In the previous version, if you were on the NTR path, Darryl showed at the pool party and after a while the MC got drunk and fired a gun that was definitely not Chekovian. The bullet put Darryl in the hospital. The MC then randomly sent Claire to the hospital to apologize, at which point Darryl (who turns out to be a gangster, also out of the blue) blackmails and rapes her, then promises she's in for more of the same. This after all the previous NTR work set up a scenario in which the MC and Olivia were both pushing Claire towards towards a little side action and Claire was willingly responding to Darryl's advances. In other words, it came out of nowhere and didn't follow from what preceded it.
Trust me, this version is much more coherent, at least on Claire's NTR path. I agree about Jenni's blowjob, but compared to the Claire/NTR issue in the previous version it's relatively minor. I guess we'll see what it looks like in the context of more MC/Jenni story.