TheTypist
Well, version 2.0 is very promising, i liked it a lot, you're getting better with time it is visible in this release.
I loved the flying words you put in some texts that was very funny, it made me laugh a lot.
The graphics are excellent as always, i really love your art and i find nothing bad to say about it, and you even found the time to animate the love scenes, very good indeed.
We get hints at where our choices could lead in the future, and this is very exciting (ah... the possibilities...), even if it is short (which is understandable), it was very enjoyable, i felt that my choices mattered and that is exactly what i love in VN games.
The Story looks good, i can't judge yet as it is too soon, but so far you are doing well, i have a good feeling about it.
Seriously i am trying to be a useful critic to help you make the game better, but the only bad thing i found is some grammar mistakes, and i'm sure this will be fixed later, and the small police of the texts like when we meet the neighbors, at some point it was hard to read, make it a little bigger while keeping it smaller than normal text so we understand that we are hearing people talk from afar.
Finally, for me this game was "love at first sight" ( you got the hint ? hehe :3 ), and i am so happy to see you back on it and enjoying what you do, just take your time, don't pressure yourself with release dates all the time, some times just say "it will be ready when it will be ready", i wish to see the results of your work when you do it well, because i repeat you are very talented.
GOOD JOB !!