VN Ren'Py Onhold Banking on Bella [v0.08a] [Profile Game Studios]

[Pornfather 3000]

Anyway you can use the arrow keys on the volleyball minigame? I've got a touchpad, and I'm getting creamed.

Good question. Never thought about that. I doubt Darth thought about that in coding but I'm not sure...maybe another player/fan has some insights?

 

[Poison-Idea]

Day 11, lady asks me if I got my pay. MC says I did as I sit there staring at the 100$ I have left. Not even a wage slave any more bros, just a slave.

Got the same problem, never got my pay

 

[Pornfather 3000]

Got the same problem, never got my pay

Will look into it. TY for the bug report.

 

[PHIL101-YYouPPHard]

Merry xmas Pablo3000 (& any other dev that works on it, not sure about the names sorry!) Thx again for the all the hard work Look forward to trying out update when it officially releases to public

 

[Ultralazuli]

tried this. all the men look like staggeringly hideous Gen2 models, as do some of the women, but half of the women look like Gen8's with bad lighting. there's also a number of dev shortcuts taken here, including the meter on the top right, no explanation really given for that other than "Charm exists and is a resource". a lot of the poses are out-of-the-box, and out of place, and the visual elements just don't seem like there's much money or effort put into them.

as for the narrative, it also doesn't really make sense. i could tell that fran had alzheimers or dementia the moment she opened her fuckin piehole, and i would never let anyone i worked for treat me the way janice or fran treat protag-kun. i'd be gone day 1, and i'd take sofia with me, and we'd go to a firm/bank that actually gives a fuck about its workforce--cuz i've watched businesses fail miserably for this exact reason, and for less. seeing as how our stand-in apparently doesn't need to eat, i imagine he could live for quite a while with the grand he has, at least long enough to find a different job and possibly file a SH suit against janice.

some of the women are gorgeous (Abby, Sofia, Bella), but if that's all i wanted, I could load up daz and model them out myself, and possibly do it even better.

 

[Bruce F. Lee]

tried this. all the men look like staggeringly hideous Gen2 models, as do some of the women, but half of the women look like Gen8's with bad lighting. there's also a number of dev shortcuts taken here, including the meter on the top right, no explanation really given for that other than "Charm exists and is a resource". a lot of the poses are out-of-the-box, and out of place, and the visual elements just don't seem like there's much money or effort put into them.

as for the narrative, it also doesn't really make sense. i could tell that fran had alzheimers or dementia the moment she opened her fuckin piehole, and i would never let anyone i worked for treat me the way janice or fran treat protag-kun. i'd be gone day 1, and i'd take sofia with me, and we'd go to a firm/bank that actually gives a fuck about its workforce--cuz i've watched businesses fail miserably for this exact reason, and for less. seeing as how our stand-in apparently doesn't need to eat, i imagine he could live for quite a while with the grand he has, at least long enough to find a different job and possibly file a SH suit against janice.

some of the women are gorgeous (Abby, Sofia, Bella), but if that's all i wanted, I could load up daz and model them out myself, and possibly do it even better.

This checks out. You certainly write like someone who is a top tier business consultant. I’ll be sure to hire you when I start my next company.

 

[Pornfather 3000]

tried this. all the men look like staggeringly hideous Gen2 models, as do some of the women, but half of the women look like Gen8's with bad lighting. there's also a number of dev shortcuts taken here, including the meter on the top right, no explanation really given for that other than "Charm exists and is a resource". a lot of the poses are out-of-the-box, and out of place, and the visual elements just don't seem like there's much money or effort put into them.

as for the narrative, it also doesn't really make sense. i could tell that fran had alzheimers or dementia the moment she opened her fuckin piehole, and i would never let anyone i worked for treat me the way janice or fran treat protag-kun. i'd be gone day 1, and i'd take sofia with me, and we'd go to a firm/bank that actually gives a fuck about its workforce--cuz i've watched businesses fail miserably for this exact reason, and for less. seeing as how our stand-in apparently doesn't need to eat, i imagine he could live for quite a while with the grand he has, at least long enough to find a different job and possibly file a SH suit against janice.

some of the women are gorgeous (Abby, Sofia, Bella), but if that's all i wanted, I could load up daz and model them out myself, and possibly do it even better.

First thanks for playing and commenting in the thread.
1. G3, all G3
2. Why are you checking out the dudes? You do you but I mean, not the point of the game...
3. Dude, there is a whole game mechanic walk through in the beginning of the game that you clearly decided to skip. IDK man.
4. Yes, there are shitty people who are shitty bosses whose shitty companies fail. Also, there are a lot of people in this world doing shitty jobs for shitty people and shitty companies everyday to pay the bills. Why is this shocking? All I can assume is you didn't work after 9/11 or during the Financial Crisis and have no reference point to draw from.
5. Knock yourself out in firing up Daz and doing your own thing my friend. I'm not twisting your arm to play this game or stopping you from making your own. In fact I'm sure you can do a lot better. I encourage you in fact to make a game I'd like to fap to. I'd be willing to help too. Any advice you might need (though clearly you think the game is shit and the art is shit and posing is...well I get the point). Honestly, ask anyone on here (Neon Ghost for example) I'm always available to help another Developer with encouragement, coding, art whatever. I look forward to the game you make. Let me know what I can do to help.

