BangCityGuy

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hm. after the second time Valerie comes to the basement to have sex the game stops. So there should not be an empty actions menu. I check the script right now.
 
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BangCityGuy

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Why it is empty ??
Your screen shows me:
- Valerie came the second time in the basement for sex. (condition: valtutoring = 25 a new var is set : valreact = 6)
- Plus: Next time you have to pay rent for the trailer is in 200+ Million days??????
when mc wakes up after second sex in basement -> (vars will be set: valreact = 7 and valtutoring = 26 )
Now the "end of version" screen appears in a loop.
Looks like someone else edited the scripts or the vars.
 
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BangCityGuy

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Not soon enough. There's too many mistakes.
Can't believe it took you this long to notice.
I hope you found someone with the time to fix that mess.
If i would be a native english speaker i would have notice it :)
Then i would not be in contact with a proofreader and hire him soon.

As you can imagine paid services costs money, and in maybe 2 month there will be a little amount of money aside i can spend for it. So the rework version will be proof-read before i realease it, i guess.
 

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If i would be a native english speaker i would have notice it :)
Then i would not be in contact with a proofreader and hire him soon.

As you can imagine paid services costs money, and in maybe 2 month there will be a little amount of money aside i can spend for it. So the rework version will be proof-read before i realease it, i guess.
Hire him?
Are people starting to get paid for that?
And all this time I've been do it for free.
You shouldn't pay him if he can't do a better job.
 

BangCityGuy

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Hire him?
Are people starting to get paid for that?
And all this time I've been do it for free.
You shouldn't pay him if he can't do a better job.
:ROFLMAO:
Yes, paid work is nothing unusal.
I do payed work, too. Almost every day ...
He did nothing so far. Because i did not hire him, yet.
 

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:ROFLMAO:
Yes, paid work is nothing unusal.
I do payed work, too. Almost every day ...
He did nothing so far. Because i did not hire him, yet.
You should really do something about those text messages.
It's really torturing my eyes. I need a magnifying glass in order to read it.
Maybe you should use a different color.
Plus I have no idea how he Valerie got together.
The game just skipped that somehow after it crashed.
And I am stuck in.....did you get to see Dwayne?
I'm starting to think that was done on purpose or the game crashed again.
It won't let me out of the house and it ends in game over.
I may have to use one of those crazy saves cause I can't continue.
I can't meet Dwuayne.
Game broke on day 24 that ended in game over.
So I have no idea what happened to Tiny Charles and Marla..
 
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BangCityGuy

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You should really do something about those text messages.
It's really torturing my eyes. I need a magnifying glass in order to read it.
You have crashes? Strange, i never have crashes. Maybe sometimes i have an script error when i develop the game but my game never crashed.
Please check if you are using the official verison of BangCity. I can't tell anything about inofficial releases.

This is a common screenshot FHD from my game. You cant read this??
You really need glasses!



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You have crashes? Strange, i never have crashes. Maybe sometimes i have an script error when i develop the game but my game never crashed.
Please check if you are using the official verison of BangCity. I can't tell anything about inofficial releases.

This is a common screenshot FHD from my game. You cant read this??
You really need glasses!



View attachment 1017910
Text, as in text messages when he gets a text message from Linda.
 

Canto Forte

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Yes ! Yes ! very much yes!!! ... Finally winning!
Does all...taste the same?
I think you mean...
Do all...taste the same?
It needs a proofreader if interested.
VaaaAAaaaaaleries tastes like passion fruit honey cinnamon tart ... every inch of her fantastic body!

Valerie comes to the basement to have sex
neverending story right there! MAKE THAT LOOP FOE EVA!!!!!

when mc wakes up after second sex in basement
i DO NOT WANT TO WAKE UP!!!! dO NOT WAKE ME UP!!!! kEEP ME IN THAT LOOP FOR EVA!
 
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Canto Forte

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wE REALLY NEED TO MAKE GAMERS AWARE OF THE POWER OF REN”PY!!!!!
Devs also .. such distress...
You should really do something about those text messages.
It's really torturing my eyes. I need a magnifying glass in order to read it.
Maybe you should use a different color.
Plus I have no idea how he Valerie got together.
The game just skipped that somehow after it crashed.
And I am stuck in.....did you get to see Dwayne?
I'm starting to think that was done on purpose or the game crashed again.
It won't let me out of the house and it ends in game over.
I may have to use one of those crazy saves cause I can't continue.
I can't meet Dwuayne.
You have crashes? Strange, i never have crashes. Maybe sometimes i have an script error when i develop the game but my game never crashed.
Please check if you are using the official verison of BangCity. I can't tell anything about inofficial releases.

This is a common screenshot FHD from my game. You cant read this??
You really need glasses!



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oh .. wait .. even dev is clueless of the ”A” command from Ren”py
that makes it possible to change spacing and size of text ... amateurs....duuuh.
 

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Here is the POWER OF REN”PY used for the betterment fo our gaming pleasure:
PUSH ”A” KEY TO GET THIS WONDER OF GAME ENGINE FEATURE:
babs1.jpg

Now we can game the right game for us:
babs.jpg

You have crashes? Strange, i never have crashes. Maybe sometimes i have an script error when i develop the game but my game never crashed.
Please check if you are using the official verison of BangCity. I can't tell anything about inofficial releases.

This is a common screenshot FHD from my game. You cant read this??
You really need glasses!



View attachment 1017910
Text, as in text messages when he gets a text message from Linda.
Happy gaming!
 
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