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Yes. Art is great, and it aims to be a short story. It's 10 minutes to do both routes. This isn't aiming to be something big. It's just, more or less, a self contained story that serves as a tech demo for their art and writing, so it seems. If appreciated in that context, it's wonderful.So only 125 renders and already completed? Is it worth downloading?
No one, you're just a spectator or you could imagine yourself being in the shoes of Dave or Nathan or even Rebecca or Jen if youre gay , its up to youWho is the MC? Dave or Nathan?
So, it's to showcase the author's work. Will there be an actual MC in the next game?No one, you're just a spectator or you could imagine yourself being in the shoes of Dave or Nathan or even Rebecca or Jen if youre gay , its up to you
There are many visual nove/Sandbox games on the internet which do not have a android version. Luckily we can play the windows version of game right on Android using the app called "JioPlay". If you want to try it there's a link below just download and install it.will there be a android version?
Really glad you liked one of the storylinesThe Dave-Jessica storyline was better and more realistically written with the teasing and story flow being natural. Sadly the Nathan-Rebecca storyline went from 0-100 in no time and felt artificial... the tone felt jarring for those two and kind of gave me whiplash.
That's a pretty valid concern.From a STRICTLY "this is my personal taste" perspective, I'd be worried about how I (me, myself, as a player, with what I hope to experience in games) would feel about an expanded project with these characters, though. Because the idea of playing through their time in college, knowing those girls would not be available to me as per the relationship established in this story, it would mean any LI's I pursue would be temporary or hookups, and it would mean knowing the girls I was hoping for in the end would be having their own hookups.
But, again, that's a "me" issue, not a game issue, art issue, or story issue.
The hand-holding doesn't really signify anything sexual or romantic in the moment.renders are really nice ... story is not bad either .. 1 question tho .. why do you have the light haired guy holding hands with the dark haired guy's GF ? ... then have him having sex with the blonde ?
ok he don't have light hair . just went to check .. but it is his friends GF tho ... and yet the guy on the left has sex with the blonde .. woohoo
Yes, the next game will have a new character as an MCSo, it's to showcase the author's work. Will there be an actual MC in the next game?
Unfortunately, even as an alternate universe, you've established that these two relationships are what happens. Some people may pursue them regardless but quite a few will skip them.That's a pretty valid concern.
We don't know if it's the best solution for it, but we do have a plan to give the players a sense of wonder (and control) over the next story irrespective of what happened in 'Before you go'.
1. The upcoming game is more of an alternate universe, rather than a prequel. It explores the idea of "What if there was a 5th friend (MC) ? How different would their lives turn out to be?"
2. Jen and Rebecca will not be the main love interests of the story. There will be options to pursue Jen & Becca if the player wants, but the main love interests are a completely different set of characters.
Hopefully, this will allow the players to enjoy the game without worrying about the ending of 'Before you go'
Appreciate the insight into your thinking process! I kind of guessed that the limited writing space and the requirement of including a sex scene was the reason. From your thoughts about the matter and the way you approached the Dave-Jessica plot, I have complete confidence in your long form writing. Looking forward to your future works! Btw, have you thought about doing non-erotic games in the same vein? Like say a romance or comedy game? From your writing, I feel like you would be quite good at it.Really glad you liked one of the storylines
And I agree that the Nathan-Rebecca storyline does ask a lot from the players.
The "tl;dr" reason -> I wanted to give something to players who wanted some "action" in the game and I chose the 'Rebecca-Nathan' route to do that.
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When I first pitched this project, I told the artist this would be a very short game.
But when I finished the first version of the script, it felt like the erotic element was completely side-lined.
That did not sit well with me. (I mean, at the end of the day, this is an erotic game.)
However, I also felt that adding too many scenes in the last minute would be pretty selfish of me.
So, in order to give a decent length sex scene in the game (without increasing the number of renders), I chose to re-write the whole thing.
I decided to establish Rebecca and Nathan's characters & relationship through their little "argument" and hoped the players would infer and accept it as somewhat good enough reason for their actions.
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But, like I said, I fully get why their interaction might have felt jarring to some players.
Perhaps a more capable writer would have found a way to do that more naturally too. But I really did try my best to make it work with the limitations we had (set on ourselves).
However, I can guarantee the same problem will not exist in our next game, as it will be a long-running one - where we have enough space to let every relationship grow more naturally
Unfortunately, even as an alternate universe, you've established that these two relationships are what happens. Some people may pursue them regardless but quite a few will skip them.
I am glad you realize that and plan for there to be more love interests than these two. I don't see a need to play this game if it is incredibly short and it doesn't have any tie to your new game because you want it to be an alternate version of events. It would be better to just make it all in one world and that this is the way things end for these 4 people... Obviously just my opinion, look forward to seeing your next game.