VN Ren'Py Completed Bare Witness [Steam Build] [AlterWorlds]

[Monty10]

Zenda is more femdom.
She has personality.
No wonder she has own path.

 

[Lovemaking]

Zenda is more femdom.
She has personality.
No wonder she has own path.

I wouldn't really say "femdom" more that she knows what she wants and she actually treats it like an real relationship.
Personally Zenda is the best girl by the longest mile.

Zenda is confident, she knows what she wants.
She turns MC into a man
She's the most caring and understand out of all the girls. (she had the absolute best reaction to MC's story with witsec)
She's just perfect.

Just like Elle King sang
- "
I had me a boy, turned him into a man
I showed him all the things that he didn't understand "

 

[Monty10]

I wouldn't really say "femdom" more that she knows what she wants and she actually treats it like an real relationship.
Personally Zenda is the best girl by the longest mile.

Zenda is confident, she knows what she wants.
She turns MC into a man
She's the most caring and understand out of all the girls. (she had the absolute best reaction to MC's story with witsec)
She's just perfect.

Just like Elle King sang
- "
I had me a boy, turned him into a man
I showed him all the things that he didn't understand "

I would say she's toxic.
Yes, her actions are mature and she seems to want a more serious relationship than others,
but I can't handle someone toxic who gets upset when I don't agree to her requests.
She even breaks up with me if I have other plans during the vacation!

BTW this pic is hilarious lol

 

[Lovemaking]

but I can't handle someone toxic who gets upset when I don't agree to her requests.
She even breaks up with me if I have other plans during the vacation!

Just agree to her requests? you don't gain anything by not agreeing to her requests. (If you don't wanna spend time with Zenda THEN DON'T GO FOR HER PATH)
Zenda's entire thing is that she wants to be loved. She wants to spend time with the MC... So if you have other plans that's not involving Zenda then pay for your own vacation!

That's literally like going on 1 on 1 vacation with your loved one and suddenly your friend shows up and you decide to spend time with him instead of THE PERSON YOU'RE GOING ON A VACATION WITH WHAT???? WHAT EVEN IS THIS CONVO????

Brother you have absolutely 0 clue what toxic is, TRUST me i know because me and my ex were INCREDIBLY TOXIC against each other. (we we're young)

And yes that pic is indeed hilarious lol

 

[Monty10]

Just agree to her requests? you don't gain anything by not agreeing to her requests. (If you don't wanna spend time with Zenda THEN DON'T GO FOR HER PATH)
Zenda's entire thing is that she wants to be loved. She wants to spend time with the MC... So if you have other plans that's not involving Zenda then pay for your own vacation!

That's literally like going on 1 on 1 vacation with your loved one and suddenly your friend shows up and you decide to spend time with him instead of THE PERSON YOU'RE GOING ON A VACATION WITH WHAT???? WHAT EVEN IS THIS CONVO????

Brother you have absolutely 0 clue what toxic is, TRUST me i know because me and my ex were INCREDIBLY TOXIC against each other. (we we're young)

And yes that pic is indeed hilarious lol

I don't know if you're a man or a woman, but for me, I don't expect a woman (Zenda) to teach me how to be a man.

Even the way she speaks, with a commanding tone, for example, she kicked me out of her house after we had sex and got what she wanted from me.
She didn't even bother to let me sleep until morning and left me to go alone at night instead of taking me home.

 

[Lovemaking]

I don't know if you're a man or a woman, but for me, I don't expect a woman (Zenda) to teach me how to be a man.

Even the way she speaks, with a commanding tone, for example, she kicked me out of her house after we had sex and got what she wanted from me.
She didn't even bother to let me sleep until morning and left me to go alone at night instead of taking me home.

I'm a man.
With that said, I'll have to apologize for what I'm arguing for as it all comes down to preferences. Everyone has different likes and views. I usually respect personal opinions and this time i honestly forgot about it.

I'm currently redownloading the game and i'll see if i overlooked some stuff when i played her path. Ill get back to ya on your next response

 

[Lovemaking]

Even the way she speaks, with a commanding tone, for example, she kicked me out of her house after we had sex and got what she wanted from me.
She didn't even bother to let me sleep until morning and left me to go alone at night instead of taking me home.

Sorry couldn't wait until your next response as I'm finished playing Zenda's path again.

Alright so, I honestly did not catch a "commanding tone" when she sent MC home. Zenda said that she's exhausted and asked if MC could take an Uber home. Which is totally understandable, she took MC on a date, she paid for dinner, she brought him to a club (she paid there as well) and what? you want her to pay for MC's uber as well? seriously at that point put on a diaper get a pacifier and ask her to be your mommy This was their first date and their 2nd sexual encounter. Of course she wanted to be alone and take in what just happened after all of that. Now with this being said I'll start with my summary of Zenda

Zenda - She's a posh woman (She's elegant, Stylish, Well educated, Wealthy, High social standing, Proper eating etiquette, Well behaved, Manners, Upper class)

I will have to return my comment on Zenda turning MC into a "man" after replaying i found out that she wanted to help MC gain confidence so he can be seen as someone respectable. Now to the good stuff.