 

[Pornfather 3000]

Merry xmas Pablo3000 (& any other dev that works on it, not sure about the names sorry!) Thx again for the all the hard work Look forward to trying out update when it officially releases to public

Thanks Phil! You're a super fan supporter. I appreciate your kind comments on here everyday. Merry xmas to you and to all the players and fans! Special thanks and a Merry xmas to ALL THE PATRONS who make this happen with their financial support too. Without them the wife shuts this whole project down

 

[Ayhsel]

as for the narrative, it also doesn't really make sense. i could tell that fran had alzheimers or dementia the moment she opened her fuckin piehole, and i would never let anyone i worked for treat me the way janice or fran treat protag-kun. i'd be gone day 1, and i'd take sofia with me, and we'd go to a firm/bank that actually gives a fuck about its workforce--cuz i've watched businesses fail miserably for this exact reason, and for less. seeing as how our stand-in apparently doesn't need to eat, i imagine he could live for quite a while with the grand he has, at least long enough to find a different job and possibly file a SH suit against janice.

And I as chocolate vampire would bite on any girl's neck that I believe has sweet blood. Mallorie is top of the list.

But you know what? We are not playing a game as Ayhsel the (cute) chocolate vampire. Neither are we playing a game as Ultralazuli that would quit and tell everyone to fuck off. We are playing a game in which you take someone else personality and move arou d the lines you are set on.

some of the women are gorgeous (Abby, Sofia, Bella), but if that's all i wanted, I could load up daz and model them out myself, and possibly do it even better.

Just do it. No need to tell us what you believe you can accomplish. Just do it.

 

[PHIL101-YYouPPHard]

tried this. all the men look like staggeringly hideous Gen2 models, as do some of the women, but half of the women look like Gen8's with bad lighting. there's also a number of dev shortcuts taken here, including the meter on the top right, no explanation really given for that other than "Charm exists and is a resource". a lot of the poses are out-of-the-box, and out of place, and the visual elements just don't seem like there's much money or effort put into them.

as for the narrative, it also doesn't really make sense. i could tell that fran had alzheimers or dementia the moment she opened her fuckin piehole, and i would never let anyone i worked for treat me the way janice or fran treat protag-kun. i'd be gone day 1, and i'd take sofia with me, and we'd go to a firm/bank that actually gives a fuck about its workforce--cuz i've watched businesses fail miserably for this exact reason, and for less. seeing as how our stand-in apparently doesn't need to eat, i imagine he could live for quite a while with the grand he has, at least long enough to find a different job and possibly file a SH suit against janice.

some of the women are gorgeous (Abby, Sofia, Bella), but if that's all i wanted, I could load up daz and model them out myself, and possibly do it even better.

Man, I hate to pile on usually, but I have to say: this comment comes off as a satire of reviews. It genuinely made me chuckle If you're doing a bit of trolling, it worked bud! Merry late xmas man, and tata!

 

[Joshy92]

Mallorie is so beautiful & so sweet she is the only girl for me

I want to take her on a romantic date & make sweet love to her all night
I would hold her hand & stroke her beautiful face while our souls become one.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Mallorie is so beautiful & so sweet she is the only girl for me

I want to take her on a romantic date & make sweet love to her all night
I would hold her hand & stroke her beautiful face while our souls become one.

Dude even you can't refuse Oreo, go create another save.

 

[Joshy92]

Dude even you can't refuse Oreo, go create another save.

Don't worry I will have plenty of different playthroughs in the future
But for now Mallorie has stolen my heart.

 

[cheldon]

I liked the return of the volleyball minigame is there going to be more minigames in the future i liked them. Question. Will there be action with girls like Emma (the girl in a wheelchair) or Angela (Hanna's feminist friend) or will they just be background characters?

