VN Ren'Py Abandoned Behind The Closed Door [Ep. 1 v0.2] [LBW]

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Kukipett

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I dont like bushes as you dont know what you find in them (I am not joking).
There are bushes and bushes, sometimes it's the tropical jungle with high grass, a lot of bugs and sometimes you can even find some swampy grass with brownish goo around a dark wrinkled cavern hole.
But it can also be a nice trimmed grass patch with a fancy shape that gives a nice path to a moist valley full of lust!
 

boraxkarloff

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How to change the name of the MC?
You'll have to unren the .rpa file. Then in the scrirt file scroll down to "define B = Character("Paul", color="#3399CC")". Just change the name to whatever you want. You can do the same with the female character. Sorry, I don't know enough about Renpy to make a patch.
 
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Jash83

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It's an appealing start, albeit a bit rushed. The renders are, as mentioned, fantastic, except when Paul smiles and he looks completely derpy. The mom is just... *chef's kiss*. For once, we actually have the mother of a young adult man who actually looks like she could be his biological mother without having gotten pregnant when she was 12. The audio is nice- the music is completely generic (I'm pretty sure I heard it in another game not too long ago) but Mom's moaning when she masturbates was excellent.

Story's a bit shallow so far, Paul is a complete drip and the development of the relationship is a bit contrived (Mom is trying to comfort him about how there's plenty of fish in the sea and has to stop herself from saying she'd happily date him), but you don't expect Tolstoy from incest porn games. I'm wondering whether this is just going to be a short story kinetic novel about one night of forbidden passion that kicks off a taboo relationship, or whether it's going to be more slow-paced and spaced out over time. Either way, I'm keenly looking forward to future versions.

The fan-made incest patch has one problem, though- since it's basically a find-and-replace changing all instances of the mother's name to simply "Mom", I have no actual idea what her name is. That won't work for future versions when, presumably, characters other than Paul appear who need to address her by name, rather than calling her "Mom".
 

LBW

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Folks. Thank you for your appreciation and critique. I believe I should clarify a few things:

1. This was never meant to be an incest taboo game. It wasn’t designed with this in mind so any fan made patches will be useless. It will look weird and barely believable.
2. This game/VN was released more than a year ago exclusively on patreon. So it’s not new. It has been leaked here and pretty much everywhere online, a few days ago along with plenty of other content from my patreon page. But that’s another story. Sad story.
I mostly do short series and comics involving mature women and young men. It was a challenge for me at that time, to make a renpy visual novel (newbie programmer here) instead of a comic. This was supposed to be merely a demo, that’s why it’s so short and rushed. I never intended to monetize this “game” otherwise it would have been posted here by me, a long time ago.
3. The idea behind this visual novel was to have episodic content with pretty much no connection between episodes or characters. It wasn’t supposed to have a connected story, but mostly short erotic stories involving different characters, exploiting this subject of young guy-MILF/mature relationship. It isn’t supposed to have a main character, it’s basically that kind of novel where each character has its own story to tell, as you could see in the demo episode. It isn’t supposed to be that kind of game where some young dude gets his meat out of his pants and have the female so impressed by his size, saying “Oh, my God, you’re so big, bigger than my husband/father/grandfather. Let’s fuck!”. I’m more into eroticism than pornography so emotion is more important to me than the actual intercourse. I believe adult novels or games should be more about eroticism than pornography, but perhaps that’s just me. That’s why I put so much effort into facial expressions, and character design. I make my own models because I want the characters to be believable and unique.
4. There is a second episode planned, that hasn’t been completed so far, although I have more than 250 renders done and more than half an hour story. It’s been put on hold for now. The second episode, if I ever have the will to finish it will have two completely different characters. Here’s a preview down below:

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5. So. This novel is not necessarily abandoned, if there’s going to be enough interest into it, to justify my effort, I might work on it again, at some point. Even if I resume work, it won't have a monthly release, it's impossible. I felt I had to clarify this, I don’t want to sell you false promises. It is what it is.

So, thank you. Sincerely,
LBW
 
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punisher2099

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Folks. Thank you for your appreciation and critique. I believe I should clarify a few things:

1. This was never meant to be an incest taboo game. It wasn’t designed with this in mind so any fan made patches will be useless. It will look weird and barely believable.
2. This game/VN was released more than a year ago exclusively on patreon. So it’s not new. It has been leaked here and pretty much everywhere online, a few days ago along with plenty other content from my patreon page. But that’s another story. Sad story.
I mostly do short series or comics involving mature women and young men. It was a challenge for me at that time, to make a renpy visual novel (newbie programmer here) instead of a comic. This was supposed to be merely a demo, that’s why it’s so short and rushed. I never intended to monetize this “game” otherwise it would have been posted here by me, a long time ago.
3. The idea behind this visual novel was to have episodic content with pretty much no connection between episodes or characters. It wasn’t supposed to have a connected story, but mostly short erotic stories involving different characters, exploiting this subject of young guy-MILF/mature relationship. It isn’t supposed to have a main character, it’s basically that kind of novel where each character has its own story to tell, as you could see in the demo episode. It isn’t supposed to be that kind of game where some young dude gets his meat out of his pants and have the female so impressed by his size, saying “Oh, my God, you’re so big, bigger than my husband/father/grandfather. Let’s fuck!”. I’m more into eroticism than pornography so emotion is more important to me than the actual intercourse. I believe adult novels or games should be more about eroticism than pornography, but perhaps that’s just me. That’s why I put so much effort into facial expressions, and character design. I make my own models because I want the characters to be believable.
4. There is a second episode planned, that hasn’t been completed so far, although I have more than 250 renders done and more than half an hour story. It’s been put on hold for now. The second episode, if I ever have the will to finish it will have two completely different characters. Here’s a preview down below:

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5. So. This novel is not necessarily abandoned, if there’s going to be enough interest into it, to justify my effort, I might work on it again, at some point. Even if I resume work it won't have a monthly release, it's impossible. I felt I had to clarify this, I don’t want to sell you false promises. It is what it is.