Zenda is quite literally the most head over heels LI that I've seen in these types of NSFW games. Also Zenda is probably one of the best written and well made LI (in my opinion) I can't remember a game that does a character that's better than Zenda. As she feels the most real out of everyone. She's an very vulnerable Woman especially when it comes to how her father views her and if she's ever going to find someone who her father truly accepts to be her lifetime partner.
Like i said, she's very head over heels for the MC and it really shows.

Zenda is also very vulnerable when it comes down to if MC truly loves her or not. She knows that there's more LI that's interested in MC and she actually gets very emotional about it. She also got so scared that if her father got into contact with MC and bribed him to leave her.

There's honestly A LOT i can say about Zenda but I'd seriously and i really mean it. SERIOUSLY recommend to fully play her path and her path alone. Don't be condescending about her (you obviously are) and just go along with arguably one of the best love stories in NSFW games history.

- Best regards. Lovemaking
Definitely get back to me, really curious on your thoughts and definitely come with more examples of her being "toxic" and I'll debunk you faster than you can put on a diaper and a pacifier.

 

[VaderExMachina]

I would say she's toxic.
Yes, her actions are mature and she seems to want a more serious relationship than others,
but I can't handle someone toxic who gets upset when I don't agree to her requests.
She even breaks up with me if I have other plans during the vacation!

BTW this pic is hilarious lol
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agreed, probably one of the reasons i only did her route last.

also here's that pic in full:

 

[Lovemaking]

agreed, probably one of the reasons i only did her route last.

Alright then, What's toxic about her?

 

[Monty10]

Sorry couldn't wait until your next response as I'm finished playing Zenda's path again.

Alright so, I honestly did not catch a "commanding tone" when she sent MC home. Zenda said that she's exhausted and asked if MC could take an Uber home. Which is totally understandable, she took MC on a date, she paid for dinner, she brought him to a club (she paid there as well) and what? you want her to pay for MC's uber as well? seriously at that point put on a diaper get a pacifier and ask her to be your mommy This was their first date and their 2nd sexual encounter. Of course she wanted to be alone and take in what just happened after all of that. Now with this being said I'll start with my summary of Zenda

Zenda - She's a posh woman (She's elegant, Stylish, Well educated, Wealthy, High social standing, Proper eating etiquette, Well behaved, Manners, Upper class)

I will have to return my comment on Zenda turning MC into a "man" after replaying i found out that she wanted to help MC gain confidence so he can be seen as someone respectable. Now to the good stuff.

Zenda is quite literally the most head over heels LI that I've seen in these types of NSFW games. Also Zenda is probably one of the best written and well made LI (in my opinion) I can't remember a game that does a character that's better than Zenda. As she feels the most real out of everyone. She's an very vulnerable Woman especially when it comes to how her father views her and if she's ever going to find someone who her father truly accepts to be her lifetime partner.
Like i said, she's very head over heels for the MC and it really shows.

Zenda is also very vulnerable when it comes down to if MC truly loves her or not. She knows that there's more LI that's interested in MC and she actually gets very emotional about it. She also got so scared that if her father got into contact with MC and bribed him to leave her.

There's honestly A LOT i can say about Zenda but I'd seriously and i really mean it. SERIOUSLY recommend to fully play her path and her path alone. Don't be condescending about her (you obviously are) and just go along with arguably one of the best love stories in NSFW games history.

- Best regards. Lovemaking
Definitely get back to me, really curious on your thoughts and definitely come with more examples of her being "toxic" and I'll debunk you faster than you can put on a diaper and a pacifier.

Please read my entire comment.

Honestly, I don’t see what’s wrong with Zenda cuddling with the MC in bed after sex, holding each other until morning, and then going their separate ways.
But instead, she’s being exploitative—she took what she wanted from him and didn’t even want him to sleep beside her until morning.


Keep in mind, she was the one who asked him out on a date, not the other way around.
And the MC never asked her to pay the bill at the restaurant; she insisted on paying herself.


She showed the “masculine” role and didn’t allow the MC to show his masculinity with her, except during sex.
That’s why I said she’s a dominant woman who only lets her partner dominate her in bed, just like feminists.


And honestly, I don’t think the MC lacked confidence—he was just worried about being recognized, especially since he’s on the run under an alias as part of the witness protection program.


