I think that for a demo it was great work,just here are some thoughts about improving the game in my Opinion.....
Let us know when your on Patreon,I sure the hell will be a supporter if this quality continues.
Then, is it possible to have the player make up the names of the player and girlfriend?,
I believe a lot of folks would love this.
Then please don`t bring out an update after the demo,that only takes about 5 minutes of Gameplay for each update,
I personally would rather wait 2 months,then downloading a game with considerable size,that only gives you 5 or 10 miniutes of game play.
Keep up the Great work.....