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Games great so far got some good potential, what are some of the future plans for sex scenes? Hopefully we can get some foot job, gloryhole, upskirt, exhibitionist, threesome
Or the MC for that matter, look how he deals with a certain therapist, not to mention how his father was with the family, they are all a little broken in one way or another.Interesting story so far. A bit creepy though and somewhat strange.
Appartmentburnd down, no other Appartments, no Hotel rooms and then Rachel comes to rescue...
I got the feeling, that Rachel and Ellie are not entirely sane.
Will have my eye on it, good start. Keep it up.
And this makes the story unique and promising.@King Monkey Mon Actually, she's not step mom either -- she's the ex girlfriend of the father who never married him. So she actually fits the description of the "landlady" seen in many games that try to evade Patreon's no incest policy. HOWEVER ... she doesn't even own the house because she was never married to the putz, as the MC so nicely points out, he could kick her out on her asterisk if he wanted to, because she has no legal standing even to be there.
I like the look of this character. Curious, I don't recall seeing the face of the male MC, although I might have missed it by concentrating too much on Rachel's "assets" HAHA. Does this mean we will be seeing more of the story in the third person in the future?female mc...
There are a few things I'm not happy with, so let's call it an early version.
The male MC will be 1st person all the time, but maybe I add a second view for specific scenes but you will never see his face.I like the look of this character. Curious, I don't recall seeing the face of the male MC, although I might have missed it by concentrating too much on Rachel's "assets" HAHA. Does this mean we will be seeing more of the story in the third person in the future?
I really am enthralled with this story so far and can't wait to see where it goes. I see so many possibilities and the writing has kept a lot of avenues open. It is not my place to say anything other than thank you for this VN, but I am going to add a hope that there will be a kind/love path with Rachel, even though I suspect there will be some awful memories coming back to the MC,You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Maybe I fucked something up, with the android version. I did change just a few lines after my last playtest on android, so I didn't test it again. What is the first error you get?Hello everyone. Pretty good start for the game, I dig it. Nice job recreation. Unfortunately, I am getting an exception error for the android version, right after the MC walks into his room after getting his stuff delivered, and Ellie is trying out the VR headset. Keep getting more exception errors after that, so I can't continue. Is anyone else having this problem and it's possibly something with the game, or might it be on my end? I did try deleting it, and then trying a new download from scratch......same problem. If anyone has any input, please let me know. Thanks.
Don't worry, be happyExcellent first version! Script is well written, I'm enjoying the mystery of the past. I don't quite understand the term "Hu" that is repeated several times in the dialog. Other than this, again, very well written.
I also hope that a romantic option will be available with Rachel. Considering what she's been through, she brings out my protective side
Maybe I fucked something up, with the android version. I did change just a few lines after my last playtest on android, so I didn't test it again. What is the first error you get?
Here it is........
Don't worry, be happy
"Hu" should actually be "huh" as I have learned recently. It is a expression of surprise like "Huh, what was that?" or "Huh, I think I saw something over there."