 

[Ultralazuli]

First thanks for playing and commenting in the thread.
1. G3, all G3
2. Why are you checking out the dudes? You do you but I mean, not the point of the game...
3. Dude, there is a whole game mechanic walk through in the beginning of the game that you clearly decided to skip. IDK man.
4. Yes, there are shitty people who are shitty bosses whose shitty companies fail. Also, there are a lot of people in this world doing shitty jobs for shitty people and shitty companies everyday to pay the bills. Why is this shocking? All I can assume is you didn't work after 9/11 or during the Financial Crisis and have no reference point to draw from.
5. Knock yourself out in firing up Daz and doing your own thing my friend. I'm not twisting your arm to play this game or stopping you from making your own. In fact I'm sure you can do a lot better. I encourage you in fact to make a game I'd like to fap to. I'd be willing to help too. Any advice you might need (though clearly you think the game is shit and the art is shit and posing is...well I get the point). Honestly, ask anyone on here (Neon Ghost for example) I'm always available to help another Developer with encouragement, coding, art whatever. I look forward to the game you make. Let me know what I can do to help.

G3 makes sense, but why G3 and not 8?

I've worked a number of jobs, including both after 9/11 and during the recession in america. Your point?

As for the last one, I tried. I did. For about a year and a half I tried. But artists are insane. Got a whole fuckin thing done up in renpy 7.2.2, as well as story and character outlines, about 4k lines of script, and about 6 scenes done. but when it came time to get someone to visualize these, to compose the art and get it done, in 2d, nobody with a stable mentality and the style of art I wanted was willing to work with me. So I'm done. It failed, I failed, whatever sets your heart at ease.

 

[HathgarNiche]

i didnt see other mention of this, but is the animation being jerky just on my end or is that normal in this game? This is not a dig at the game btw, im just trying to figure out if its something on my end.

 

[PHIL101-YYouPPHard]

As for the last one, I tried. I did. For about a year and a half I tried. But artists are insane. Got a whole fuckin thing done up in renpy 7.2.2, as well as story and character outlines, about 4k lines of script, and about 6 scenes done. but when it came time to get someone to visualize these, to compose the art and get it done, in 2d, nobody with a stable mentality and the style of art I wanted was willing to work with me. So I'm done. It failed, I failed, whatever sets your heart at ease.

That's a shame. Before giving up, you should honestly reconsider the way you go about making your game. Expecting an artist to make all of your 2d assets, while being picky with it to boot, is just insane. I hope you offered to pay; that definitely changes things, though I'd imagine a freelance artist might not like the idea of working on someone else's vision for years and years (I'm assuming they opt for the variety of short-term projects, but I have no experience in this of course).

Pre-made assets is the way to go I think, which is why most VNs here are 3d ones. You gotta make your own game, basically. If you really were willing to fork cash over to artists, it'd probably make more sense to hire 3d artists to make unique models for you; it's much easier for multiple 3d artists to maintain the same style than multiple 2d artists; plus, my understanding is that 3d art is much cheaper and easier to make than 2d art.

i didnt see other mention of this, but is the animation being jerky just on my end or is that normal in this game? This is not a dig at the game btw, im just trying to figure out if its something on my end.

I had that problem as well. Think we'll just have to deal with it.



BTW, how large will the oreo harem grow, Pablo3000 ? I know your players are naughty making impossible requests left and right given your limited time and resources, but if there will be like 1 or even 2 more black girls each with their own interesting personalities like our Gena & Kori, I will be in heaven

 

[thenewone1]

The MC sees Pandemonium and mentions it will knock Kori out but there is no option to use it, however I see the picture of Kori sleeping. Anyone know how to do that?

 

[_DarkDesires_]

Thank you for the update, I thoroughly enjoyed the new scenes!

I know there's already an overabundance of LIs, but Hannah's toxic actor friend would sure make for a nice hatefuck
Other than that a walkthrough could be a nice addition, a decent amount of fomo every update on what content I'm unknowingly missing out on. Will check out the Stacy route though after reading the comments

Btw, does someone know how to get this scene from the previews?

I don't remember that we really got to take advantage of her earlier as the private location suggests

 

[Jack Townsend]

That's a shame. Before giving up, you should honestly reconsider the way you go about making your game. Expecting an artist to make all of your 2d assets, while being picky with it to boot, is just insane. I hope you offered to pay; that definitely changes things, though I'd imagine a freelance artist might not like the idea of working on someone else's vision for years and years (I'm assuming they opt for the variety of short-term projects, but I have no experience in this of course).

Pre-made assets is the way to go I think, which is why most VNs here are 3d ones. You gotta make your own game, basically. If you really were willing to fork cash over to artists, it'd probably make more sense to hire 3d artists to make unique models for you; it's much easier for multiple 3d artists to maintain the same style than multiple 2d artists; plus, my understanding is that 3d art is much cheaper and easier to make than 2d art.


I had that problem as well. Think we'll just have to deal with it.



BTW, how large will the oreo harem grow, Pablo3000 ? I know your players are naughty making impossible requests left and right given your limited time and resources, but if there will be like 1 or even 2 more black girls each with their own interesting personalities like our Gena & Kori, I will be in heaven

The term Oreo (according to Gena) means one white guy with two black girls. So, you will get a throuple, but not a harem.