking their renders.

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

That's a problem a lot of devs seem to have; when making the images, they forget that in the game the bottom quarter of the screen will be obscured by the dialog. I strongly urge all devs to try and remember the text when blocking their renders.

You can hide the text when you want to look at the full image.

 

[anne O'nymous]

"Hey, elder unrelated roommate"...

recreation , I hate you, it's around midnight here, and you made me laugh so hard that I've surely awaken my neighbors

 

[Gentoo]

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[SoraGG]

My femprot cries I like pregnancy fetish and wonder would it exist for MC? recreation

I totally support this

 

[huehuehue76]

i have high hopes for this game

 

[fzaner]

so excited to know what happened to ellie... not into loli stuff but ellie was ultra cutely writed.

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with or without pills i think that something about rachel's personality is off... she totally ignored how shitty the therapist's attitude toward ellie and on general.
she's friendlier more than normal with mc for a step mom that regret awful past and want to fix things.exept maybe the fact that she has an abnormal crush toward mc and wanted to cover it with violence and of course how mc's dad awfuly treated her so she take it all on mc.

lot of suspense i loved everything even without sex scenes the playtrough was so satifying because of how heavily the story impact on the game.

perfect story for a 0.1 and really hope for more content with ellie and for me female Mc was my best playtrough experience and hope for more updates very soon

 

[recreation]

That's a problem a lot of devs seem to have; when making the images, they forget that in the game the bottom quarter of the screen will be obscured by the dialog. I strongly urge all devs to try and remember the text when blocking their renders.

That's something I had in mind, even rerendered some images because of this, but sometimes I just don't want to make the image smaller because it would destroy the look I had in mind, that's why in BM the "hide" button is always visible for everyone on every system

"Hey, elder unrelated roommate"...

recreation , I hate you, it's around midnight here, and you made me laugh so hard that I've surely awaken my neighbors

Haha, mission accomplished!

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Wohoo, my first subscribestar ...ehm.. subscriber xD
Thanks!

My femprot cries I like pregnancy fetish and wonder would it exist for MC? recreation

I totally support this

I actually like the idea too, but it would be too far away from reality and don't fit the game. In a full fletched fantasy game I would do it, but not in BM, sorry.

I am currently playing the latest Android version which I believe is the 0.1.6 version.

I think I fixed it, would you be willing to try

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one?

Thanks @huehuehue76 and fzaner

 

[Higurashika]

I actually like the idea too, but it would be too far away from reality and don't fit the game. In a full fletched fantasy game I would do it, but not in BM, sorry.

So we won't see in game male character who could be main interest for MC?

 

[recreation]

So we won't see in game male character who could be main interest for MC?

Nope, sorry, she's lesbian only. I think I mentioned it in the op right from the beginning, at least I remember adding a "lesbian" to the FemC when I created the thread.

edit: I did mention it, but when I updated the tags, I deleted the lesbian part from the female mc tag because the lesbian tag was there anyway.