I am not a fan of being overly critic especially because I have no idea of how hard it must be to make such nice visual novels, but sometimes it is nice to point out some things...
First things first, amazing update. The quality of the renders is just top notch! Stellar work, to say the least!
It is great to see Julia alive and on her way to full recovery, while the fun of dating multiple girls reached its end...as mentioned in a previous post, I had a lot of fun with that and did separate saves to enjoy each girl's route =)
About the story and the girls:
Lisa and Jade - I admit to not have tried the Lisa-only route, since dating her and Jade became quite natural, with the progression of the story. It started off brilliantly with Lisa, but as the story went further, a bit of that magic went away, for some reason...but still, she's awesome, and Jade as well.
Selina - Who didn't fall in love with this crazy redhead? I love her route and after playing her path I find it a bit difficult to switch saves and play with another girl...I love all the girls, but maybe she's my favorite?
Jane - Even being hot as hell she wasn't my favorite at first, but she grew on me, since her route is great. Now I see the magic in dating her, and I'm loving it a lot.
Anna - It made me sad how lackluster this update was to her route...Lacking proper action, though making up by having long conversations about everything. All in all, understandable, but still not what I expected...Nothing that can't be fixed in the future, I guess...right?
All in all, it's great to see the MC having such great girlfriends around him to support him.
One thing bothers me a bit about this VN, although it's not entirely bad...The whole VN feels a bit too short, at least the updates are. And with such great quality we'd expect it to last long...It would be nice to see this VN covering a year or more in the life of the MC's path to stardom, right? Hope you guys can feel me on this.
Mr.Jet, give us long endings for each girl's path at the end of the VN. It was amazing to explore each one's path in this update =D