i'll make some mirrors after you uploaded it
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- Mar 8, 2018
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The good:
Love the story.
Characters.
Ellie
The not so good (imo obv) :
Not a fan of the 'where do you want to go now' roaming thingie.
MC turning creep towards medicated Rachel.
MC all over the place all the time, he needs prozac or something!
I think 'huh' is better than 'hu'.
Overall great start.
Love the story.
Characters.
Ellie
The not so good (imo obv) :
Not a fan of the 'where do you want to go now' roaming thingie.
MC turning creep towards medicated Rachel.
MC all over the place all the time, he needs prozac or something!
I think 'huh' is better than 'hu'.
Overall great start.
- Aug 3, 2018
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Thank you for looking into this, and for figuring it out. Much appreciated. Take your time, I'm in no rush, and it's worth it.
- Nov 14, 2017
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It doesnt sound anything like coughing the way I hear it, like I said already it sounds like a cute laugh a young girl might make.
- Jun 10, 2018
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i'll make some mirrors after you uploaded it
Mega Link is up. I'm going to upload on mediafire now, but I bet @-Hex- has every other hoster finished before me lol
- Aug 29, 2017
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Oh @recreation, if you need additional inspiration for laughters my 2 favourites are 'fufufu' and 'kukuku' I suspect though that you like them just as much
I suspect though that you like them just as much OP updated, left mediafire link for you to update
- Jun 10, 2018
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13 minutes later - Mediafire updated^^"OP updated, left mediafire link for you to update
Yeah fufu comes right after nyaaaaOh @recreation, if you need additional inspiration for laughters my 2 favourites are 'fufufu' and 'kukuku'
Interesting so far, a few mysteries for the unlucky MC to uncover. Despite all his efforts, he ends up moving back with the family he hasn't seen in a long time, just like some other MCs, lol. I like the look of Ellie, that adorable face and Jada also seems interesting, the little minx.
Personally, not a fan of the unnecessary movement, going to place A to place B, where it can just cut straight to the next scene. As mentioned, not even 2 days in MC is already thinking about creeping on a medicated Rachel. And what's the deal with the cop, lol.
I see Harem in there for future tags (kinda won me over), i'm looking forward to see how the harem develops.
Trivial question, but since Ellie has red hair & Rachel has brown hair, does the MC also have red hair, taking after the father?
Personally, not a fan of the unnecessary movement, going to place A to place B, where it can just cut straight to the next scene. As mentioned, not even 2 days in MC is already thinking about creeping on a medicated Rachel. And what's the deal with the cop, lol.
I see Harem in there for future tags (kinda won me over), i'm looking forward to see how the harem develops.
Trivial question, but since Ellie has red hair & Rachel has brown hair, does the MC also have red hair, taking after the father?
- May 13, 2018
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Dear god those freckles! I'm in. Bit more choices along the way would be appreciated but for a first release, you hit the ball out of the park. Two thumbs up!
- Jun 10, 2018
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- Oct 17, 2017
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Game looks interesting. So far interesting build-up, good unique models and nice renders. You don't have patreon, I would like to support
- Jun 10, 2018
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Someone once throw money at me, all those coins hurt alot
Joke aside, maybe in the future, and thanks! Just knowing people would support me on patreon is quite nice
- May 13, 2018
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With the characters you have so far, the story build up and the friendly attitude you have shown, this is definitely a supportable project. Might be a bit scary having to met a monthly deadline though, no patreon responsibilities keeps you loose and free
From what i've seen so far this shows a lot of promise, it could become something really good so it's nothing strange that there are people willing to support the developmentJust knowing people would support me on patreon is quite nice
- May 7, 2018
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Of course! Stupid me... I should have figured that one out on my own... Anyway, great beginning to the game, keep up the good work!Maybe I fucked something up, with the android version. I did change just a few lines after my last playtest on android, so I didn't test it again. What is the first error you get?
Don't worry, be happy
"Hu" should actually be "huh" as I have learned recently. It is a expression of surprise like "Huh, what was that?" or "Huh, I think I saw something over there."
- Aug 28, 2018
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The genes for red hair are a recessive genetic trait, thus it would not be unusual for only one child in the family to have red hair (they would have had to inherited the red recessive gene from both parents). It's not impossible but it is unlikely. Like in my family, of all of us siblings, only one has steel blue eyes (also a recessive trait).
- Aug 28, 2018
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I really could see the therapist seeing the MC as her "enemy" and Ellie's relationship with him something she would want to stop, so she's a pretty likely candidate for an antagonist in this story.
- Oct 29, 2017
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Damnit, this looks awesome, keep up the awesome work man!
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- Nov 28, 2018
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The highlighted word should be "treat" not threat
This is misspelled again a little bit after this as well
This is misspelled again a little bit after this as well