VN Ren'Py Because I Love Her [Love Update Steam] [The Typist]

[chipsiup]

I like the premise of the game, but I feel like so far the choices aren't quite as impactful. It is just a demo, so maybe this will branch out more later on.

For example, with the gym bits with Claire, you either have to go full "bad" or not. Going full bad leads to the dialogue with the MC, and the optional dream sequence. Any other option and the MC is already asleep when Claire gets home.

There is not, for instance, an outcome where Claire stretches like Olivia and stares at the black guy in the gym, but the MC was "good" during the earlier conversation. They could be having a different conversation, where Claire feels a secret excitement that she is too guilty to talk to the MC about.

 

[TheTypist]

I like the premise of the game, but I feel like so far the choices aren't quite as impactful. It is just a demo, so maybe this will branch out more later on.

For example, with the gym bits with Claire, you either have to go full "bad" or not. Going full bad leads to the dialogue with the MC, and the optional dream sequence. Any other option and the MC is already asleep when Claire gets home.

There is not, for instance, an outcome where Claire stretches like Olivia and stares at the black guy in the gym, but the MC was "good" during the earlier conversation. They could be having a different conversation, where Claire feels a secret excitement that she is too guilty to talk to the MC about.

You are totally right! As far as the demo goes, it was made to display what CAN be done, but not what I would do in the end. As of now I've ironed out some kinks in dialogue, and based on current decisions, it will either lead to one of the two main paths, which each have their own choices within that lead to different scenes. Of course one being the lust?corruption, and the either being the love path.

Thank you btw for playing my game, I hope you will stick around for future versions!

 

[Ignazzio]

Quite a pleasant surprise. Well written, with fine renders and fine ideas regarding choices. I really liked that. It was probably a bit too fast for me when it comes to Jenni but it was fine as well. Only thing I'm not so sure is that our girfriend is pictured as innocent and very traditional which would usually mean that she's a virgin. Jenni is saying we're not having sex with her so that might suggest that as well but we're sleeping with her on a daily basis and it's not mentioned so her innocence is confusing in that regard for me. But overall I'm really looking forward for a next update. I will observe this one (and some future NTR routes in it)

 

[thecardinal]

Haven't played the game, but I saw elsewhere you mentioned having a bad GPU. I highly recommended only using hair from AprilYSH (like the darker-skinned girl) and avoid ones from outoftouch (like the one on Claire).

Try it out, it could really cut down on your render times.

 

[TheTypist]

Haven't played the game, but I saw elsewhere you mentioned having a bad GPU. I highly recommended only using hair from AprilYSH (like the darker-skinned girl) and avoid ones from outoftouch (like the one on Claire).

Try it out, it could really cut down on your render times.

It must have been a mistake, I think I was speaking in terms of someone else’s setup when trying to give them estimates for themselves, as I have a gtx 1070 and my renders never exceed 8 minutes. Even with good light and 1200 iterations

 

[thecardinal]

It must have been a mistake, I think I was speaking in terms of someone else’s setup when trying to give them estimates for themselves, as I have a gtx 1070 and my renders never exceed 8 minutes. Even with good light and 1200 iterations

My mistake. My rig is ancient, so I sympathize with people with bad rendering computers. You're cool too, I guess.

 

[TheTypist]

My mistake. My rig is ancient, so I sympathize with people with bad rendering computers. You're cool too, I guess.

Haha, well either way it’s always appreciated that you come and leave useful information trying to help. I love it. Also, played your game, not bad at all! Hard to believe you have a bad setup haha. Do you render entire scenes, or do characters separate like myself? Just out of curiosity

 

[thecardinal]

Haha, well either way it’s always appreciated that you come and leave useful information trying to help. I love it. Also, played your game, not bad at all! Hard to believe you have a bad setup haha. Do you render entire scenes, or do characters separate like myself? Just out of curiosity

I started doing separate characters on a static background, but have slowly been shifting to rendering entire scenes. I only render entire scenes now. But you can use spot rendering if you want to keep an entire scene and just change one expression. You can draw a box over the area that changes, change the pose or expression in daz, then re-render. The entire scene stays static while the part in the box is re-rendered.

 

[loophole63]

Just played your demo, and I loved it! I am looking forward to where you go with this!

 

[TheTypist]

Just played your demo, and I loved it! I am looking forward to where you go with this!

Thank you, I appreciate your feedback and compliment, and look forward to the future

 

[jsarah]

very, very good start! I've been captured by the poses that you've chosen... I've seen infinite yoga/gym in other games that was the first time that I've enjoyed a lot! I can't wait to see how will evolve this game!

 

[Baka!]

I really liked the demo (especially the NTR route) I really like the NTR and the cuckolding so in the future (distant future maybe) it would be great to see things: like the girls do not want to fuck with you and make you masturbate while watching them and things of the style or even that your girlfriend loves you as a friend, breaks up with you and moves a new boyfriend to your home, maybe the black guy at the gym

 

[Tony_Stark]

You have my support in Patron when you can have it, I really liked the demo (especially the NTR route) I really like the NTR and the cuckolding so in the future (distant future maybe) it would be great to see things: like the girls do not want to fuck with you and make you masturbate while watching them and things of the style or even that your girlfriend loves you as a friend, breaks up with you and moves a new boyfriend to your home, maybe the black guy at the gym (without pressure, it is your game, if you develop it just as well as the demo you have my unconditional support)

yes, i agree, that would be good

 

[jakhmonument]

Great renders but ntr is a huge turnoff for me. I'll wait until there's more content that doesn't have ntr or a patch that excludes it.

 

[Guygee]

@TheTypist - loving both your current and forthcoming improvements and updates, plus your high level of proactiveness here (I hope Patreon won't take you too far away from that). Should you be in need of an ex-professional Proofreader (no I wasn't fired btw) let me know in a Conversation (aka Private Message most other places). Well done and good luck! :extremelyhappy:

 

[gogollolo]

I like where this is going:eazyHype:

 

[TheTypist]

@TheTypist - loving both your current and forthcoming improvements and updates, plus your high level of proactiveness here (I hope Patreon won't take you too far away from that). Should you be in need of an ex-professional Proofreader (no I wasn't fired btw) let me know in a Conversation (aka Private Message most other places). Well done and good luck! :extremelyhappy:

Thank you so much, I do appreciate it And I can promise I’ll be just as active on here, no matter what other platforms I have. I’m also active on a discord, and even though I work a lot at my current job as a server, I still manage to get on here during work hours to prove my dedication. Believe me, I’m here to stay, the support I’ve received will keep me going for a long time coming.

 

[yourkha0s]

I loved the demo, wish the game was already completed... The characters look gorgeaus

 

[crisbr]

just reading I've already been excited you write very well ,every choice has its consequences on the way to corruption and wonderful and well written when she begins to tell what happened in the academy that she was exited if showing my heart beat accelerated with the excitement of where it will take congratulations more adult story without stuffing I loved it and I like where this is going ..... ;} thx for this!!!!!

 

[eddictionz]

Just finished the demo, loved it. When can we expect the next update?