So, thank you. Sincerely,
LBW
Well I will say this you sure know how to make milfs actual milfs...scrumptious milfs at that.
 

Canto Forte

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This is the reason most guys and gurls use their eyes wide shut when kissing ... you cannot have the most intimate deep caressing yummy gorgeous kiss to last a life time if you are trying to look your babe in the face.

For all your Adonis nonsensical self serving mockery, you have mirrors and you do not have ta give your wonderful babe any inside view of your insecurities.

If this is what I look like when kissing someone, then please just kill me now.

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Folks. Thank you for your appreciation and critique. I believe I should clarify a few things:

1. This was never meant to be an incest taboo game. It wasn’t designed with this in mind so any fan made patches will be useless. It will look weird and barely believable.
2. This game/VN was released more than a year ago exclusively on patreon. So it’s not new. It has been leaked here and pretty much everywhere online, a few days ago along with plenty other content from my patreon page. But that’s another story. Sad story.
I mostly do short series or comics involving mature women and young men. It was a challenge for me at that time, to make a renpy visual novel (newbie programmer here) instead of a comic. This was supposed to be merely a demo, that’s why it’s so short and rushed. I never intended to monetize this “game” otherwise it would have been posted here by me, a long time ago.
3. The idea behind this visual novel was to have episodic content with pretty much no connection between episodes or characters. It wasn’t supposed to have a connected story, but mostly short erotic stories involving different characters, exploiting this subject of young guy-MILF/mature relationship. It isn’t supposed to have a main character, it’s basically that kind of novel where each character has its own story to tell, as you could see in the demo episode. It isn’t supposed to be that kind of game where some young dude gets his meat out of his pants and have the female so impressed by his size, saying “Oh, my God, you’re so big, bigger than my husband/father/grandfather. Let’s fuck!”. I’m more into eroticism than pornography so emotion is more important to me than the actual intercourse. I believe adult novels or games should be more about eroticism than pornography, but perhaps that’s just me. That’s why I put so much effort into facial expressions, and character design. I make my own models because I want the characters to be believable.
4. There is a second episode planned, that hasn’t been completed so far, although I have more than 250 renders done and more than half an hour story. It’s been put on hold for now. The second episode, if I ever have the will to finish it will have two completely different characters. Here’s a preview down below:

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5. So. This novel is not necessarily abandoned, if there’s going to be enough interest into it, to justify my effort, I might work on it again, at some point. Even if I resume work, it won't have a monthly release, it's impossible. I felt I had to clarify this, I don’t want to sell you false promises. It is what it is.

So, thank you. Sincerely,
LBW
Dev, whenever you feel like coming full circle and giving your chars a good send off, or some adventure to stimulate their blood flow and win them some fans in the process, please, do so at your immediate leisure and in good time. Hardship is in this world even outside your game. No need to contribute to the drama. Still: helping a couple a gamers unwind off the havy life stuff is worth it.
 
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joker1932

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Folks. Thank you for your appreciation and critique. I believe I should clarify a few things:

1. This was never meant to be an incest taboo game. It wasn’t designed with this in mind so any fan made patches will be useless. It will look weird and barely believable.
2. This game/VN was released more than a year ago exclusively on patreon. So it’s not new. It has been leaked here and pretty much everywhere online, a few days ago along with plenty of other content from my patreon page. But that’s another story. Sad story.
I mostly do short series and comics involving mature women and young men. It was a challenge for me at that time, to make a renpy visual novel (newbie programmer here) instead of a comic. This was supposed to be merely a demo, that’s why it’s so short and rushed. I never intended to monetize this “game” otherwise it would have been posted here by me, a long time ago.
3. The idea behind this visual novel was to have episodic content with pretty much no connection between episodes or characters. It wasn’t supposed to have a connected story, but mostly short erotic stories involving different characters, exploiting this subject of young guy-MILF/mature relationship. It isn’t supposed to have a main character, it’s basically that kind of novel where each character has its own story to tell, as you could see in the demo episode. It isn’t supposed to be that kind of game where some young dude gets his meat out of his pants and have the female so impressed by his size, saying “Oh, my God, you’re so big, bigger than my husband/father/grandfather. Let’s fuck!”. I’m more into eroticism than pornography so emotion is more important to me than the actual intercourse. I believe adult novels or games should be more about eroticism than pornography, but perhaps that’s just me. That’s why I put so much effort into facial expressions, and character design. I make my own models because I want the characters to be believable and unique.
4. There is a second episode planned, that hasn’t been completed so far, although I have more than 250 renders done and more than half an hour story. It’s been put on hold for now. The second episode, if I ever have the will to finish it will have two completely different characters. Here’s a preview down below:

View attachment 1371718

View attachment 1371719

5. So. This novel is not necessarily abandoned, if there’s going to be enough interest into it, to justify my effort, I might work on it again, at some point. Even if I resume work, it won't have a monthly release, it's impossible. I felt I had to clarify this, I don’t want to sell you false promises. It is what it is.

So, thank you. Sincerely,
LBW
thanks for sharing for free your wonderful work... so artistic work...
 
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