zegamez, I must praise you for more renders of her with the red bush worthy of a ginger goddess (hehe) in v0.0.2, not to mention the new bush on Dolly. I've taken 60 screenshots of images with pubes, which is double that of 30 I took from previous version.
Screenshots for, uh, "research" purposes; for the science, of course.
Hehe
Anyway, so I've gone through a refresher by starting all over because of that shaving option. In playing it through again, I just realized there was another aspect I forgot to praise in your work which was the attention you gave to other elements of her appearance. Namely, the jewelry such as necklaces and earrings. Most games don't bother with that level of details, unfortunately. It made her quite adorable. Not to mention that a necklace dangling against her breasts during sex or something would be erotic...
I also liked how you did several hairstyles over the course of an entire day, which I feel is yet another great thing about the game. There were at least three or four hairstyles she went through in a day. I think you could look into different hairstyles for daytime on different days. One of the hairstyle looks I am particular to is the ponytail laid over the shoulder, like those in Google image search result
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. I think it's cute but I am not sure if that kind of hairstyle would work on her.
Now on to the story itself... After the violation on train, MC mentioned having read an article where, when sexual abuse is inevitable, the victim starts getting pleasure from the process which help her keep sanity. That was interesting and I am guessing you have researched this psychology thing before developing this story? Also, the fact that she was feeling a mix of disgust and pleasure about her assailants should make for yet another interesting conflict internally for MC. It will be interesting to see how that conflict play out internally in her, how she will deal with it, and how she will resolve it.
In that scene where she went to cellphone store, her reaction was hilarious. Like she was OMG at new phone's price and then she went OMG again at older phone's price, just looking down at the floor with a sort of defeated look. xD
And that line where MC said "It is not a RenPy game where you can just scroll the mouse wheel up and make another choice", that was great. haha and that was kind of an ironic reference considering that you can in fact scroll back/forward in this game. hehe
Finally, I can't help but see her resemblance with Melody from
the eponymous game. Maybe she is Melody's long-lost sister and we all didn't know it?
Fortunately, unlike Melody who was all bald down there (sad!), at least you have an option to keep bush for MC which really pleased me.
P.S. Oh, by the way, that line "Only whores shave pussy bald, don't they?" was kind of funny. I know it's not your intent but it was kind of nice dig at people who liked them bald. Hehe. Just kidding, everyone, don't get mad at me LOL
#bald-bush-rivalry