Lastly, I’m not being arrogant toward Zenda, because at the end of the day she’s just a fictional character.
But she simply doesn’t appeal to me: first, because she isn’t fun like Heidi, and second, she isn’t wild like Athena. Those are two qualities I love in my dream girl. That’s why Zenda isn’t the right girl for me.
That's why I love Heidi and Athena.

 

[Lovemaking]

MC never asked her to pay the bill at the restaurant; she insisted on paying herself.

First off, fair enough about liking different qualities in said dream girl.

Second off MC couldn't pay. He checked the receipt and said "Oh"

But instead, she’s being exploitative—she took what she wanted from him and didn’t even want him to sleep beside her until morning.

Literally did not read what i wrote earlier... Zenda was exhausted and simply wanted alone time to properly grasp what just happened... Who are you to demand to stay over?

She showed the “masculine” role and didn’t allow the MC to show his masculinity with her, except during sex.
That’s why I said she’s a dominant woman who only lets her partner dominate her in bed, just like feminists.

Brother what... I'm afraid you might hate women if this is what your views are... Zenda has 0 masculinity. She's from a different world compared to MC, you and me.

Also this is funny (didn't allow the MC to show his masculinity) idk what you wanted him to show? (It's not like MC can break the already made script and do his own thing)

If you want MC to pay for the dinner. I'm sorry, he simply can't.
Also, i guess you missed when MC took Zenda back from the guy that was trying to dance with her. I'd consider that "masculine" bruh just talking about this is making me cringe. I know exactly what kind of person you are and i despise you.

- Best regards, your lost daddy

 

[Monty10]

Second off MC couldn't pay. He checked the receipt and said "Oh"

If he couldn’t afford the restaurant bill, it would have been better for him to reconsider before leaving home so he wouldn’t embarrass himself and make Zenda pay instead of him.

Literally did not read what i wrote earlier... Zenda was exhausted and simply wanted alone time to properly grasp what just happened... Who are you to demand to stay over?

Imagine taking your girlfriend to your place, having sex with her, then kicking her out in the middle of the night, saying you’re tired and don’t want to sleep with her until morning instead of driving her home.
You’d say it’s different because you’re a man and she’s a woman.
But for me, it’s the same, because it reflects how important you really are to her.

If you want MC to pay for the dinner. I'm sorry, he simply can't.

For me, it’s not my problem but the developer’s problem for putting him in that predicament.
Any normal person would make sure they have enough money before leaving their home.

i guess you missed when MC took Zenda back from the guy that was trying to dance with her.

She didn’t dance with the man for nothing; it was intentional so she could see the MC's reaction—just like testing your future wife to see if she would get jealous over you or not, and based on that, you’d decide whether to marry her or not.

See ya, my son

 

[Bloodguard]

My feelings on Zenda are that she's a dommy mommy who just kind of treats the MC like a narcissistic extension.
I felt like she loved him like she loved her favorite handbag.
If you want a girl who knows best how to run your life and all you have to do is smile and wave, like good eye candy, go with Zenda.

 

[Lovemaking]

My feelings on Zenda are that she's a dommy mommy who just kind of treats the MC like a narcissistic extension.
I felt like she loved him like she loved her favorite handbag.
If you want a girl who knows best how to run your life and all you have to do is smile and wave, like good eye candy, go with Zenda.

We clearly did not play the same game
I honestly cannot be asked to try and defend Zenda anymore. It's truly hard to defend someone when people have barely played her route because they can't stand someone who isn't a naive bimbo

I'll just block this entire thread because i truly with my whole heart despise all of yous

 

[Tremonia]

I'll just block this entire thread because i truly with my whole heart despise all of yous

You don't have to block the thread. Just put this one Monty10 guy you're answering to on ignore like hundreds of us other users already did. This guy is a troll.

 

[Monty10]

You don't have to block the thread. Just put this one Monty10 guy you're answering to on ignore like hundreds of us other users already did. This guy is a troll.

keep screaming

 

[Tier1selection]

I would say she's toxic.
Yes, her actions are mature and she seems to want a more serious relationship than others,
but I can't handle someone toxic who gets upset when I don't agree to her requests.
She even breaks up with me if I have other plans during the vacation!

BTW this pic is hilarious lol
View attachment 5190089

agreed, probably one of the reasons i only did her route last.

also here's that pic in full: View attachment 5190415

My favourtie character of this VN: PRISCILLA

 

[LoserBender]

some advice please
should I install Incest patch ?
what is cannon which one feels more natural sister or cousin?

 

[ciberma7865]

some advice please
should I install Incest patch ?
what is cannon which one feels more natural sister or cousin?

game is written with Sadi as cousin not sister

 

[Maviarab]

some advice please
should I install Incest patch ?
what is cannon which one feels more natural sister or cousin?

Canon (one 'n') is cousin (as written) and makes far more sense story wise.